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unknown_boy

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lol, I just totally bailed on you all, huh:nahnah: ? My bad, sorry but i just really needed some time off from typing, not just for this but for a lot of other Rp's. Okay, now that my mind is clear and I’m bored as hell, I guess I can end you all's suffering:glare:. Okay, I deserve a lot of yelling and mobbing plus more, but let me do this chapter first.
Oh, here is Bloody Mary's Motorcycle
Hail Mary-http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c290/sadeisinsane/motorcycles/db1.jpg

Chapter 5
Beginning


"Arrrrrrgh!" Geist growled out of frustration and hate. "I swear I'll kill you!" He held his hand together and began to make symbols with them. "Eternal darkness!" A giant shadow claw rose from the ground and reached toward James.
"Oh, what's this? Using dark magic against me? That won't work, boy!" James’s reptile like hand began to discharge liquid. When the liquid fell to the ground it burned it into tar. "Try and dodge my deadly acid!" He flung his scaly hand to make the acidic liquid fly toward Geist.
"Heh! That's it?!" Geist chuckled. The shadow claw caught blocked him from the acid that James flung. "Just as i suspected it, you're nothing but a rookie!" The claw reached toward James, this time with success. It held James as it lifted into the air.
"What kind of trick is this?" James growled.
"Just wait and see." Geist raised up his right hand. "Hope you like pain." He slowly began to ball his right hand into a fist. The claw that held James began to crush him with dark electricity surging around it.
"Ahck! You--You..." James was being brutally tortured, but it seems as though he was enjoying the pain. "Yes...that's it! More, more, give me more damage!" He had a small smirk on his face.
"What kind of demon are you! No matter, you shall die!" Geist clenched his right hand into a fist. The shadow claw tightened its grip around James. You could hear his bones crush. The dark electricity ran all over his body.
"EERRR!" James began to grunt.
"Heh! Hurts doesn't it?!" Geist sneered.
"Oh, yes it does!" James pupils changed into that of a viper. "But lucky for me, I’m flexible." He began to twist and contort his body in such and unholy manner that there was no chance that he could be human.
"What--what are you?" Geist stared in awe.
James's body twisted out the grip of the shadow claw and slithered on the ground. His bones began to crack back in place. "I'm complicated." His pupils changed back into regular form.
"Tsst! No matter, I shall still send you back to the netherworlds." Geist drew out his sword.
"Hmph! I have no further interest in playing with you." James began to walk away. "But don't worry. I'm sure I’ll get bored later, and when I do I’ll come straight to you." With that being said he disappeared into darkness.
"What the hell...." Geist whispered to himself

A black Lexus pulled up to a run-down looking apartment. The door to the driver's side opened and Rachelle stepped out. She frowns as she gazed upon the apartment. "So, this is where Chenzira lives, eh?" She stepped on the sidewalk, looking rather disgusted at the filth of this neighborhood. "How could he live in such a place? Yuck!" She walked to the front steps of the apartment. "How could anyone live in a place like this?" There was a rusty doorbell on the side of the entrance. "Well, better lighten this place up with some manners." She pressed the rusty doorbell, but as soon as she did it busted with electricity. "Yowzaa!" She jumped back. "Damn! This place is falling apart." She knocked on the door one time, and it soon fell inside. "Eh...." Rachelle looked irritated. "I should watch what I say." She walked inside the apartment. The walls dripped with brown water and there was a foul smell coming from all around. "God!" She covered her nose. "What died in here?" Her foot stepped on a squeaky board. "AAHH!" She jumped back, a little startled. "This place is getting on my nerves." She stumped on the ground.
There was a creak that came from the second floor of the apartment. "Do I really want to go check it out?" Rachelle frowned. "Well, I’m here now, so i might as well get it over with." She walked up the molded stairs, rats ran along the levels of the stairs. "EW, EW, EW, EWWWW!" Rachelle jumped up and down. "Sick. So sick!" She hurried up to the second floor. "Just find Chenzira and get the hell out of here!" She said to herself. The creak that was heard before was now coming from a door that moves slightly back and forth, due to a draft that was coming from behind it. "That must be where he is. It has to be since there are no other doors here." She ran to the creaking door and burst into the room. "CHENZIRA!" She yelled with happiness, but no one was in the raggedy room, nothing but inanimate objects. "Chenzira?" She said softly as she walked around the room. "No, He is not here!" She collapsed on a busted couch. "Dammit! I was sure he was gonna be here." She put her arm across her face. "I too slow!" A sigh of disappointment was released from her mouth. "What do I do now?" Rachelle sat up and looked around. "Maybe I should wait here..." She stood up. "And while I’m waiting I’ll just have a look around." She reached down and picked up a pack of cigarettes that Chenzira had thrown earlier. "These things are going to kill you, Chenzira." She tossed it back onto the floor.

"Jake! Jake, wake up!" I slapped the unconscious Jake's cheek. "I said wake up damn you!" I began to shake Jake, desperate for some sign of life.
"He got hit pretty hard." Bloody Mary took the credit card from the dead Jason.
"No sh*t!" I snapped. If that wasn't obvious enough.
"You should probably take him to a hospital. What you are doing isn't helping." She tucks the credit card in her breast.
"With what money?!" I stand up and stare at her breast. "Give me that card!"
"No chance in hell!" Mary glared at me.
"I need it more then you do! What are you going to do with it? Buy some tampons?!" I growl. "Heh, I guess that's why the call you bloody Mary!"
"You jerk! I'm definitely not going to give it to a low-down petty womanizer like you!" She began to walk away.
"If you live, I swear I’ll blow you head off!" I raise my gun at her.
"Threats are only going to make it worse." She said in a calm voice as she shifted her head slightly to me.
"And provoking my anger is only going to make the pain worse!" I click my gun.
"Before you can even pull the trigger, I'll already have slice off you head." She got deadly in the voice.
"Ha, all talk and no play makes Mary a very dead girl!" I sneer at her. There is a silence between us. "This boy saved your life; can't you do the same in return?" I hate sounding like I’m some sensitive punk, but I don't want Jake's death on my hands.
".....I'll go with you." She tucks her Magnum in her strap that is wrapped around her left leg.
"Like hell you will!" I respond. "We don't need you, just the money!"
"I really don't need to help you!" Her eyes flicker with coldness.
"Why do you want to come?!" I argue.
"Because it's my money! I don't want some drunken loser to have his way with it." She spits on the ground.
"Who you calling drunk!" I yell at her. "I'll bring back your money, if it is that important to you!" I pick up Jake.
"Am I supposed to believe that?" She looks at me.
".....no." I begin to walk with toward the exit of Porn store, Mary follows me. We walk out to her Motorcycle.
"Hold on." She stops me.
"What?!" I say with annoyance. This chick is starting to piss me off.
"You don't need to get on." She takes Jake away from me.
"What?!"
"This is only a two-rider and since that boy is the one injured, you're out of luck!" She puts Jack on the front seat of the motorcycle and sit real close behind. Lucky basterd.
"So what am I supposed to do?" He snorts.
"Huff it!" She turned puts her hands on the handle bar and turn the accelerator.
"Hey wait just a goddamn minute!" I began to yell but she drives off. "Damn! Well at least Jake is safe. Well, while I’m here I might as well get looks for some clues." I turn toward the porn store. "What a waist!"
"Hmm, you obviously don't have any moral." A boy jumps from off a building and lands in front of me.
"And who the hell are you?" I snarl.
"My name is Geist." The boy had an exhausted look on his face. Gees, how come I always meet the crack-heads. "If you don't mind, just hand over the crystal. I'm tired and would like some rest."
"Yeah right, buddy! I ain't gonna let some stupid demon take these crystal. I've seen what you all do with them." The crystal that I snatched out of the demon was in my pocket, and it was going to stay there!
"You're one to talk, half-breed!" Geist glared at me.
"What--what did you just say?!" I know he didn't just call me a half-breed!
"Son of an angel and demon! Outcasted by both good and evil. A lonely half-breed, looking for acceptance." Geist said with no emotion. "I know a little about you, Chenzira."
"Yeah..." I grit my teeth. "Then you should also know about my temper!" I draw out my sword. "F*cking demon!"
"I'm not a demon and i didn't want to have to fight you at the moment." Geist pulls out a black crescent blade. "But since you won't cooperate I have no other choice."
"Every time I get a moment to myself..." I charge toward him with my sword. "An gothic person always has to interrupt me!"

"Hmph! There has to be something here!" Rachelle dug in a closet that was in Chenzira's room. She came out of the closet. "Damn, nothing at all, huh Chenzira?" She stood up and began to tap on the wall. "You must have something since that day!" She sat down and ran her hands across the broke wooden floor. "Come on! There has to be some secret spot. It's not like Chenzira to not have one." She puts her back on the wall. "Damn!" Rachelle hits floor and there is a small squeak. "Huh?" She hits the floor again, the squeak is repeated. "Bingo!" She continues to hit the floor, coming closer to the squeak until she hits a wall. "Ow!" She rubs her head she looks down at the floor, she knocks on it. "Hmm, it's hollow! Sorry Chenzira." Rachelle stands up and slams her foot into the hollow spot, while tripping over it in the process. "Dammit! I got to be more careful." She turned around to the hole and looked in. "Jackpot!" She pulled out a brown suite case. "Man, this is heavy." She opens it. Inside the suite case was a few letters, a bracelet, and a picture. "He...he kept it." She picked up the picture and stared at it. The picture had a young woman, in her early 20's, and two small children, a girl and a boy. They were hugging and smiling in front of what seemed to be a mansion. One the right of them, there was a sign, it said: Crest Institute of Super Natural Studies. "Meryl...." Rachelle rubbed the picture of the woman.

James walked on a damped street, unlike the other scenery this neighborhood seemed to be quiet beautiful. He was deep in thought, until he heard a soft whimper. A girl was in a clean white dress was crying over a dead bird.
"My--my birdie died." She began to cry.
"Birdie?" James whispered.
She crouched down to stare at it, her tears rolling down her cheek. "Birdie, oh birdie!" She began to cry even more.
James lifted the bird into the air and swiped it into two.
"BIIIIRRDDDIIIE!" The girl collaspsed on the floor, her heart being even more broken.
James walked off. "If all you can do is cry, then maybe it's better that it is gone." He whispered as he disappeared.
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Okay, sorry that this was kind of short. But hey, sometimes it happens.......I'm just using that as an excuse, but I kind of wanted it to be short and suspenseful. Not long and action-packed. This chapter was more of a past un-locker for Chenzira. So sorry about that, but the next chapter will be longer, I promise....well I take that promise back, I will try to make it longer, lol. So tell me what you think. And Geist.....FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE PULL BACK YOUR MOB!
 

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Excellent story my friend. The part with Geist and James was awsome although I expected a Cobra not Viper but that was still cool. Also the part with Bloody Mary was sweet. The part with Rachelle was funny. I was laughing pretty hard there. Interesting using something that your love uses. Also the last paragraph was sweet. You must have also have read the devil may cry 3 manga. Cause that was exwhat Vergil did.
 

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Hey.Good chap.So you know I have somthing else I'll PM you.*clench mob receads*Acctaully it'll be worse if your next chapter is put off like this one was.I'll send my elite force after you then.Wich consists of Cloud Strife,Safer Sephiroth,Bahamut,and a super annoying noob.
 
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Hey wait a sec... WHY DO I ALWAYS GET BEAT UP! Oh well guess it can't be helped I am the little brother after all... U_b the mob will have to go through AoD and me to get to you!!! :) Even though I'm sure AoD would be enough... Anyway... Loved the chap! Another Another! *not complaining just excited*
 

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I don't wanna sound mean, but here goes. What does our private life have to do with this? What goes on with us two stays with us two. We're fine now and he will post the next chapter soon. Give him some more time, you know? He has to role play at the same time and talk to me too, ya? I'll post the next chapters of my fan fics tomorrow. I may also start that new fan fic coming soon tomorrow. So shut up and let ub take his time.
 

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.....whoa! Um....Thank you, love, *cools AoD off*. Okay, My friends and fans. Sinful ways Chapter 5...I think that's the next chapter...well...um..well what ever chapter is in production. I just have to make everything fit, I'm just stuck on some parts. But don't worry, the next chapter will be up sometime this week. So don't despair my adorable fans. My little balls of enthusiam! I will not disappoint you. I FEED ON YOU OPINIONS! So yeah, basically without you all i wouldn't be posting, so don't think i will abandoned this project. Okay. *holds AoD* I'm gonna go take my love home, while you all keep giving me love. later
 
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