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All art is taken off, sorry I gotta leave.
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Death Sequence-Riku
Riku's upper body anatomy is a bit off. Unless he were doing yoga then the way his arms are arched and his back is curved would be fine, but he isn't. Also his shoulders are too low which makes his arms and back look kinda funky.
The best reference I can find for now even if it isn't the angle you want. But that is a more natural way for a body to float if people could float in midair. Also the way his belly is protruding from under his vest-shirt, he looks kinda like he is in his first trimester of pregnancy or he ate too much.
Try looking at Riku's game over screens in Re:CoM or Sora & TAV's game over screens. You'll see that their arms hang differently and their backs aren't really arched.
Okay! The good! I love the hair and the colors and the heart!
Love the coloring style, but anatomy is probably your weak point, isn't it?
*face palm* I appreciate your comments, but clearly you missed something in my first post. I'm not looking for critiques, I'm only posting art and I know where my flaws are if any that I feel need to be corrected.
I know you said that, but an artist can't grow without getting opinions from others. *shrugs*
It looks kind of... rough. I mean, I know I don't make art or anything, but it just looks rough.
You wanted nothing but comments right? You wanted to show off your work, correct? If you don't want critique then I'm going to be straight forward and honest with you.
If all you're looking for are positive comments to boost your ego, go ask your family and friends who know shit all about the visual arts. Otherwise, if you're going to post something and be a pretentious asshole about it then you better learn how to deal bro. I reserve the right to state my opinion, to be treated as an equal and to uphold my own opinions to my liking.
Sound familiar?
And your art sucks. If you're going to talk shit, I'd like to see you out perform me by the way in the arts. Otherwise back up bro.
Art is art, your opinion or not and if you can do better well than you're just an inflated egotistical biggot with a fetish for trolling
I find the irony in this post to be absolutely hilarious.Art is art, your opinion or not and if you can do better well than you're just an inflated egotistical biggot with a fetish for trolling
I agree with Toilet Crusher. Posting a thread with your work and telling people not to critique is insanely redundant.
This really isn't much to be showing off, both in quality and quantity. Do more work and let people tell you what they think so you can improve.