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Well, I thought it was pretty funny and I liked it. Axel, is his boss, that part makes me laugh. I would expect somebody like Zexion or Saix but yeah, it's pretty much funny. I kinda feel bad for Sora but meh, I always have sympathy for him. XD Anyway, I like it. Descriptive and such. :D Good story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!
 
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Axel and Larxene doing it was the last thing I expected on the other side of that door.

And Riku is super eeeeeevil.
 
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Um i looked at it, and i think I may have wrote a line or two to the chapter i had already started writing. But other than that, no.
 
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Sora and Riku gay?
Yes, please. We won't get mad :3
 
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lol, do you REALLY speak for everyone?
It's been so long since I wrote it I can't remember if that was the plan or not D:
 
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If they don't like it they can leave. XDD
From what I've seen, it looks like the plan. I mean, the end of the chapter was pretty suggestive.
 
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rofl.
I think i'm going to rewrite what I have of Chapter 2...
I think. I need to replan this D:
 
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Rofl, really?
I expected people to get more angry than happy about it >_____<
 
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Pretty good so far.

You've made Kairi the uber-bi*ch, though. Not that I care that much. xD

At first I thought that was Roxas on the other side of the door. :/ Then I saw the word "girl". xD
 
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Ooooh, I see.
Alright. I'm going to go replan it right now =]

Cisorlyx said:
Pretty good so far.

You've made Kairi the uber-bi*ch, though. Not that I care that much. xD

At first I thought that was Roxas on the other side of the door. :/ Then I saw the word "girl". xD
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Rofl, you really thought Kairi was the uber-bitch? xD.
haha, nope, not Roxas :p
I wonder what Roxas' appearance should be in this story though =/
 
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