As some of you know my RP Redeemer was a total failure so I revamped the story and here it is.
(Story)
Demons, the worlds true sins, are beasts that were once human. To become a demon one must commit a sin. Demons are forbidden from going into the world of the gods. They must first redeem themselves. A Redeemer is a demon who chooses to take back their sins by working for the God of Light, Radiance. Some of the gods give people their powers so they may help Redeemers fight demons. The Redeemer is given the choice to give a gift to a chosen human so they may see and fight the demons along side their Redeemer comrade. People with the powers of the gods may use them to see and fight demons also. By gaining the power of a god you may control or stand the element the god has power over. Volcanus, god of fire, gives the power to manipulate and withstand fire. Aquarius, goddess of water, allows one to control and breathe in water. The Redeemer's gift can be a little bit of anything though as long as it doesn't cross into the elements. Normal people can see the demons but not their true form. Demons will appear as people who commit the sins they were given. A Redeemer though will appear as some one who trys to prevent the crimes. With technology advancing everyday the demons are getting bigger and bigger ideas of trouble. Any normal human will be subjected to never ending torrment from a demon but a human blessed by the gods powers will fight back and hopefully end the demonic threat upon this world. The Redeemers are slowly being wiped from the Earth and few remain. The remaining few are losing faith in the gods and reverting back to their old demonic ways. The people who have recieved the gifts from the gods and the remaining Redeemers must fight back against the demon sending them back the underworld. The gift of the Redeemer has fallen into the hands of some one and must be used well or the world will perish. Help the Redeemor and the Gods to make a difference in the future of the world.
(Rules)
No Godmodding/Power playing
Romance but keep it PG-13
Follow Forums Rules
Stay Active
No one liners or in the words of Kaiku 'I'll kill you'
Put Radiance's Light above yo template if you've read all of the above
(People Needed)
Redeemer: Sabaku no Gaara
Redeemer's Gift Receiver:
Goddess of Wind Receiver: BO_.dbl_sizzle
God of Fire Receiver: Scribbles
Goddess of Water Receiver: Sara-Sama
God of Ice Receiver: wisdom&valor
God of Darkness Receiver (bad person): Kaiku
(Template+ Mine)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Gift(Gift Receiver only):
Sins(Redeemer only):
God Power(God Receiver only):
Weapons:
Appearance (if pic put at top or bottom of template):
Bio:
Mine
Name: Roseke Gorganesh
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Sins: Murder, Arsen, Theft, and Grave Robbing
Weapons: Claws, horn, and teeth
Appearance: Hair is long and that shade of red. Eyes are pure white representing the choice of redeeming. Face looks mostly human with some facial hair othe than the fact there are two large black horns protruding from the forhead. Left horn is broken off for the Gift. Body looks mainly human over than the hand which only has three fingers. Legs look like a goats but the hair on them is the shade of his head hair they are bent not letting him reach his full height. Feet are hooves. Shackle on left ankle and gold beaded necklace (purpose is later). Height is 9"10
Bio: When Roseke died he was like all demons committing crimes and destorying things. Like all demons he changed his name at death never to know his real name until redeeming himself. After choosing to Redeem himself he gained the shackle and necklace that he now wheres. In life he was a harsh man but in death after Redeeming himself he doesn't speak much of his past and trys to forget it. Being a gentle person now has made Radience smile upon him giving him a chance to fight for himself and the gods.
(Story)
Demons, the worlds true sins, are beasts that were once human. To become a demon one must commit a sin. Demons are forbidden from going into the world of the gods. They must first redeem themselves. A Redeemer is a demon who chooses to take back their sins by working for the God of Light, Radiance. Some of the gods give people their powers so they may help Redeemers fight demons. The Redeemer is given the choice to give a gift to a chosen human so they may see and fight the demons along side their Redeemer comrade. People with the powers of the gods may use them to see and fight demons also. By gaining the power of a god you may control or stand the element the god has power over. Volcanus, god of fire, gives the power to manipulate and withstand fire. Aquarius, goddess of water, allows one to control and breathe in water. The Redeemer's gift can be a little bit of anything though as long as it doesn't cross into the elements. Normal people can see the demons but not their true form. Demons will appear as people who commit the sins they were given. A Redeemer though will appear as some one who trys to prevent the crimes. With technology advancing everyday the demons are getting bigger and bigger ideas of trouble. Any normal human will be subjected to never ending torrment from a demon but a human blessed by the gods powers will fight back and hopefully end the demonic threat upon this world. The Redeemers are slowly being wiped from the Earth and few remain. The remaining few are losing faith in the gods and reverting back to their old demonic ways. The people who have recieved the gifts from the gods and the remaining Redeemers must fight back against the demon sending them back the underworld. The gift of the Redeemer has fallen into the hands of some one and must be used well or the world will perish. Help the Redeemor and the Gods to make a difference in the future of the world.
(Rules)
No Godmodding/Power playing
Romance but keep it PG-13
Follow Forums Rules
Stay Active
No one liners or in the words of Kaiku 'I'll kill you'
Put Radiance's Light above yo template if you've read all of the above
(People Needed)
Redeemer: Sabaku no Gaara
Redeemer's Gift Receiver:
Goddess of Wind Receiver: BO_.dbl_sizzle
God of Fire Receiver: Scribbles
Goddess of Water Receiver: Sara-Sama
God of Ice Receiver: wisdom&valor
God of Darkness Receiver (bad person): Kaiku
(Template+ Mine)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Gift(Gift Receiver only):
Sins(Redeemer only):
God Power(God Receiver only):
Weapons:
Appearance (if pic put at top or bottom of template):
Bio:
Mine
Name: Roseke Gorganesh
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Sins: Murder, Arsen, Theft, and Grave Robbing
Weapons: Claws, horn, and teeth
Appearance: Hair is long and
that shade of red. Eyes are pure white representing the choice of redeeming. Face looks mostly human with some facial hair othe than the fact there are two large black horns protruding from the forhead. Left horn is broken off for the Gift. Body looks mainly human over than the hand which only has three fingers. Legs look like a goats but the hair on them is the shade of his head hair they are bent not letting him reach his full height. Feet are hooves. Shackle on left ankle and gold beaded necklace (purpose is later). Height is 9"10Bio: When Roseke died he was like all demons committing crimes and destorying things. Like all demons he changed his name at death never to know his real name until redeeming himself. After choosing to Redeem himself he gained the shackle and necklace that he now wheres. In life he was a harsh man but in death after Redeeming himself he doesn't speak much of his past and trys to forget it. Being a gentle person now has made Radience smile upon him giving him a chance to fight for himself and the gods.
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