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Ashes Remnant

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My feeble attempt at a new style. Not really sure where to go from here, if anywhere.

C and C = <3
 

Enri

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I never understood the crop cut on the side.

More BG rather than white. Going in a nice direction nonetheless.
 

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this from a tutorial?

Anyway, I don't like the flower thing, it looks ugly and distracting. Sharpen up the stock, and maybe add a few c4ds around the stock. Other than that, I like the pentooling.

Also, make it smaller and lose the clipping mask thing.
 

Ashes Remnant

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this from a tutorial?

Anyway, I don't like the flower thing, it looks ugly and distracting. Sharpen up the stock, and maybe add a few c4ds around the stock. Other than that, I like the pentooling.

Also, make it smaller and lose the clipping mask thing.

Yeah, parts of it were from a tut, but mainly just the ideas from it. 99% is from my own head.

Thanks for the CnC guys, love you two. =D
 

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The crop? or reflection is distracting in my eyes, and also the yellow streak is giving me a headache. Having bits of the pink on her back is bad... No actually most of her back is ugly. Other than that it's fine.
 

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you're definitely heading in a good direction, and i think the flower looks nice :3
but, that turquoise thing on the left of her shoulder should be carried on more throughout the background someway, or possible just the color.
 
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