Rena is really uncertain, it's kind of cute^^ And I wonder what happen? And what is Rena doing? Nice chapter!
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Thankies for the comment! WHEEEEE FOR MORE CONFUSING STUFFS 8D I'll let the new chapters explain the stuff involving Rena and why she doesn't want to go to Hollow Bastion. Those things actually all have to do with her, though... but not specifically with her reason for not wanting to go to HBWhat the hell just happened? What was that explosion and black fog? Where did Rena run off to now? Man, this is getting crazy, but, then again, it was already crazy to begin with. So, from what I gathered, Rena is afraid to go to Hollow Bastion either because she cannot fight, because she is afraid of Aoi and the other nobodies, or becuase she doesn't want the other to find out that she is a nobody herself. Well, at least that's what it seems like, but I could be wrong. Anyway, great job again, and I look forward to more.
Thankies for the comment! Yaaaaaay for cute xD;Rena is really uncertain, it's kind of cute^^ And I wonder what happen? And what is Rena doing? Nice chapter!
Thankies for the comment! Oh gosh, I didn't realize that I had left so many things unanswered! Ack! XD; I hope this bit makes things less confusing... but if it doesn't, let me know and I'll try to answer everything that won't be answered in a chapter.I think I am just as confused as Rena... I really don't get it anymore^^ That's not necessarily bad. For the story it is good to build up suspense. As a reader I just want to know what the heck is going on! ^^ Oh, and Aoi really messed her up, didn't he? She has no confidence at all, it's quite sad. And it proves he is the perfect psycho! ^^
Thankies for the comment! AHHHH IT IS CONFUSING. *headdesk* Sorries! D: Like I said to Lectori, let me know if there's anything unanswered in this chapter... I'll try my best to explain it if it won't be answered in a chapter! I hope this chapter answers some (or all!) of your questions! Except that mysterious person question. :d That won't be answered specifically until a WHIIIIIIIIIIIIILE later. 8D; They're definitely not her Nobody, though!What the hell just happened?!?! Is Rena dead? Did the Heartless take her heart? Who was the mysterious person who attacked her? It sounded a lot like they were Rena's nobody, but that doesn't sound right considering that you already said Rena is already a nobody. Man, this is really getting crazy and confusing now. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
Thankies for the comment! And YAY FOR IT BEING NASTY... or not. Ack. I don't think I'll put something like that in PoH again. XD; I feel bad for putting it in, but it's almost like it needed to be there... I hope you don't have nightmares! DD: *gives cookie*Okay, the part where Heartless Rena tried to rip out Ven's heart was really nasty. Just picturing Ven with a gaint hole in his chest with blood oozing from it made me shudder; I'm probably going to have nightmares about that now, but maybe not. Now, I really want to ask you this question, are Rena and Ven nobodies or not? I ask because you say Ven is Roxas, and Roxas is a nobody, but those two have hearts, and nobodies aren't supposed to have hearts because they would be normal people if they did. I'm just kind of confused as to what Ven and Rena really are. Oh well, I'm sure all will be revealed in due time. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to the next update.
Thankies for the comment! I feel bad for Rena about the confidence thing XD; Ack! I'll definitely make sure she becomes more confident in the next chapters... though not just yet. ^^; I guess running away is kinda good, though... Bad thing, yeah, but I kinda want her to run away right now and not be brave and bold just yet... And yay for this part answering the stuff from the beginning of the chapter! I hope this part doesn't keep you from sleeping, though... Ahhhhh D8; I'm definitely not doing anything like that again...It at least explains what happened in the first part of chapter 15. That's good to know^^ I doubt the evnts in this chapter will give Rena more confidence, though... Poor girl. All she's doing now is running away, because she thinks that's all she can do... And that part definitely deserved a warning. I'm not one to get nightmares easily, so that won't be a problem for me (instead I can't fall asleep at all, so if that happens I know who I can blame^^), but I can imagine some people better not read that...
Yaaaaaay then xD; Glad to hear that! And yeah... sometimes it does just need a scary part That part was to illustrate how nasty these 'Heartless' things get, so YOSHHHH. but i won't put anything like that in pieces of heart again .-. As for Rena running, from the chapter I wrote earlier... I think she's starting to get out of her running away habit. Maybe just a little bit!It didn't keep me from sleeping at all, so you don't need to worry. Sometimes a story needs a scary nasty part like that^^ And as long as she won't run away the entire story (that would be boring) it's fine with me if she runs now.
... previews are nice ... ^^ You can choose if you want to post a preview or not. If you'll post one, I'll read it, like it and be curious. If you won't post one, I'll still want to read the next chapter very much, and you won't have spoiled anything. Surprises are nice, too^^ I don't care much...
......YOU ENVY ME? WHUT. D8 Wowzers. Please, oh pleeeeeease don't be envious >: I do get to do a lot of stuff that I want to do (which is why homeschooling is awesome~ 8D more time to practice your skills!), but at the same time... I don't get a lot of it done. My school work is also INCREDIBLY behind, so much that I haven't even finished my senior year yet and people who live around me are already going back to school. Ughhhhh. Having a lot of time on your hands isn't always good. :< Pleeeeeeease don't be envious! I sorries about your life being all crazy busy, though... *gives cookie*Man, I really envy you, Rena. You seem to have a lot of time to do cool things like artwork and fan-fiction; if I even to have time to sit down for ten minutes just to collect myself, it is an absolute miracle. Seriously, my life is totally hectic. Anyway, just to let you know, I didn't have any nightmares about that gross scene with Ven; I had time to view other images and get other thoughts in my head, which did lead to some other crazy dreams, but whatever. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and if you chose to post a preview, I'll read it, but if you don't, that's okay too.
Thank yew for the comment! And it's awesome that you kinda like mean!Naminé. xD; (i didn't really think anyone would, so yaaaaay) All of that stuff'll be revealed in due time, too. (one of those questions'll be answered soon, too! )Holy crap, what the hell is going on with Namine? Man, oh man, she was being quite the cold-hearted bich back there, wasn't she? Well, to be perfectly frank, part of me kind of liked seeing Namine act like that. Now, who is she doing all this stuff to Ven/Roxas for? Is it that other Organization or someone else? Oh well, all will be revealed in due time. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
Thank yew for the comment! ....D: WHUT. DON'T PUNCH MEAN NAMI-CHANNNNN. (even though she seriously deserves eet...) But yay for disliking her lots, too! AWESOME. Maybe I can apply the same sort of thing to the characters in Keen... I reallyreally hope so. ;0; I want people to get attached to them~Punch to Naminé. Right naow plz. You've made me dislike her in a weird way, but that just shows your story is working and you are capturing the characters very well. Enough to make one start to hate, in a sense, said character.
I still like her, don't get me wrong. Just not in your story. laaawl, how I hope that made sense. ;
Akuroku = -despair-
Okay, seriously, what the hell is going on? Is all of this real or is this Organization just messing with them? Was that Namine real or fake? I'm kind of hoping that she is fake after how she was acting back there. Are Ven and Rena trapped by these guys? It definitely sounded like they were in the last part. And, if they are trapped, then was the time they spent with Raynie and Adyn real? Or was that just another illusion? And is Rena really Aoi's friend Ten? Man, I am just really confused; I have no idea what to think right now. Anyway, even with all the questions and confusion, great job, and I look forward to more.
I think everything about the last chapters'll get explained in the next chapter... or at least most of it. XD; I'm sorry it's so confusing! I can give a clue, though! (since it might be a little bit before I post up another chapter. D: oops.) A chain of events is fake; the other is not. This fake chain of events, however, is a longer set of chains compared to the opposing chain, from past events and such. The first two sentences of the last scene hint which one it is! YAY xD; I'll try my best to post up the next chapter soon, though. Because my clue is horribly weird. Sorries xD;Okay, seriously, what the hell is going on? Is all of this real or is this Organization just messing with them? Was that Namine real or fake? I'm kind of hoping that she is fake after how she was acting back there. Are Ven and Rena trapped by these guys? It definitely sounded like they were in the last part. And, if they are trapped, then was the time they spent with Raynie and Adyn real? Or was that just another illusion? And is Rena really Aoi's friend Ten? Man, I am just really confused; I have no idea what to think right now. Anyway, even with all the questions and confusion, great job, and I look forward to more.
YES. ...Sure. Whatever. XD; *coughhackmaybenotcoughhack* I need to make a list of all of the confusing things in this story... *headdesk*Agreed. :B
I'm sure it'll all make sense soon... maybe. -cue suspense tune-
YAY THEN <3 Creepy Naminé is awesomeeeee. And sorries that it's confusing. xD; Going to try and straighten stuff out...Your Namine scares me. She looks so innocent and cute, but she acts like the opposite. It makes things interesting to say the least^^ Very confusing, but nice chapters!
Double post! I'm sorries! D: I have a question for anyone who reads this, though...
I'm thinking of starting over this thread because I want to edit some of the earlier chapters to make them better (and, best of all, SHORTER! HA 8D). I've done this a couple of times, though. I do plan on continuing this; it's just taking me a good long while to do it.
Would you rather read the editted chapters in a new thread or keep on getting new chapters here and I just link to the editted chapters?
Thank you! And sorry that this is a question and not an update. D: I'll post more chapters soon! (Once I figure out this one world's plotline... xD