Hello all! I made this some time ago and chose to post it. This is just the intro and the first chapter. If you guys like it I shall post the second chapter. =3 I'm still editing the chapters so they are not fully completed yet but their something to go off on. Enjoy and happy reading.
When the World Crashes
Intro:
What if? What if your world came crashing and you lost everything? Your home, family, and friends. All lost in an instant. What if you were consumed by the thickest of the darkness of the world for years and more years to come? What would you do? Would you care or would you just shrug it off like it was nothing?
That is what happened to the two brightest kids on the planet. Never looked down on anyone, it didn’t matter who they were. Their whole life changed in an instant…everything they knew was gone in under a second. Separated for years not knowing the other was alive. One of them, Zi, hardly showed his emotions in the open. He acts as though nothing had happened to him. But inside there is a growing pain and cry that he never wants to let out. It kills him inside every time he thinks about it. After all the events the events he sets out on a quest trying to find his long lost friend. The rest? Well you’ll find out for yourself…
Chapt. 1: The Beginning of an End
Two taps of running feet could be heard off in the distance in the town market. It sounded like a group of teenagers causing trouble. You could see little silhouettes in the distance but it couldn’t be seen clearly. One of the towns’ people looked off in the distance, and saw these two kids running, but before he knew it one of the kids passed him and another one, a young girl pushed him and he fell onto the ground. “Hey you stupid kids watch where you’re going!” He screamed at them as he got up and cursed under his breath more. The kids were Zi and Tai were running threw the market, running into everything that was in their way. More of the towns’ people started yelling at them to stop before they do real damage.
The two didn’t care that much at all, in fact they didn’t really notice them at all. Zi was laughing as he ran; he had a big proud grin on his face. He glanced over his shoulder to see if Tai was still behind him, he had pisses her off by eating her lunch on purpose because he had nothing else to do and wanted to spark something. Tai was nowhere in site, it’s like she gave up. Then suddenly he heard a yell of anger, and then he looked back behind him. He saw that there was a cloud of dirt everywhere behind him, he really couldn’t see much. But then in a flash, there was Tai running out of the dirt cloud and creating more as she sprinted angrily. Tai was closing in on Zi quickly. “Get back here Zi!” Tai shouted at him, “So I can beat the snot out of you!” she had a really pissed of look on her face. Zi got a little worried as he looked at her face, “Not a chance! You’re going to try and kill me!” He said still laughing at her.
The two sprinted out of the market and onto the beach. The sun was setting and the sky was a dark shade of purple and shades of yellow and gold. It looked as though it were dawn. You could see their black childish looking silhouettes in front of the sun on the sandy beach running and messing around around. Zi looked over his shoulder again to see if he could see Tai, he saw she had stopped to catch her breath. He stopped running and looked back and laughed to himself as he watched her as she crouched down and put her hands on her knees to rest for a moment. Then he saw that she picked up something in the sand. He tilted his head in confusion. Then Tai stood up and looked at him with a mysterious grin. She only gives that grin when she has a plot up her sleeve.
“Hey, Tai! You give up?” He shouted to her as he started to walk towards her and laughed as he was proud of himself. “Shut up!” She said as she looked at him and smiled and sarcastically laughed as she tried to hide her anger towards him. “What are you planning?” Zi said cautiously to her as he hesitated to take another step towards her. “Nothing…” She said as she started to walk calmly towards him acting like nothing was wrong. Zi got really confused and scratch his head trying to figure out what she’s going to do to him as she passes by him.
The he felt a hard smack on the top of his head; it sounded and felt like he ran his head into a brick wall. He fell to the ground, not yet figured out what had happened yet. He held the top of his head and took it off to see if there was any blood. Then he saw a rock drop to the sand. It looked like she pulled it off a mountain because it was so rugged and sharp. Tai stood there and laughed at him after she gave him a large bump on his head. She was the proud one now, it was no longer him.
He was a little upset about that but it was covered up by the throbbing pain on his head. Every time the wind blew his hair it stung ever worse. He moaned for a minute, wanting to lie down on the sand and just sit there for an hour or two. He soon moved around and stumbled to his feet. Then he looked at Tai angrily and slouched over holding his head and pointed his finger at her. “That was not fair! I didn’t hit you when I ate you lunch now did I?!” He shouted at her as he clenched his teeth and wanting to hit her back. Tai laughed at him as he got angrier and angrier at her every second. She tried to ignore him and looked at the sky. Zi noticed that Tai’s face suddenly changed as she looked into the sky, it was a look of confusion.
He held his temper for a moment and looked up at the sky. He noticed there was a tiny strand of black leaking out of the sky. It was wavy like a piece black string was stuck in the sky trying to get away by dancing. He stood up straight and concentrated on it more. He thought it didn’t look like the night sky, it was way too dark. The night sky didn’t appear like that all; it was all new to them. They just stood there and stared. The wind started to pick up a bit more. The strand became bigger and multiplied and took the shape of clouds, and soon almost covered the sky.
Along with the clouds came the thundering dark purple that flashed every other second that billowed inside them. There was also flashes of dark blue lightning, then the wind picked up even more violently as the sky became pitch black. The sun was still showing but barely, the clouds spread to cover it up, little beams of light from the sun flickered as it tried to give the planet warmth. “The darkness! The darkness!” The people screamed. People started to panic as the last gleams of the sun were covered by the dark clouds. The people now started to run into their homes for protection.
When that happened, everyone screamed in shear terror. But Zi and Tai ignored every single last one of them, they were too consumed by what was going on in the sky, it was like they were mesmerized of what was going on around them. Everything happened so fast. Then suddenly, everything went silent and freezing cold. Zi felt Tai grab onto his shirt. He looked down at her, “We need to leave.” He said calm but had a sort of panic in his voice. He looked down at the sand and saw a foot away that the sand was turning black and then disappearing.
He heard a big crash and crumples all around them so he looked around and saw mountains, homes, and everything else in sight and nothing was wrong. He looked on the mountain where their homes were. Then again everything went silent for a moment then everything caved in and dicinagrated. Then everything started again, thunder, lightning and the wind. Zi grabbed Tai’s hand and started to run.
They didn’t run far the ground was black and they were stuck. It was as if someone or something was grabbing a hold of them and pulling them down. Zi looked down at Tai. “What’s going on?!” Tai said as she had a tears started rolling down her face. “I don’t know.” He said in a panic and scared. Then the clouds of darkness rushed causing a big gust of wind over them and both of them were tugged apart violently from one another.
“Tai!” Zi screamed out as he started to panic. As he scanned around with his eyes franticly as he tried to get free of this cloud trying to consume him. He got one arm out but the other was stuck. Then he heard a faint voice scream his name and Tai’s hand reach out at him. “Tai!” He screamed as he was glad to see her and still scared of what was going on. He reached out for her hand and touched her finger tips and scrambled to get a hold of them to try and save them both. Zi grabbed one of her fingers but then Tai’s hand dicinagrated into a black mist. “Tai!” Zi shouted as tears rolled down his face.
Then he was tugged into the dark cloud and everything went pitch-black around him, and he disappeared. He was falling; it felt like it would never end. He couldn’t breath, he couldn’t think, he couldn’t hear anything except his racing heart beat as it sounded like it was going to pop. A cloud surrounded him and then disbursed into tiny little strands as he continued to fall. Then it all stopped, and everything went blank.
The Earth was consumed by the darkness, the planet was no more. It couldn’t sustain all the wars and battle going on. All the hatred was collected and compressed in the atmosphere. The compression of hatred expanded to the point it broke and killed the planet.
When the World Crashes
Intro:
What if? What if your world came crashing and you lost everything? Your home, family, and friends. All lost in an instant. What if you were consumed by the thickest of the darkness of the world for years and more years to come? What would you do? Would you care or would you just shrug it off like it was nothing?
That is what happened to the two brightest kids on the planet. Never looked down on anyone, it didn’t matter who they were. Their whole life changed in an instant…everything they knew was gone in under a second. Separated for years not knowing the other was alive. One of them, Zi, hardly showed his emotions in the open. He acts as though nothing had happened to him. But inside there is a growing pain and cry that he never wants to let out. It kills him inside every time he thinks about it. After all the events the events he sets out on a quest trying to find his long lost friend. The rest? Well you’ll find out for yourself…
Chapt. 1: The Beginning of an End
Two taps of running feet could be heard off in the distance in the town market. It sounded like a group of teenagers causing trouble. You could see little silhouettes in the distance but it couldn’t be seen clearly. One of the towns’ people looked off in the distance, and saw these two kids running, but before he knew it one of the kids passed him and another one, a young girl pushed him and he fell onto the ground. “Hey you stupid kids watch where you’re going!” He screamed at them as he got up and cursed under his breath more. The kids were Zi and Tai were running threw the market, running into everything that was in their way. More of the towns’ people started yelling at them to stop before they do real damage.
The two didn’t care that much at all, in fact they didn’t really notice them at all. Zi was laughing as he ran; he had a big proud grin on his face. He glanced over his shoulder to see if Tai was still behind him, he had pisses her off by eating her lunch on purpose because he had nothing else to do and wanted to spark something. Tai was nowhere in site, it’s like she gave up. Then suddenly he heard a yell of anger, and then he looked back behind him. He saw that there was a cloud of dirt everywhere behind him, he really couldn’t see much. But then in a flash, there was Tai running out of the dirt cloud and creating more as she sprinted angrily. Tai was closing in on Zi quickly. “Get back here Zi!” Tai shouted at him, “So I can beat the snot out of you!” she had a really pissed of look on her face. Zi got a little worried as he looked at her face, “Not a chance! You’re going to try and kill me!” He said still laughing at her.
The two sprinted out of the market and onto the beach. The sun was setting and the sky was a dark shade of purple and shades of yellow and gold. It looked as though it were dawn. You could see their black childish looking silhouettes in front of the sun on the sandy beach running and messing around around. Zi looked over his shoulder again to see if he could see Tai, he saw she had stopped to catch her breath. He stopped running and looked back and laughed to himself as he watched her as she crouched down and put her hands on her knees to rest for a moment. Then he saw that she picked up something in the sand. He tilted his head in confusion. Then Tai stood up and looked at him with a mysterious grin. She only gives that grin when she has a plot up her sleeve.
“Hey, Tai! You give up?” He shouted to her as he started to walk towards her and laughed as he was proud of himself. “Shut up!” She said as she looked at him and smiled and sarcastically laughed as she tried to hide her anger towards him. “What are you planning?” Zi said cautiously to her as he hesitated to take another step towards her. “Nothing…” She said as she started to walk calmly towards him acting like nothing was wrong. Zi got really confused and scratch his head trying to figure out what she’s going to do to him as she passes by him.
The he felt a hard smack on the top of his head; it sounded and felt like he ran his head into a brick wall. He fell to the ground, not yet figured out what had happened yet. He held the top of his head and took it off to see if there was any blood. Then he saw a rock drop to the sand. It looked like she pulled it off a mountain because it was so rugged and sharp. Tai stood there and laughed at him after she gave him a large bump on his head. She was the proud one now, it was no longer him.
He was a little upset about that but it was covered up by the throbbing pain on his head. Every time the wind blew his hair it stung ever worse. He moaned for a minute, wanting to lie down on the sand and just sit there for an hour or two. He soon moved around and stumbled to his feet. Then he looked at Tai angrily and slouched over holding his head and pointed his finger at her. “That was not fair! I didn’t hit you when I ate you lunch now did I?!” He shouted at her as he clenched his teeth and wanting to hit her back. Tai laughed at him as he got angrier and angrier at her every second. She tried to ignore him and looked at the sky. Zi noticed that Tai’s face suddenly changed as she looked into the sky, it was a look of confusion.
He held his temper for a moment and looked up at the sky. He noticed there was a tiny strand of black leaking out of the sky. It was wavy like a piece black string was stuck in the sky trying to get away by dancing. He stood up straight and concentrated on it more. He thought it didn’t look like the night sky, it was way too dark. The night sky didn’t appear like that all; it was all new to them. They just stood there and stared. The wind started to pick up a bit more. The strand became bigger and multiplied and took the shape of clouds, and soon almost covered the sky.
Along with the clouds came the thundering dark purple that flashed every other second that billowed inside them. There was also flashes of dark blue lightning, then the wind picked up even more violently as the sky became pitch black. The sun was still showing but barely, the clouds spread to cover it up, little beams of light from the sun flickered as it tried to give the planet warmth. “The darkness! The darkness!” The people screamed. People started to panic as the last gleams of the sun were covered by the dark clouds. The people now started to run into their homes for protection.
When that happened, everyone screamed in shear terror. But Zi and Tai ignored every single last one of them, they were too consumed by what was going on in the sky, it was like they were mesmerized of what was going on around them. Everything happened so fast. Then suddenly, everything went silent and freezing cold. Zi felt Tai grab onto his shirt. He looked down at her, “We need to leave.” He said calm but had a sort of panic in his voice. He looked down at the sand and saw a foot away that the sand was turning black and then disappearing.
He heard a big crash and crumples all around them so he looked around and saw mountains, homes, and everything else in sight and nothing was wrong. He looked on the mountain where their homes were. Then again everything went silent for a moment then everything caved in and dicinagrated. Then everything started again, thunder, lightning and the wind. Zi grabbed Tai’s hand and started to run.
They didn’t run far the ground was black and they were stuck. It was as if someone or something was grabbing a hold of them and pulling them down. Zi looked down at Tai. “What’s going on?!” Tai said as she had a tears started rolling down her face. “I don’t know.” He said in a panic and scared. Then the clouds of darkness rushed causing a big gust of wind over them and both of them were tugged apart violently from one another.
“Tai!” Zi screamed out as he started to panic. As he scanned around with his eyes franticly as he tried to get free of this cloud trying to consume him. He got one arm out but the other was stuck. Then he heard a faint voice scream his name and Tai’s hand reach out at him. “Tai!” He screamed as he was glad to see her and still scared of what was going on. He reached out for her hand and touched her finger tips and scrambled to get a hold of them to try and save them both. Zi grabbed one of her fingers but then Tai’s hand dicinagrated into a black mist. “Tai!” Zi shouted as tears rolled down his face.
Then he was tugged into the dark cloud and everything went pitch-black around him, and he disappeared. He was falling; it felt like it would never end. He couldn’t breath, he couldn’t think, he couldn’t hear anything except his racing heart beat as it sounded like it was going to pop. A cloud surrounded him and then disbursed into tiny little strands as he continued to fall. Then it all stopped, and everything went blank.
The Earth was consumed by the darkness, the planet was no more. It couldn’t sustain all the wars and battle going on. All the hatred was collected and compressed in the atmosphere. The compression of hatred expanded to the point it broke and killed the planet.