Hi there Light
How are you doing?
I just read your post and I really liked it! Its a strong opening for your character
But I was wondering if you could change the very last line to 'Radiant Garden' *because Midgar is a city there*
Its only because that's gonna be where everyone meets up and in my next post the islands group will be leaving said islands. Then, in the next post, everyone can meet up *plus your ship won't waste gas or whatever it is that ships like these run off of*
Now, when we leave Midgar, that'll be when all of the characters are on the same ship *a new one, I haven't decided what it'll be quite yet but it'll probably look like a star wars ship*