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A woman wake up in Twilight Town and joined the Organization XIII.
Disclaimer:I don't own Kingdom Hearts.
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Chapter 1:Lost with no name
It was near the end of summer as the sun shines brightly on the town of Twilight Town. On the brick floor outside of the station laid a figure of a woman.The woman
wore a long white dress.Her long golden blond hair flows in the wind as she wakes in
a haze and looks at her surroundings with jade eyes.
Where am I?
She lifts herself off the ground then dusts off her dress.She then looks back at the town around her.
Do I live here?
The woman wonders around the town until she comes across a clearing which is also
known as the sandlot.
"Hey you!"
The woman turns to face a teenager wearing a long white coat and a black ski hat.
Behind the teenager stand two more figures, a male and a female.The male was muscularly built and wore an orange jersey and a black sweat pant with a red stripe running down on each side. The female had short purple hair and wore a black T-shirt with khaki. The teenager walks up to the blond, “So where did you come from?”
The woman shake her head,"I...don't remember."
"What's your name?"The teen asks.
The blond shakes her head again,"I don't know..."
The teen glared at her."I don't know who you are or where you came from, but it’ll be wise for you to not play stupid with me.”
Just then, another boy enters the Sandlot. This boy also had blond hair and wore a black shirt inscribed with a skull. He also wore a camo pant with matching shoes. He walks over to the two, “Seifer, do you always have to be so mean to people?”
Seifer look towards the boy then back at the blond woman,"But this woman could be
a threat.She must be hiding something since she won't tell me anything."
The woman glared at Seifer,"I told you I don't remember anything!How hard it is to
understand everything I said!"She yelled at him.
Seifer glares at the two with disgust,"Are you aware that you might have let an outsider into the town?"
The boy just gives Seifer a shrug,"Did she say she was an outsider?"
Seifer gives the boy a stern glare before turning his back on him, “Fine. But if she starts any trouble, I’m blaming you guys.” Seifer exits the Sandlot along with his two companions.
The boy goes over to the blond woman,“Sorry about that. Seifer isn’t exactly the welcoming type.” The boy said to her, “Hi, my name’s Hayner. What’s your name?”
“I…” The woman's sentence is put to a halt as two more figures enter the Sandlot.
“Hayner, there you are!” The two runs up to Hayner then looks towards the blond, “Is she new?”The first figure was a boy who wore a red jersey over a white long-sleeve shirt. His blue jeans matches the color of his sneakers and his black hair is held into place by a head band. He looks at the blond, “Hi, I’m Pence.”
The next person to approach the blond was a female with brunet hair. She wore an orange tank top designed with the images of white flowers and also wore khaki. “And my name’s Olette.” The girl stated, “So what’s your name?”
The blond looks to the ground before giving them a slight shake, “I…don’t remember."
“You’re kidding me right? I mean, who can…?” Hayner looks towards the blond to find that her eyes never left the ground, “You weren’t joking were you.” Hayner turns to his two friends, “What should we do? This woman has no memory. Heck…she even forgot her own name!”
“I read about this.” Pence stated, “I think it is called amnesia. It’s when someone suffers from partial or complete loss of memory due to brain injury or shock.”
“That still doesn’t answer my question.” Hayner stated, “What should we do about her?”
“I have an idea!” Olette exclaims, “Why don’t we show her around town?She’s bound to recognize something.”
“That’s a good idea.” Pence replies, “We can also ask around to see if anyone recognizes her.”
They head over to the blond,“How about we show you around town? I’m sure we’ll find something.”
The blond gives him a smile, “You’ll do that for me?”
Hayner mirrors the woman's smile, “Sure.” The three show the woman around the town starting from the Central Station to the Tram Plaza, but they still couldn’t get her to remember and the people they ask don’t seem to recognize her either. After a few hours of searching, they bring the woman to an area they call the Usual Spot. “So what should we do now?” Hayner asks as he sits on top of a box, “Nobody seem to recognize her and she still can’t remember a thing.”
Pence and Olette slump down onto the couch. “Why don’t we try searching the Sunset district?” Olette replies, “If she didn’t come from Twilight Town then maybe she came from the Sunset district.”
“Can we rest for a while?” Pence ask, “We’ve been searching for hours.”
Hayner nods then heads for the exit, “Once you’re done, meet me back at the Central Station.”
The group splits up and went on their separate ways. Still unable to remember anything, the blond decides to take a stroll around the town in order to ease her mind. As she reaches the Tram Plaza,she spots a man setting up a camera, “What are you doing?”
The man turns to look at the blond, “Oh…I’m just trying to take a picture of my shop for the advertisement, but I’m having a problem with the angle.”
The woman heads over towards the camera, “Can I help?” The man nods and the woman start to adjust the camera. After shifting the camera around a couple of times, she manages to get it into the right position, “Got it!”
“Good.” The man gets inside his shop and motions the woman to stand next to the shop, “You helped me so I guess it’s only fair if you get to take a picture as well.” The woman walks to the side of the store and faces forwards as the camera lets out a flash. The man goes over to the camera and takes the photo out of the camera. He then gives the woman the photo, “Here, keep it as reminder and to show my appreciation…” The man walks over to a stack of boxes and starts digging around in the stock and withdraws a silver heart shaped with wings necklace. He hands the necklace to the woman,“Here. Consider yourself as my first customer.”
The woman stares at the necklace for a bit before placing it on her neck, “Thanks." She then heads back to the back alley and makes her way towards the Central Station. They board the train and are taken to the Sunset district. Just like before, they bring the woman to varies locations and ask varies people only to come up with the same result. They head back to the station and ride it back to the town of Twilight Town. They exit the Central Station in time to hear the bells go off from the top of the station’s tower. “Oh no!” Olette exclaims, “I better cook dinner before it hits 7:00.” The group begins to walk away from the station but quickly turns around to find that the blond was still standing in front of the station. Olette turns to the rest of the group, “What should we do about her?My parent won’t allow me to bring a stranger to the house and I don’t think it’s a good idea to leave her in the Usual Spot when it’s cold out.”
“Don’t look at me.” Pence said as he waves his hands in front of him, “My room is full of computers so it’ll be too cramped to fit a guest in.” The group then turns their attention to their leader.
Hayner catches the looks on their faces then lets out a long sigh, “Fine, but she better not bother me.” Hayner grab the woman's hand, “You’re going to stay at my house for the night. My house has a guest room so we can have separate rooms.”
Hayner takes the woman to his house and they are greeted by Hayner’s mother, “Welcome home Hayner. who is this hon?” Hayner leads the woman to the guest room then heads down to explain to his mother, “Look, that woman has completely lost her memory. So I’m letting her stay in the guest room until she regains them.”
His mother nods, “I understand.”
The group heads for the Usual Spot the next morning. “The Struggle Battle Tournament starts tomorrow right? Are you going to enter Hayner?”
Hayner gives the group a nod, “Sure, it’ll be great to enter the tournament for once. Besides, I still want to deal with Seifer.” Their attention turns to the entranceway as the curtain starts to open. The blond enters the area and is greeted the group, “Good morning sleeping beauty.” Hayner gets off the box and walks towards the exit, “I’m going to have a few practice fights with Seifer.”
Olette tries to talk Hayner out of it, “Hayner I don’t think that’s such a…” Hayner was already out the door before she got to finish her sentence.
“Is Hayner in trouble?” The woman asks.
“You can say that.” Pence replies, “If he ticks Seifer off, he’s going to end up with more than a couple of bruises.”
The woman then exits the room, “I’ll make sure he doesn’t.” The woman exits the Usual Spot and heads for the Sandlot where he first met Seifer.
The others let out a sigh as they exit the Usual Spot, “Better make sure those two will be okay.” They rush after the two.
The boy reaches the Sandlot in time to witness Hayner fall to the ground.She rushes over towards him, “Are you okay?”
Seifer looks over at the two then points his plasticclub at the blond, “Hey, you’re that outsider from before. It’s time we settle that fight we never finished.” The woman tries to locate a weapon that she can use, but to no avail.
Hayner wants to help, but was too beaten up to do so. He takes out his plastic sword and hands it to the woman,“Here, it won’t be fair if you fight without a weapon now will it.” The woman nods then grabs the sword before getting into her fighting stance.
Seifer couldn’t help but laugh, “Honestly, do you think you can beat me?” The woman
smirked at him and Seifer glares at him down, “Fine. Let’s get started.”
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Rewriting the story to make it better!
Disclaimer:I don't own Kingdom Hearts.
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Chapter 1:Lost with no name
It was near the end of summer as the sun shines brightly on the town of Twilight Town. On the brick floor outside of the station laid a figure of a woman.The woman
wore a long white dress.Her long golden blond hair flows in the wind as she wakes in
a haze and looks at her surroundings with jade eyes.
Where am I?
She lifts herself off the ground then dusts off her dress.She then looks back at the town around her.
Do I live here?
The woman wonders around the town until she comes across a clearing which is also
known as the sandlot.
"Hey you!"
The woman turns to face a teenager wearing a long white coat and a black ski hat.
Behind the teenager stand two more figures, a male and a female.The male was muscularly built and wore an orange jersey and a black sweat pant with a red stripe running down on each side. The female had short purple hair and wore a black T-shirt with khaki. The teenager walks up to the blond, “So where did you come from?”
The woman shake her head,"I...don't remember."
"What's your name?"The teen asks.
The blond shakes her head again,"I don't know..."
The teen glared at her."I don't know who you are or where you came from, but it’ll be wise for you to not play stupid with me.”
Just then, another boy enters the Sandlot. This boy also had blond hair and wore a black shirt inscribed with a skull. He also wore a camo pant with matching shoes. He walks over to the two, “Seifer, do you always have to be so mean to people?”
Seifer look towards the boy then back at the blond woman,"But this woman could be
a threat.She must be hiding something since she won't tell me anything."
The woman glared at Seifer,"I told you I don't remember anything!How hard it is to
understand everything I said!"She yelled at him.
Seifer glares at the two with disgust,"Are you aware that you might have let an outsider into the town?"
The boy just gives Seifer a shrug,"Did she say she was an outsider?"
Seifer gives the boy a stern glare before turning his back on him, “Fine. But if she starts any trouble, I’m blaming you guys.” Seifer exits the Sandlot along with his two companions.
The boy goes over to the blond woman,“Sorry about that. Seifer isn’t exactly the welcoming type.” The boy said to her, “Hi, my name’s Hayner. What’s your name?”
“I…” The woman's sentence is put to a halt as two more figures enter the Sandlot.
“Hayner, there you are!” The two runs up to Hayner then looks towards the blond, “Is she new?”The first figure was a boy who wore a red jersey over a white long-sleeve shirt. His blue jeans matches the color of his sneakers and his black hair is held into place by a head band. He looks at the blond, “Hi, I’m Pence.”
The next person to approach the blond was a female with brunet hair. She wore an orange tank top designed with the images of white flowers and also wore khaki. “And my name’s Olette.” The girl stated, “So what’s your name?”
The blond looks to the ground before giving them a slight shake, “I…don’t remember."
“You’re kidding me right? I mean, who can…?” Hayner looks towards the blond to find that her eyes never left the ground, “You weren’t joking were you.” Hayner turns to his two friends, “What should we do? This woman has no memory. Heck…she even forgot her own name!”
“I read about this.” Pence stated, “I think it is called amnesia. It’s when someone suffers from partial or complete loss of memory due to brain injury or shock.”
“That still doesn’t answer my question.” Hayner stated, “What should we do about her?”
“I have an idea!” Olette exclaims, “Why don’t we show her around town?She’s bound to recognize something.”
“That’s a good idea.” Pence replies, “We can also ask around to see if anyone recognizes her.”
They head over to the blond,“How about we show you around town? I’m sure we’ll find something.”
The blond gives him a smile, “You’ll do that for me?”
Hayner mirrors the woman's smile, “Sure.” The three show the woman around the town starting from the Central Station to the Tram Plaza, but they still couldn’t get her to remember and the people they ask don’t seem to recognize her either. After a few hours of searching, they bring the woman to an area they call the Usual Spot. “So what should we do now?” Hayner asks as he sits on top of a box, “Nobody seem to recognize her and she still can’t remember a thing.”
Pence and Olette slump down onto the couch. “Why don’t we try searching the Sunset district?” Olette replies, “If she didn’t come from Twilight Town then maybe she came from the Sunset district.”
“Can we rest for a while?” Pence ask, “We’ve been searching for hours.”
Hayner nods then heads for the exit, “Once you’re done, meet me back at the Central Station.”
The group splits up and went on their separate ways. Still unable to remember anything, the blond decides to take a stroll around the town in order to ease her mind. As she reaches the Tram Plaza,she spots a man setting up a camera, “What are you doing?”
The man turns to look at the blond, “Oh…I’m just trying to take a picture of my shop for the advertisement, but I’m having a problem with the angle.”
The woman heads over towards the camera, “Can I help?” The man nods and the woman start to adjust the camera. After shifting the camera around a couple of times, she manages to get it into the right position, “Got it!”
“Good.” The man gets inside his shop and motions the woman to stand next to the shop, “You helped me so I guess it’s only fair if you get to take a picture as well.” The woman walks to the side of the store and faces forwards as the camera lets out a flash. The man goes over to the camera and takes the photo out of the camera. He then gives the woman the photo, “Here, keep it as reminder and to show my appreciation…” The man walks over to a stack of boxes and starts digging around in the stock and withdraws a silver heart shaped with wings necklace. He hands the necklace to the woman,“Here. Consider yourself as my first customer.”
The woman stares at the necklace for a bit before placing it on her neck, “Thanks." She then heads back to the back alley and makes her way towards the Central Station. They board the train and are taken to the Sunset district. Just like before, they bring the woman to varies locations and ask varies people only to come up with the same result. They head back to the station and ride it back to the town of Twilight Town. They exit the Central Station in time to hear the bells go off from the top of the station’s tower. “Oh no!” Olette exclaims, “I better cook dinner before it hits 7:00.” The group begins to walk away from the station but quickly turns around to find that the blond was still standing in front of the station. Olette turns to the rest of the group, “What should we do about her?My parent won’t allow me to bring a stranger to the house and I don’t think it’s a good idea to leave her in the Usual Spot when it’s cold out.”
“Don’t look at me.” Pence said as he waves his hands in front of him, “My room is full of computers so it’ll be too cramped to fit a guest in.” The group then turns their attention to their leader.
Hayner catches the looks on their faces then lets out a long sigh, “Fine, but she better not bother me.” Hayner grab the woman's hand, “You’re going to stay at my house for the night. My house has a guest room so we can have separate rooms.”
Hayner takes the woman to his house and they are greeted by Hayner’s mother, “Welcome home Hayner. who is this hon?” Hayner leads the woman to the guest room then heads down to explain to his mother, “Look, that woman has completely lost her memory. So I’m letting her stay in the guest room until she regains them.”
His mother nods, “I understand.”
The group heads for the Usual Spot the next morning. “The Struggle Battle Tournament starts tomorrow right? Are you going to enter Hayner?”
Hayner gives the group a nod, “Sure, it’ll be great to enter the tournament for once. Besides, I still want to deal with Seifer.” Their attention turns to the entranceway as the curtain starts to open. The blond enters the area and is greeted the group, “Good morning sleeping beauty.” Hayner gets off the box and walks towards the exit, “I’m going to have a few practice fights with Seifer.”
Olette tries to talk Hayner out of it, “Hayner I don’t think that’s such a…” Hayner was already out the door before she got to finish her sentence.
“Is Hayner in trouble?” The woman asks.
“You can say that.” Pence replies, “If he ticks Seifer off, he’s going to end up with more than a couple of bruises.”
The woman then exits the room, “I’ll make sure he doesn’t.” The woman exits the Usual Spot and heads for the Sandlot where he first met Seifer.
The others let out a sigh as they exit the Usual Spot, “Better make sure those two will be okay.” They rush after the two.
The boy reaches the Sandlot in time to witness Hayner fall to the ground.She rushes over towards him, “Are you okay?”
Seifer looks over at the two then points his plasticclub at the blond, “Hey, you’re that outsider from before. It’s time we settle that fight we never finished.” The woman tries to locate a weapon that she can use, but to no avail.
Hayner wants to help, but was too beaten up to do so. He takes out his plastic sword and hands it to the woman,“Here, it won’t be fair if you fight without a weapon now will it.” The woman nods then grabs the sword before getting into her fighting stance.
Seifer couldn’t help but laugh, “Honestly, do you think you can beat me?” The woman
smirked at him and Seifer glares at him down, “Fine. Let’s get started.”
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Rewriting the story to make it better!
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