KIRBY!!!!

[Dark Master]

meh latest, made this for the remake competition

CnC

Wanted to see what it looked like in B&W so i tried it lol

 

[Tenyas]

I like it. A little bright though, and the contrast is a little high.

 

[Lolita]

You should do some effects around Kirby because it looks like a background with the picture slapped on. Text should be fixed or go, imo. Also, play with colors. The colors of the background don't really go with the stock's color imo.

 

[Dark Master]

I like it. A little bright though, and the contrast is a little high.

You should do some effects around Kirby because it looks like a background with the picture slapped on. Text should be fixed or go, imo. Also, play with colors. The colors of the background don't really go with the stock's color imo.

thanks for the Cnc. so basically this sig is epic fail?

i just tried something new on it that i hadnt done before lol

 

[Tenyas]

It's good for a new style, just not Epic. ^.^

 

[Lolita]

it's not epic fail. take the criticism and try to learn from it on your next try, or try fixing the things you need or want to fix. it's not epic fail if you try to fix it, but if you don't, it's not really, either. it's just not the best.

 

[Tenyas]

Black and white seems bland thanks to the simple lines. That sort of effect only works with more complex works. I'd stick with Color for Kirby sigs.

 

[Lolita]

The black and white version seems more flat and the text should go since it's so faint. Try adding a radial gradient of red or pink or a nice, strong color to make something pop out. Well that's what I do in a black and white signature. :/ color scheme you could say is better than the first version, i guess.

 

[Tenyas]

Keep practicing and you'll definately improve on the new style.

 

[Charlemagne]

I'd work on the right side a little bit. It seems like it's missing some luster, you know.

 

[Dark Master]

thanks for the advice guys

anyone else?

 

[Kazuma]

ewww not you best at all, remake or not it's like you thrown out all your fundamentals. Very flat and copy and pasty