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Holy crap!
What seems to be really bothering you about it?
Dude, I have to be honest. That guy's pinky is thicker than it should be, and the top segment of his middle finger looks like it was dislocated and decided to rotate 45°to the right (his right).
To repeat what the others have said, it looks like half of X's body had been chopped perfectly off, especially when you think of the way the farther half of his torso is angled (towards the viewer) and of the fact that X's chin is over the collar and also turning towards the viewer slightly. It would be very painful to be in that position. The other detail people have noticed is the stubby-looking thing sprouting off X's side. (Oh wait! That's his shoulder!) The ruffles on his vest make it look like the shoulder is farther back, when you've drawn the arm as if the shoulder was closer. Foreshortening makes things farther away look small, so the first bump/ruffle should be the shoulder - with a change to make it somehow closer, but not as close as it is now.
... hm. For some reason the armpit looks weird to me too. ._. Notice the shadow of his man-boobs? (Pecs?) The armpit is a few inches lower. I dunno, it looks like the arm sprouts out the side of his chest.
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It looks nice.
Edit: His hair looks nice too.