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Fanfiction ► Pyromaniac - Axel
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right forgot to say please leave comments or reviews, opinions bla, bla, bla
thnx i'll write the next chaptr soon
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to tell the truth those 2 chapters were actually one, but I thought it was too long
This is one of the best fan fics i've read in a while. Keep up the good job and great chapter.
thnx the next chapter should be up tomorrow
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i really like this. ha i used to hate axle but i gotta admit hes pretty awsome. keep going.
yeah i'll try to post next chapter either later tonite or probably tomorrow
it's pretty good, but axel and saix are VERY out of character. Axel is a little too serious one second, and a smart aleck the other, which isnt like him. and then , and Saix is too emotional, and doesn't have the poise he should.
other than that, your desriptions are lovely, and it's a nice fic.
other than that, your desriptions are lovely, and it's a nice fic.
good fic and very good battle discription.
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dude, this is seriuslty my fav fan fiction.mostly because axel is my all time #1 fav character.i printed the first three chapters and they are now in my room where i can read them whenever i want.
Yes, an Axel fanfic! I am definitely reading this! I really like your descriptions. You're a awesome writer! I hope that the next chapter gets up soon =)! BTW, I hope that the other org. appear to, that would be pretty sweet! I love the organization XIII!
Your a great writer, I really like this one!
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dude, its awesome!!!u should seriusly get these published! i cant wait for chapter 5.when is it coming?and when is the next chapter for one side one destiny coming?
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wow,this is amazing. Like I said before, I lkove Axel! Roxas is up there, too. I can't wait to see what happens next. You are an awesome writer!
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