Lelouch Lamperouge

[Jaesung]

Criticize away.

 

[Nutari]

Not bad. Seems pretty basic. Nice text :3 There isn't much to critique, it seems really simple, which is good, but you know.

 

[Jaesung]

I was thinking of doing a color dodged bar for the text, but I guess it slipped my mind.
The tutorial that helped me with this gave me so much advise for render only stocks.

 

[Nutari]

Yeah, don't worry about it, you're still learning. So am I for that matter. Keep at it!

 

[King Sora X]

Two things bother me. The border and FHS. Remove or alter the border in some way. FHS(Floating Head Syndrome), does not look good. I would recommend cropping Lelouch to where it's not so FHS.

 

[Jaesung]

You can still see his upper torso though.
I'll keep that in mind. I'll try to make my tags less slim, so i can fit more of the render.