sure, ok
Name: Kriss
Age: 21
Height: 6”2
Weight: 273 Lbs.
Race: Vampire
Appearance: He has pale-white skin and really buff. He wears a black and white checkered Jacket. A a black shirt underneath that. Spiked shoulder pads are worn on his shoulders and they are infused with a deadly poison. His eyes are dark blue, and his hair is short but black. Kriss has very shard pointed teeth and sharp nails both are also infused with the poison. Black jeans and black shoes are worn on his lower half.
Personality: Irritable and very strange.
Moves: Acid slash: Kriss can use ether his claws or his shoulder pads to slash his opponent and it drips the poison into the opponent as he slashes them.
Hellfire: Kriss rises up his arms and the flames of hell come from the ground underneath his opponent.
Ice spear: Kriss forms a spear made of pure ice and he can use this to attack or defend.
Thunder wave: Kriss summons the power of lightning to his hands and then swings them relentlessly toward his opponent making huge waves of thunder.
Vampire breath: Kriss takes in a deep breath and then exhales a deadly poisonous fog.
Iron hand: Kriss’s hands start to glow and then his hands turn to iron.
Wall of defense: Kriss can form a wall off ether lightning, ice, fire, or iron to defend himself.
Theme song: Hells Bells by AC/DC
Well, I suppose I should start my judging duties early to prevent any confusion later in the fight.
Firstly, how are his nails and teeth infused with poison? Is he immune to his own poison? You did not specify that he was, meaning that if you based a decision off your template, any minor injury that chips a nail or tooth could easily lead to his own demise.
Second, how does Kriss summon the flames of Hell? You have given no background to shed light on this. Even if you are implying Hell is just another point accessible below the Earth, it would take deep concentration, and an obscenely large amount of time to pull this of, rendering it an unwise and impractical attack.
How does Kriss create this ice spear? Does he possess the ability to freeze the water particles in the air and manipulate their shape to form a spear? You have not specified he has the ability to do such things. Also, the spear would be very cold to the touch, and prolonged use would make his hands go numb fairly quickly.
How does he summon lightning in his hands? Lighting can travel up to 60,000 miles per second, possibly more, and would incinerate Kriss the moment it made contact with him. How does he make huge "waves" of thunder? Thunder is the sound created by lighting. Are you attacking your opponent with sound?
You also claim that he can breathe in and then exhale a poisonous fog. Since he has to inhale first, you seem to be implying that he is getting the poison from something outside of his body. This returns to one of my first questions, where I was unsure of whether or not he was immune to his own poison. Since you have neglected to specify this, any time you use this attack, you would die. And if your opponent broke Kriss' tooth or a nail, the poison would enter your bloodstream, and kill you.
You have also neglected to explain any logical way that Kriss' hand can turn into iron. Why does his hand glow first? An iron hand would be extremely heavy, and slow you down tremendously.
Once again, you provide no logical explanation as to why you would be able to create these walls. You can not control lighting better than any other character, judging by your template. It would immediately kill you. You could not make a wall of it, because that implies it would stay in one place, which even stretches beyond the limits of fantasy in a fight such as this.
Like I said, just helping out!
Chat with you guys later! :57: