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Wow I'm good? that's cool. I work on story writing a lot so i get used to it, i'll post another one later on.
come on TEM dont be rude, New members is a much better term than Noob. come on try to be a little nicer....... * puppy dog eyes* ...please?
It's a good storyline but like KHTK said be more descriptive. Watch out people, the new age rpers are coming with tips from the great shuginator.
i just want all of you who post here know, that if you turn one of the ideas you post here into a rp, i will join, even if nobody else does, so you will at least have one person, but from what i have seen you guys wont need any help with people join, if they are to stupid to join one of your stories, then they are morons. just leting you all know that.
Here is a currently running rp idea of mine:
The Red Queen
Many years ago, there was a woman ruler by the name of Elizabeth Bathory. This woman was like no other. She had a strong will and a most interesting belief. This belief would lead her and her realm into legend.
For 200 years, the Queen has had dominion over her land. She has found what all others have failed to do. She has discovered the proverbial Fountain of Youth. However, it is in a place no others even dreamed it could be. It is not in a floral paradise, nor hidden dep beneath the Earth. You are near it everyday, and it courses within you.
It is your blood.
The Queen, in her studies, discovered that blood was an extremely powerful restorative, especially those of young virgins. She believes that virgins are the most immaculate creatures on the Earth, their minds and bodies untainted by the touch of others. The Queen showers, bathes and drinks the blood of virgins, going so far as to kidnap young girls from a nearby villag and slaughtering coutless women for their blood.
This has earned her the title of "The Red Queen".
The villagers are terrified. They have called out to the neighboring lands, pleading for help. They fear that with every drop of blood she takes in, the Queen's occult prowess increases.
The Red Queen
Many years ago, there was a woman ruler by the name of Elizabeth Bathory. This woman was like no other. She had a strong will and a most interesting belief. This belief would lead her and her realm into legend.
For 200 years, the Queen has had dominion over her land. She has found what all others have failed to do. She has discovered the proverbial Fountain of Youth. However, it is in a place no others even dreamed it could be. It is not in a floral paradise, nor hidden dep beneath the Earth. You are near it everyday, and it courses within you.
It is your blood.
The Queen, in her studies, discovered that blood was an extremely powerful restorative, especially those of young virgins. She believes that virgins are the most immaculate creatures on the Earth, their minds and bodies untainted by the touch of others. The Queen showers, bathes and drinks the blood of virgins, going so far as to kidnap young girls from a nearby villag and slaughtering coutless women for their blood.
This has earned her the title of "The Red Queen".
The villagers are terrified. They have called out to the neighboring lands, pleading for help. They fear that with every drop of blood she takes in, the Queen's occult prowess increases.
Nice, it's too late to join though and i'm too lazy to reado sometimes. But good rp idea Nightfire.
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i agree with shugy, Good storyline by the great Nightfire.
wow tht sound like a well kwl story line lol dont suppose its already a game(lol)
i would so go and buy it
i would so go and buy itoops sorry jus blank my comments out i dont think im ment to be here soz
alright here goes, a diffrent version of my story the high life, i have made it a little bit better with some help.
The High Life ( a WYA and Thaniloan production)
............Yoh asakura shook as the cold air blew into the cargo hold of the plane. the doors cracked open. he smiled and looked out across the land. he smiled knwoing somwhere down there was a town that desperatley needed his help. he glanced over at his fellow GI and close Friend. he patted him on the back as the light turned green, clearing them for jump. he fell forward as the air began to pick up speed around his body, he felt like a bullet being fired out of a freshly cleaned rifle. he fell towards the earth at an alraming speed. it felt as if he was being ripped apart. he pulled his clip seconds later, releaseing his chute and allowing him to float safley to the ground with out being hurt." Delta platoon do you copy, we are coming in hot, signs of rifle fire down near the ground, is everything ok?" he fell towards the Earth and realized that the very town they had been sent to take was under attack. he grinned knowing that he had just been bullshited into another mission by command. it was supposed to be a safe zone. he had been briefed wrong.
............he hit the ground running and tumbled into a nearby foxhole. he found dead soldiers everywhere around him. he wasn't sure what had happened to his friend, all he knew was that he had been dropped into a hot landing zone, and he would have to fight his way out if he had any hope of taking the town. he crouched down and set his sniper rifle on the mound in front of him, scouting out the area, making sure there were no troops near by. a half a mile away he could see explosions and hear gunshots in the town. it was now his duty to protect and help defend the tow nafter he took it back. it looked to be another rough day at the office.....
you are a soldier in the army, you are either on the alleids side or the enemy side, it is your decision that will make or break the war, so go ahead and choose, but choose wisely....you never know what is going to happen next in a war...
this rp is open for enrolling join now if you want to.
The High Life ( a WYA and Thaniloan production)
............Yoh asakura shook as the cold air blew into the cargo hold of the plane. the doors cracked open. he smiled and looked out across the land. he smiled knwoing somwhere down there was a town that desperatley needed his help. he glanced over at his fellow GI and close Friend. he patted him on the back as the light turned green, clearing them for jump. he fell forward as the air began to pick up speed around his body, he felt like a bullet being fired out of a freshly cleaned rifle. he fell towards the earth at an alraming speed. it felt as if he was being ripped apart. he pulled his clip seconds later, releaseing his chute and allowing him to float safley to the ground with out being hurt." Delta platoon do you copy, we are coming in hot, signs of rifle fire down near the ground, is everything ok?" he fell towards the Earth and realized that the very town they had been sent to take was under attack. he grinned knowing that he had just been bullshited into another mission by command. it was supposed to be a safe zone. he had been briefed wrong.
............he hit the ground running and tumbled into a nearby foxhole. he found dead soldiers everywhere around him. he wasn't sure what had happened to his friend, all he knew was that he had been dropped into a hot landing zone, and he would have to fight his way out if he had any hope of taking the town. he crouched down and set his sniper rifle on the mound in front of him, scouting out the area, making sure there were no troops near by. a half a mile away he could see explosions and hear gunshots in the town. it was now his duty to protect and help defend the tow nafter he took it back. it looked to be another rough day at the office.....
you are a soldier in the army, you are either on the alleids side or the enemy side, it is your decision that will make or break the war, so go ahead and choose, but choose wisely....you never know what is going to happen next in a war...
this rp is open for enrolling join now if you want to.
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(OCC: I take all the credit for that, it was all my idea. lmao)
ooc: what? like hell it was. lol,
(OCC: i can try can't i?)
yeah but i was wondering if you guys liked it.
Well, if i was going to steal your idea then i must've liked it
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I just had an idea.......then I lost it.....damn.
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I've had to ideas in one day, yay me!
Ray of Hope
Storyline:
Humans and Demons lived together in the same world, peacefully for years. They learned to live together, and even love each other, or so it seems that way. There are some who opposed of humans and demons that had feelings for each other, the thought of a human/demon offspring frightened many people. Some humans despised demons and there are demons that despised humans as well.
One night, a town was attacked, blood shed was everywhere, buildings were demolished, when the the town fell silent, bodies were everywhere, bodies of humans, not a single demon was found dead, the humans realized that the demons were all behind this. The demons have planned this for a long time, they're plan was to make peace with the humans, gain their trust, and when it was the right time, the demons struck, catching the humans off guard.
Each town fell to the demons and eventually the demons had taken control of the world. The humans were helpless and has lost hope, they were captured and were forced as slaves. It seems that the demons have won and the humans has lost, but there are a few humans that have been hiding, scattered around the world that rebel against the demons, they are the human's last hope in order to bring down the demons. Can they bring down the demons and free the humans from the chains of slavery?
Final Fantasy XIII (part one)
According to legend, there once was a ferocious battle that was played out. It was a war, like all the others, between Gaia and Hairo. The leaders of each side held vast armies at their disposal and this war decided the fate of both worlds. Since that time, this war has been played out countless times. Each time resulting in Hairo's victory, and the destruction of the weak. The outcome of the original war was never found however and we may never know. The war is to be played out once again, this time by young and ruthless. The outcome is unsure, but the end draws near.
There is a universe in which two worlds are connected. They are connected by the force of a vortex. Neither world is superior to the other. But that doesn’t stop the people from thinking they are superior to one another. The world closer to the sun is called Hairo, while the other is called Gaia. On Gaia there exist humans, orcs and many types of animals. On Hairo however there are only people of the elven descent. The racial difference is what has caused the dissension among the worlds. The general populace however, is not able to fight in major battles however, because of their ineptness. It’s up to a few individuals to do the fighting for them. These individuals are known as the elementals. Each possessing the power to reach a higher form of power by bursts of anger. The elements are thus: fire, water, earth, air, light, darkness, lightning and ice.
The future is never on a set path. Of course, fate plays a role in the future. But, there are always two paths in which the future can unfold. Neither path is right or wrong. It's simply a matter of opinion.There comes a time when one has to choose between what they believe is right for the people and what is right for the world. This is the choice that 16 individuals had to decide upon.
Ray of Hope
Storyline:
Humans and Demons lived together in the same world, peacefully for years. They learned to live together, and even love each other, or so it seems that way. There are some who opposed of humans and demons that had feelings for each other, the thought of a human/demon offspring frightened many people. Some humans despised demons and there are demons that despised humans as well.
One night, a town was attacked, blood shed was everywhere, buildings were demolished, when the the town fell silent, bodies were everywhere, bodies of humans, not a single demon was found dead, the humans realized that the demons were all behind this. The demons have planned this for a long time, they're plan was to make peace with the humans, gain their trust, and when it was the right time, the demons struck, catching the humans off guard.
Each town fell to the demons and eventually the demons had taken control of the world. The humans were helpless and has lost hope, they were captured and were forced as slaves. It seems that the demons have won and the humans has lost, but there are a few humans that have been hiding, scattered around the world that rebel against the demons, they are the human's last hope in order to bring down the demons. Can they bring down the demons and free the humans from the chains of slavery?
Final Fantasy XIII (part one)
According to legend, there once was a ferocious battle that was played out. It was a war, like all the others, between Gaia and Hairo. The leaders of each side held vast armies at their disposal and this war decided the fate of both worlds. Since that time, this war has been played out countless times. Each time resulting in Hairo's victory, and the destruction of the weak. The outcome of the original war was never found however and we may never know. The war is to be played out once again, this time by young and ruthless. The outcome is unsure, but the end draws near.
There is a universe in which two worlds are connected. They are connected by the force of a vortex. Neither world is superior to the other. But that doesn’t stop the people from thinking they are superior to one another. The world closer to the sun is called Hairo, while the other is called Gaia. On Gaia there exist humans, orcs and many types of animals. On Hairo however there are only people of the elven descent. The racial difference is what has caused the dissension among the worlds. The general populace however, is not able to fight in major battles however, because of their ineptness. It’s up to a few individuals to do the fighting for them. These individuals are known as the elementals. Each possessing the power to reach a higher form of power by bursts of anger. The elements are thus: fire, water, earth, air, light, darkness, lightning and ice.
The future is never on a set path. Of course, fate plays a role in the future. But, there are always two paths in which the future can unfold. Neither path is right or wrong. It's simply a matter of opinion.There comes a time when one has to choose between what they believe is right for the people and what is right for the world. This is the choice that 16 individuals had to decide upon.
I like the first one a lil more....but both are good
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