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Looking at what you've got, seems to lack the essentials of blending. Font you could survive without, feels like you just put this together in the approximation of five-ten minutes man'g. Dark and sharp would help, but just doing more work in general is what i recommend.
In so many words, it puts me to sleep (over saying the b-word)