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Hello there. I'd like to share my work with you all. I've been writing for a long time, and though I don't feel I'm all that good at it, I am in love with poetry. I welcome your criticisms.
Spin
Hollowed summer
On your bicycle;
That circular motion,
Stated in a thought.
In afternoon,
Near leaves,
We sat idly,
Catching.
This boardwalk,
Near blue hill,
Is a lonely place
That used to rain.
Yellow friend,
Painted at night,
You never met
Autumn brown.
We tried
To catch
To meet
To know,
But never did.
That old boardwalk,
Near old hillside,
Stood as a memory,
Left in a thought.
Rosary
Small bud,
Unsure if
Rose, or
Daisy;
Without thorn
Or honey lip,
Still: a scent
Binding humility.
Small bud,
Kind friend,
Through
Quiet sway;
Stumbling
Through the mall,
Hand in hand,
Wall adjacent.
Staring white,
A cold advantage;
Wide eyes,
Faceless wall.
Small bud,
Unsure if any,
Without thorn
Or honey lip.
Earrings
Happy bell,
Raised like
Noose, or
Stuck in
Train,
Rang inside.
Dropped off,
Worn a lot,
Glittering stop,
Happy ring,
Your earring.
Happy bell,
Raised in
Town, or
Lost in
Ash,
Fell out.
Dropped off,
Worn a lot,
Glittering stop,
Happy ring,
Your earring.
Spin
Hollowed summer
On your bicycle;
That circular motion,
Stated in a thought.
In afternoon,
Near leaves,
We sat idly,
Catching.
This boardwalk,
Near blue hill,
Is a lonely place
That used to rain.
Yellow friend,
Painted at night,
You never met
Autumn brown.
We tried
To catch
To meet
To know,
But never did.
That old boardwalk,
Near old hillside,
Stood as a memory,
Left in a thought.
Rosary
Small bud,
Unsure if
Rose, or
Daisy;
Without thorn
Or honey lip,
Still: a scent
Binding humility.
Small bud,
Kind friend,
Through
Quiet sway;
Stumbling
Through the mall,
Hand in hand,
Wall adjacent.
Staring white,
A cold advantage;
Wide eyes,
Faceless wall.
Small bud,
Unsure if any,
Without thorn
Or honey lip.
Earrings
Happy bell,
Raised like
Noose, or
Stuck in
Train,
Rang inside.
Dropped off,
Worn a lot,
Glittering stop,
Happy ring,
Your earring.
Happy bell,
Raised in
Town, or
Lost in
Ash,
Fell out.
Dropped off,
Worn a lot,
Glittering stop,
Happy ring,
Your earring.
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