I'm so sorry I haven't really gotten around to finishing the critique I was supposed to give you months ago.
However. I'm running a critique thread now. If you ever want some help, just stop by there, alright?
http://forums.khinsider.com/creative-writing/143592-critique-request-thread-3-a.html
However. I'm running a critique thread now. If you ever want some help, just stop by there, alright?
http://forums.khinsider.com/creative-writing/143592-critique-request-thread-3-a.html