Fanfiction ► ~In the Darkness Bind Them~

[Taokitty]

The writing's style is okay!=^_^= Awsome update, by the way! Though, some of it confused me, for I am not sure of what part I am to grasp to know what the main plot was??@_@ Most likely that one part about them being heartless... Though, I'm confused, they're not the organization, right? No, they aren't... I think... I'm going to read Ansem's reports later on today...xD

 

[Anonymous]

Oh... major typo...

I'd better fix it

Err... if I fix it the plot might be a bit more clear xD

EDIT- okay, check around the first paragraph and you'll see the missing... err... paragraph or so that should shed a tiny amount of light.

 

[Taokitty]

xD Thank you for fixing that! It helps a lot!=^_^=

 

[Gamergirl]

hmm . . .is it just me or does sound like something ripped out of harry potter--where the group members talk about the coming of their old leader----coughcoughvoldemortandhisdeatheaterscoughcough-----i not sayin its a bad thing, just somethin i noticed. anywayz i liked it. i don't think anyone has written anything by the nobodies' real selves point of view. and its odd how the story goes from riku&namine to Ienzo and the others

 

[Anonymous]

Harry Potter?
I read the books, but not for about a year...
But, wow... it actually does remind me of that... but obviously I didn't copy it.

Real selves? Err... heartless forms is what these people were.

There is a point to this part...
In fact the Riku/Namine part was just a prequel, really.
For a couple of chapters the story will focus around these people.

 

[Taokitty]

I am very content with the fact other people are aware of that heartless can be intulectual beings! ^^

 

[Anonymous]

Err... Ansem from KH1 for example...
I am pretty sure they can be...

 

[Taokitty]

I know! >.< Though some people may not think he is a heartless though...o.o Despite the fact he wears the sign of it...>.>

 

[Anonymous]

They said it in the game!
...Didn't they? xD

Anyway, now that I'm back writing, I should be able to get the next chapter up in a week or two... (Hey, I am kinda busy!)

 

[Taokitty]

YAY!=^_^=( *Oblivious to the fact some people may consider that a long time!*xD... I'm used to waiting for updates from all the fics I read! xD)

'Tie shall be waiting!(... Don't ask about the,"T," thing...=D )

 

[Anonymous]

Err... bump?
I'm hoping to get a review... (no, not from you tao xD)

Maybe I'll ask around, or else people will see this...
Please respond even if its horrible!

 

[Taokitty]

xD I would say something but it would be out of stupidity... Well, I hope more people will come! ;-;