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I like it a lot, and how Ven actually looks like he fits there. The colors are good and I see those pen lines you made on his Keyblade's teeth.
For the lighting:
We can see in the render that the light is coming from the top to middle right. I drew the arrows to show how the light would affect those areas and Ven. But then there's also a lesser light source to his left, which you've already got down with the red C4Ds.
Anyways, I think it's a great piece, just with some lighting missing. That's all. Everything else is perfect.
It really aggravates me to no end.
Probably have to do some serious TF2 to calm myself down.
the flow is a little fucked up tooooooooo man.