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The Life We Call Our Own [poem]



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xemx

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The Life We Call Our Own...

The world so dark and cold,
Everything drained of color...
The sun sets on yet another waisted day
Like skeletons we walk the earth
Shakes like earthquakes run through our bodies
as tears like rain storms run down our faces.
Raging winds of change that push us...
into the eye of the storm,
where nothing,

Nothing feels right.
The scars that storms brutally leave,
never fade...yet stay in painful color.
Crashes of thunderous screams ring down the street,
as memories flash like lightning
A new beginning blossoms like a flower in the spring,
but quickly wilts with lack of life's gracing light
Like a million stars we share the sky
yet only make up one
all alike in matter
and as trees we grow...
but only as strong as our roots
and by the fears that hold us back
we are cut down.






[[[its not one of my best but i like this one ]]]
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Jozi

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Ohhhh thats one of the most fascinating poems i have ever read!(rep power!)
 

Nyangoro

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Not bad at all! There were a couple of spelling errors, but that's about it.
 

Orion

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If that's not even your best, please, post your best. I loved this one.
 

xemx

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Here is a new one guys... hope you like it ..

Its You.

every time i hear your name
i get butterflies
i start to think back
so innocent with a first kiss
wishing that my dreams would never end
because in my dreams im in your arms
nothing is wrong
everything is perfect
when im with you
my world is spinning in slow motion
and im starting to go way to fast
when you looked in to my eyes i freeze
my world STOPS!
and it wont start up again

wishing for a another day
a another day with you
im so wrapped up in you
its driving me crazy
i want you hear with me
right now
today
tomorrow
next week
forever
this week is gowning so slow


your voice is fading away
its been so long
i never thought that it would be so heard
hurt so much
i never thought that i would be so lost
so sad
so empty
with out you here bye my side

its getting harder to concentrated
because your always on my mined


the space between us is growing bigger
and the more i sped thinking about it
the more i start to miss you

I've been strong for you
cried my self to sleep for you
im shutting people out for you
Wont let anyone in but you


i love you with all my heart
i need you here with me forever and today
i dont want to let you slip away














[[[SO again not one of the best but im getting the rest of them typed .. so yeah <33]]]


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