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dr.korytco

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Ok, so I am in design classes for college. We are not allowed to use color on this one.I just started design so mercy please.
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Anyone have any thoughts on this one? Its not entirely finished yet.
 
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Thanks but I am getting murdered on yahoo answers so far. Any suggestions would be really beneficial .Honesty is the best medicine .
 

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That looks great so far :)

But I think something needs to be added to the lower right.
Because something is bugging my eye about that part, like it isn't balanced or something.

But it's up to you, because I'm not quite sure. So, good luck :)
 

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It is book cover design for a famous designer. Thank you all for your comments. There is a lot of talent here.
 

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Reposting it over and over won't help.

Besides from that: what do you want it to represent? Or does it need to be abstract? So, what is the assignment?
 

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Hmmm. Like Cicero said, is it supposed to be abstract and what is the assignment exactly. I mean, are there any rules you need to follow? But anyway, it looks great, but I do think some of the edges should be feathered out but it all you have is something like MS paint then I don't see anything wrong with it. But one thing that bugs me in the slightest is that right below the face, where the white line is, there are little strands of dark that should be erased ^.^ Good luck.
 

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Put... something... in the lower left corner. >> The white space is bothering me.

Other than that, it looks just fine to me. o.o
 

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Thanks again everyone. Your opinions were very helpful.

This is a book cover design so alot of that negative space was filled in with text.
 
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That looks great so far :)

But I think something needs to be added to the lower right.
Because something is bugging my eye about that part, like it isn't balanced or something.

But it's up to you, because I'm not quite sure. So, good luck :)

Put... something... in the lower left corner. >> The white space is bothering me.

Other than that, it looks just fine to me. o.o

OMYGAWD THAT'S WHAT I MEANT D:

I can't tell my lefts and rights... wows.
 
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