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xx kairi xx

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lol, i seem to be making quite a few lately. its fun :lol:
this is the first time iv gone for this style so advice would be appreciated. sooo can u CnC please? ^_^



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made another one lol

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lol as promised C'n'C lol.
Personally I like it. Yasmin says: "It should say the one the only Sonic..." lol
I no you didn't have the right tools or anything with the flames, but it would be cool if they were kinda transparant so you could see part of Sonic through it :p
Other than that I can't see anything.
 

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I can see you have the right idea going for it but... I think it needs more similars. And it needs to be a bit softer too. Try changing it to mostly red/orange/yellows for now, and try smudging/blurring the left hand side, most of it. and the text probably should be a bit more plain too
 

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Well okay, to start off not bad..i definitely see the parts that is sorta empty mostly the text seems slight adjustments, and the flow is a little off, try doing what BB suggested and smudge, and lower the capacity of the brushes or what ever effect you used..its not bad..you definitely got potential..keep at it..^^
 

xx kairi xx

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yh , i know what you mean about the text. i didnt think it was quite right either so ill definitly work on it. ahhh stupid smudging lol, i find it so difficult to do that but ill try and blend them more =) thanks for ur advice XD

...i made another one too. here i think im addicted to making them lol
 

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I think you should try to use colours that matches the stock more.. Also some more blue :3 And I don't really like the text either. Can't really point out what's wrong with it, but it looks like something is missing.

Other than that, you did an ok job.
 
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