Hoop Act (First try at Gymnastic Pose)

[MelodiousNymph]

:/

I was going to post this somewhere else, but what the hey, it is KH-related.

I drew this a few hours ago. Very first time I drew anyone in this pose. :/

It's sort-of fanart for Mad-TopHat-Ter's KH fanfic 'When the Circus Came to Town'. I haven't read it much yet, mainly because 1.) there's yaoi (which I don't support at all), and 2.) it inspired a circus fic I'm writing but I don't want to be an idea stealer, so phfeh. >_>

Anyways, 'tis Demyx and Larxene. In a circus. Doing a weird circus-y act. :3

WTCCTT: Hoop Act by ~NatureTheZafara on deviantART

Please give constructive critisicm, it might help me when I make drawings like this again.

 

[paoupu girl]

wow, that is pretty cool.
It's.... different.... (Different, in a good way, though)
I like it ^^

 

[dr.korytco]

This is not so bad, the subject is confusing so people have a harder time giving you feed back

 

[RuffPuff]

O_O

Thats a little bit weird, lol. In a good way.

 

[Salty the Hero]

Nice job, although it looks kinda weird, lol.