My apologies, I'm late, am I?
There's a few grammatical errors (though that's not much of a problem, I recommend having someone else edit it just to be on the safe side) and there's a couple paragraphs that has a bit of the funny flow to it, perhaps it's the wording? example
It's still very good, overall, like I mentioned before. Just a little more practice, and you'll be like, a god
. What I like to do is read other books and if the writing's good enough, I shape it into my own kind of style. So basically, taking other people's style, and "playing" with it so you're comfortable while writing. We also have very good writers here, such as Smile, so you can ask them for advice. Your English teacher can even help, too. I'm not that good myself, if you ask me xD;
are you gonna finish, btw, because i wanna see the rest :c
There's a few grammatical errors (though that's not much of a problem, I recommend having someone else edit it just to be on the safe side) and there's a couple paragraphs that has a bit of the funny flow to it, perhaps it's the wording? example
It's still very good, overall, like I mentioned before. Just a little more practice, and you'll be like, a god
. What I like to do is read other books and if the writing's good enough, I shape it into my own kind of style. So basically, taking other people's style, and "playing" with it so you're comfortable while writing. We also have very good writers here, such as Smile, so you can ask them for advice. Your English teacher can even help, too. I'm not that good myself, if you ask me xD;are you gonna finish, btw, because i wanna see the rest :c
