Fanfiction ► 'Break Away' a KH fanfiction

[Audo]

Hi this is my first time writing a fanfic EVER
So it may suck but i would appreciate it if you would read it.
Here is what the story is about so far

Title:Break Away
Main Characters:
Riku Masaki-16
Naminé Soule-16
Sora Harada-15
Kairi Rian-15
Selphie Laraway-16
Chapter 1 Pairings:
Sora/Kairi
Chapter 1 Warnings:
Romance. Sexual Humor I suppose

Here it is:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475807/1/
Please tell em what you think.

 

[Darkness Princess]

Its nice... I like it. hope you post more soon,

 

[Audo]

Hey thanks! Im working on Chapter Two right now actually.

 

[cAlLmEmIcHeRs]

I like your story a lot! I can't wait 'till the next chapter! ^^-

 

[darkriku14]

I like it. hurry up and post the 2nd chapter! ^_^

 

[Genocide]

I proofread it, but the parts I did read are actually good. Why do all my fanfics suck? Go read mine after reading this one and see how sucky mine is.

 

[Audo]

Oops forgot to update.
Chapter Two is up! (and has been for like a week)
im working on Chapter Three Now.
Well here is Chapter Two. Tell me what you tinhk. Also if you could leave a review on that site i would be sooooo greatful. once finished reading scroll down to the bottom and in the bottom left select submit review. press go and write a review then press submit. PLEASE DO THIS
Here it is:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475807/2/

 

[keybladeking]

I realy liked the chapter cant wait for the next.

 

[keybladeking]

hey not to be rood, but when are you goink to write the next chapter.

 

[Audo]

Chapter Three?
Im writing it right now. Im getting onto page 8

 

[keybladeking]

ok! that great

 

[Audo]

Here is chapter three
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2475807/3/

 

[keybladeking]

that was a great story i cant want till the next

 

[zero_cool]

are you done with 4 yet plz tell me u r i bet sora likes namine and him and riku are gonna fight fdor her

 

[Audo]

no i just finished Chapter three. and i just wrote three sentecnes of Chapter Four.
Good guess thiough.

EDIT: Break Away has been cancelled until further notice

 

[zero_cool]

WTF why what happened

 

[keybladeking]

WTF why what happened

who is WTF

 

[Audo]

HA HA.
That was one funny comment KKing.
Break Away is not cancelled anymore.

 

[zero_cool]

Great thankgod so arer you almost gone

 

[keybladeking]

HA HA.
That was one funny comment KKing.
Break Away is not cancelled anymore.

thankyou. but my brother did it EDIT:my Brother did not no what it ment. so he posted it.