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Naruto - The Betrayal [OOC & Sign Ups



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Naruto : The Betrayal [裏切り]

Through out the ages, villages and countries of the world of shinobi have lived in stages of peace. Within each age, what many know to be ninja have gathered together to provide defenses for each of their villages, and have provided evolutionary jutsus and techniques to better protect themselves. However, in hand with each stage of peace came one of near destruction. Here our story begins.

New Kages have risen and fallen as their ages have passed by. One Kage in the Village Hidden in the Leaves in particular had been considered to be the most renowned Hokage thus far. He had been trusted through out the shinobi world and the Leaf Village was in perfect balance. This eve was prosperous until one of the village’s honorable counsel members left after getting into a heated argument with the Hokage about how the village should be formed. Not soon after, the Hokage suffered from an unidentifiable curse that no one knew how to cure. This mysterious curse ultimately leads to his death.

It is said that that counsel member had left to create his own village, naming it the Village of Dawn. The uprising of Dawn and the death of the Leaf Village’s Hokage has set the Leaf Village out of balance and open for potential attack. The remainders of the counsel members have bonded together and have tried to serve their village to the best of their abilities. However, the Leaf Village is struggling to remain in control without a Hokage. As the Dawn Village comes steadily into power, the Leaf Village begins to fear the Dawn Village and sends spies to observe what makes them such a threat.

The Dawn Village is uprising, and sides are taken to a village that was once powerful or a village that is becoming powerful by shinobi determining which they favor. In this stage, the Leaf Village lacks a leader Hokage and the Dawn Village is on the brink of declaring war.

This, not being the only problem has given Konoha more reason to be afraid. The Akatsuki have reformed, better, and worse than last time. With the members it seems that they are becoming a threat and are trying to overpower the Shinobi world once again. Konoha realizing that they need a leader have made truths with the Dawn Village long enough until the Akatsuki are stopped, or at least that is what it seems like.


Some Information​

Villages

Hidden Leaf Village

Hidden Mist Village

Hidden Waterfall Village

Hidden Sand Village

Hidden Sound Village

Hidden Grass Village

Hidden Rain Village

Hidden Cloud Village

Hidden Stone Village

Hidden Dawn Village

Ranks

Genin

Chuunin

Specialized Jounin

Jounin

Specialized(ANBU, Medical Ninja, and more)

Jutsus

Taijutsus

Ninjutsus

Genjutsus

Bloodline Limit Jutsus

Forbidden Jutsus​

Rules

1. Full Biography (At least 2 paragraphs, more are always welcomed.)

2. Literacy is a must. Use spell check if necessary.

3. No God Modding or Powerplaying

4. You must post at least two paragraphs when you post

5. Keep Romance PG-13

6. No spamming

7. You are allowed to curse

8. No one is perfect

9.You will be allowed to have your own personal comment on whatever post/action/etc will be displayed in front of you.

10. No flaming or machine gun posting please

11. If you have any other questions about the RP just ask please

12. Also you can't kill in surprise and then stab them unless you ask.

13. Any other KHI RP rules

14. If you are going to have a demon inside of you ask me first

15. If there are more then three for a clan you can.

16. You can create your own clan just don’t make it god modding

17. Please some people be with Dawn Village and Akatsuki so the RP is good.

18. No one will be the Kage of any village of right now.​

Template​

Name:

Age:

Personality:

Village:

Ninja Rank:

Appearance:

Weapons: (if you want any)

Demon (PM me asking if you want one):

Side (Against or With Dawn Village or Akatsuki):

Clan/Bloodline (optional if you make your own please explain or describe it):

Element: (May only have three. If using any elemental outside your element it uses 15% more chakra to perform unless you are Uchiha)

Extra (if you character is a medical ninja or anbu etc.):

Bio:

Jutsus: (Please limit yourself)​
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Approved:
Relliks Ban
Shattered Redemption- All Three
TWDIS-(with some editing)
anbu2
Kissui Tensai- both
Ankoku
obbsessed fan
Chariot of Fire
Reckless Choas- Both
Shadow Denizen
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TWDIS

Guest
Name: Kazune Uchiha

Age:???

Personality: cold merciless serious stoic enigma. being in the akatsuki he isn't very friendly. he is mostly cold to everyone except most Akatsuki members. he usually does missions without question and followes orders.

Village: leaf village missing ninja

Ninja Rank: S

Appearance: long black spiky hair down to about his waist. he has dark eyes like most of the Uchiha but mostly they are red due to almost always having his sharingan activated. he is 6 feet tall and wears the Akatsuki robe.
Weapons:(Demon: none

Side: against the Dawn Village

Clan/Bloodline (optional if you make your own please explain or describe it): Uchiha Clan

Element: Fire,Lightning,Water


Bio: Kazune was a high ranked Ninja of the hidden leaf village. being among the Uchiha he was held among high reguard. but when the Hokage fell and the village was betrayed he knew it would be tossed into a state of chaos with no leadership. he packed his belongings. his brother came to him to try and stop him but Kazune wouldn't listen. Kazune wanted to join the organization Akatsuki and knew he needed amazing skills. with this thought in mind he told his brother to meet him in the forest. here he overpowered and killed his brother taking his eyes. that night he gained the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. he went to Akatsuki and they gladly let him in after he showed his powers. after awhile he became cold and stoic. he left behind his friends. his family and everything he called home. he knew the villages were corrupted and would soon most likely fall to the dawn village. he wouldn't be among this villages. he and the akatsuki would rule the world. he would complete his missions without question. kill without regret. this was why the Akatsuki favored him. this is what earned him the title Crimson Eyed Demon. fear would come to those who heard his name. for years and years to come....




Jutsus:

-Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
-Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.


-Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves-

Chidori Nagashi-

Chidori Sword- a long sword of Lightning extends from the users hand cutting through almost anything-

-Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique-

After forming the necessary hand seals, a black mist will emit from his body and rise into the sky. Black clouds will form, releasing a flammable rain of oil onto his targets.

Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique-

Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.

Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique

Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique

Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.


I will reveal more jutsus when the RP starts lol.
 
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Make way for Hotaru Raiken hoes! I be joining latah. Gotta get my temp up and what not, but I be tired, so I'll do it tomorrow. ^_^
Yes! Your joining, wonder what you will do with your template.

Anyway, I'll be glad to see your templates once you post them.
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Name: Kaguya Rosuto

Age: ?

Personality: Rosuto has a massive inferiority complex, and generally will do anything he is told to by others for fear of not being accepted by his peers (or sometimes enemies for that matter); he is extremely gulliable. He always believes others are above him, even if they clearly are not. On the other hand, he also has a breaking point; should Rosuto be pushed too far, he will bite back (should the right provocation be made).

Village: Iwagakure

Ninja Rank: S- Rank Missing Nin

Appearance: Kaguya Rosuto

Weapons:

Special Kunai: A special Kunai Rosuto uses for some of his jutsu

Demon: Nibi (Two-Tailed Demon Cat)- The two-tailed cat was imbued within Cloud kunoichi Nii Yugito. The Nibi appears to have the ability to emit balls of spectral-like fire. Highly destructive, the Nibi is also known as an "ikiryou" or living ghost.


Side: Akatsuki [even though he does not care for them]

Clan/Bloodline:
Kaguya have an abnormal Blood Line limit which involves their bones. They have the ability to change their skeleton frame anyway they wish with their clan ability: Shikotsu Myaku (Corpse Bone Pathways). They can increase the density and calcium to harden their bones to make them harder then steel.

Element: Earth, Water, Lightning

Extra: ?

Bio: All of Rosuto’s clan was killed when they tried to fight the Mist Shinobi. Luckily, for Rosuto the Mist shinobi spared his life since he was young. They banished him from the land, leaving Rosuto all alone with no one. He traveled for days, reaching the Earth Country. They took him in not knowing who he exactly was at the moment. He was trained to be one of the top Jonin of the country. The day became a Jonin he showed everyone who he really was, even though he had the ability to do so all along.

When he became a Jonin that same day, he left the Country, and tried to join the Akatsuki. At first there were no spots, until Rosuto killed a member of the Akatsuki so he could join. He did this in front of everyone letting them know he wasn’t a push over. He is considered an S – Rank Jonin after killing most of the men of one small village. Even though Rosuto is with the Akatsuki, he does not truly believe their ideas, and only wants to get power from them. He has been somewhat planning to over throw them, but does not know if he truly should or just continuing to do as they say.

Rosuto, now being the leader of the Akatsuki, with his partner have made it even better then what it was before. He rose up into the ranks, by earning it himself, or by killing the rest of the members. Rosuto being one of the two leaders have advanced the Akatsuki and he is known to be a threat himself.

Jutsus:

[Clan Jutsu]

Shikotsu Myaku (Corpse Bone Pathways)
Type: C Rank
The Kaguya Clan uses this to slowly master their bloodline powers. This jutsu lasts the entire match. This jutsu must be activated in order to use any of the other of the Kaguya's Secret Jutsu.

Teshi Sendan (Ten Finger Drilling Bullets)
Type: B Rank -- Offensive
The user will use their fingers to fire their distal phalange bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact.

Yanagi no Mai (Dance of the Willows)
Type: B Rank -- Offensive
This jutsu is the first of five dance forms. The user will grow and extend a forearm bone through the palm of their hand to form a stabbing instrument. Using fluid and precise movements, they will then impale their opponents.

Tsubaki no Mai (Dance of the Camellia)
Type: A Rank -- Offensive
This jutsu is the second of five dance forms. The user will remove a long bone in the form of a sword from their shoulder. Because of the bloodline, the density of the bone can be increased many times so that it is as hard as steel. Using fluid and precise movements, they will then cut through any opponent within striking distance.

Karamatsu no Mai (Dance of the Larch)
Type: A Rank -- Offensive, Defensive
This jutsu is the third of five dance forms. The user will begin to extend multiple bones from their body, both from their rib cage and radius and ulna. Because they are hard as steel, these bones can act as a strong defensive mechanism against incoming strikes. Due to this they will also serve as an offensive attack to allow the user to move with little effort to impale their opponent.

Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru (Dance of the Clematis: Vine)
Type: S Rank -- Offensive
This jutsu is one of two forms of the fourth of five dance forms.
The user will remove their spinal column from their back to create a flexible bone vine. Because the vine is flexible, it can wrap itself around an opponent to rip them to pieces.

Tessenka no Mai: Hana (Dance of the Clematis: Flower)
Type: S Rank -- Offensive
This jutsu is one of two forms of the fourth of five dance forms. Using this dance, the user will form a large flowering bone spear from their arm which they can also use to pierce any shield their opponent raises. The spear is said to be nearly indestructible.

Sawarabi no Mai (Dance of the Young Ferns)
Type: SS Rank -- Unknown
This jutsu is the fifth of five dance forms. The user quickly grows a multitude of tall spikes from their body to create a large forest of bone. While in this form they can merge into the bone trees to attack his target from whichever spike they want.

[Earth Element]

Rank: A - Ninjutsu
Name: Shoi no Sankyou (Act of Gorge)
Description: User uses half of his chakra to make the very ground split apart so wide that it creates a permanent gorge.
Effect: Very deep hole with no possible escape since you have things falling on top of the enemy. Could be bad if you get caught in it.

Rank: B - Ninjutsu
Name: Daichi Kabe Saihen no Jutsu (Earth Wall Shrapnel Technique)
Description: Using the handseals and unlocking the jutsu will allow the user to create a tall, thick wall which they will slam their fist into, breaking the wall appart with such force that shrapnel like debris spreads everywhere in a disastrous attack.
Effect: Shrapnel death!

Rank: B - Ninjutsu
Name: Daichi Dageki Nami no Jutsu (Earth Shock Wave Technique)
Description: After creating the handseals, the User will slam their foot onto the ground, sending out a shock wave that pushes the earth up and away from the user in a wide, mile long diameter.
Effect: Throws all characters, minus the user from the area.

Rank: A - Taijutsu
Name: Ishi Resshin (One Fingered Earthquake)
Description: By collect a large amount of chakra into one solitary finger, the user can smash it into the ground to cause a disasterous earthquake.
Effect: Causes earthquake.

Rank: C - Ninjutsu
Name: Kyojin Doriru Iwa no Jutsu (Titan Drill Rock Technique)
Description: Using handseals that unlock the jutsu, the user will dig their hands into the ground and extract a massive spiral-shaped rock from the ground that they will throw at the enemy like a spear.
Effect: Large offensive attack.

Rank: D - Ninjutsu
Name: Boruda-kikku no Jutsu (Boulder Kick Technique)
Description: User performs the handseals that allow the user to smash their foot in the ground quickly and launch a large amount of earth and rocks in a kick motion at the enemy.
Effect: A quick and fast attack.

Rank: E - Ninjutsu
Name: Iwa Bunshin no Jutsu (Rock Clone Technique)
Description: Creates up to two clones made of Rock and Earth.
Effect: Creates two reinforced clones that have the potential of being used for other rock jutsus.

Rank: E - Ninjutsu
Name: Ishi Shuriken no Jutsu (Stone Shuriken Technique)
Description: User forms handseals that allow stones to be used like shuriken.
Effect: Shuriken are not as strong as steal but stronger than iron.

[Water Element]

Rank: B - Ninjutsu
Name: Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu (Water Element: Water Dragon Projectile Technique)
Description: The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.
Effect: Dragon crunch?

Rank: C - Ninjutsu
Name: Suiton: Suijinheki (Water Element: Water Encampment Wall)
Description: The ninja will first do a string of handseals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water to act as a barrier from an incoming attack.
Effect: Barrier or blast effect.

Rank: C - Ninjutsu
Name: Suiton: Suikoudan no Jutsu (Water Element: Water Shark Projectile Technique)
Description: The string of handseals will cause a column of water to rise and then strike the target.
Effect: Blunt force trauma.

Rank: B - Ninjutsu
Name: Suiton: Suishouha (Water Element: Water Collision Destruction)
Description: The user does a string of hand seals which then causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.
Effect: Vortex of death!

Rank: D - Ninjutsu
Name: Suiton: Suigadan (Water Element: Water Fang Projectile)
Description: The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.
Effect: Causes a drill-type damage.

Rank: C - Ninjutsu
Name: Suiton: Teppoudama (Water Element: Bullet)
Description: After forming the necessary hand seals, the user manifests a large amount of water in his mouth which he can then spit at his opponent as a large spherical projectile.
Effect: Blast effect.

[Lightning Jutsu]

Name:Chidori (Thousand Birds)
Rank:A-rank- Ninjutsu
Descriptions: Activating the body to focus chakra to the hand, the user's hand becomes enveloped by an electrical looking force. After concentrating all the chakra into the arm, the user then uses their quickness and the power of the thrust from the chakra to pierce any object with the extended forearm. Due to the high speed, the force emits a sound like a thousand birds chirping which gave the technique its name.

Rank: B - Ninjutsu
Name: Raikou Tate no Jutsu (Lightning Shield Technique)
Description: Creating the handseals will cause molecules before the user to become energized and cause electrons to create a very dense barrier that's related to something like solid lightning... lasting only about five seconds before dissipating.

[Forbidden Jutsu]

Rank: SX - Ninjutsu
Name: Seki no Jigoku (Gate of Hell)
Description: Expending all their chakra... a person can open up a crack in the earth's techtonic plates so deep and so wide that the molten center of the earth is exposed.
Effect: A very gallant way to go, obviously no escape. Creates a very dramatic good-bye. Doesn't help if the person can fly.

Rank: SX - Ninjutsu
Name: Suiton: Kenma Mizu Tama no Jutsu (Water Element: Grinding Water Sphere Technique)
Description: A massive sphere will be created by the user after all the handseals are completed, enclosing around a large group of people. Once covered, the user will use a trigger word "kujiku" to make the sphere of water compress like water pressure, destroying those within from all around their bodies.
Effect: Squishy death.
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Name: Ryu Kaiku

Age: ?

Ryu Personality: Ryu is hardworking and knows his value. He is however arrogant and short tempered. Anyone insulting him better be ready to receive a punch or two. Training and power is essential part of his life. He has no close friends or enemies. Quite by nature he does not enter into shouting competitions with anyone. He is calm and collected most of the time. While in a battle Ryu does not lose his head or give in to his short temper. It would be rare to see him lose his cool even during the toughest battle. He knows well what happens to men who charge ahead mindlessly disregarding danger and forgetting their own strength.

Village: Born in Konoha and trained in Kumo

Ninja Rank: Snake Sannin

Appearance: Ryu Takashida

Weapons:

Kunai: This throwing knife is one of the common weapons of a ninja. It is often kept in a holster on the leg in a pouch attached to the belt.

The Kunai can be used in conjunction with explosive tags and other weapons to form deadly combos.

Smoke Bombs: Does exactly what is said

Shuriken: Another common weapon, the shuriken is often kept in a holster on the leg or in a pouch attached to the belt.

Exploding Tags: The exploding note is a piece of parchment paper which has script on it that serves to faciltate its explosive properties. The ninja can attach the note to another object such as a kunai or log. When the note is set it begins a slow burn which results in a large explosion.

Concealed Mouth Ember: When going into battle, a ninja may store a small combustible ember in their mouth. The ember must be bitten to be activated. The ninja can then spit the ember at a combustible substance to help ignite it.

Name:Kusanagi Sword: Long Sword of the Heavens
Descriptions: The sword can cut through almost any object, its blade can extend to many times its normal length. The sword also amplifies One Thousand Birds Current jutsu. (Looks like Sasuke Uchiha's sword)

Demon: None

Side: On his own

Clan/Bloodline: None

Element: Lightning and Earth

Extra: None

Bio: When Ryu was born, he was lucky. His father had a small remnant of a special clan in him. Even though the father never knew and was never able to access the power of a true clan, Ryu was. Ryu became a talented shinobi at a young age, for example graduating the Academy at the age of 7. The next year he became a Genin. It seemed he was so talented because of his father and mother, who’d been ANBU. Ryu did not want to be like them though. One day, his family had been attacked inside their own home and Ryu’s family had been killed. Ryu was only ten when this happened, but something amazing happened that night.

He accessed the powers of a true clan, killing one of the three men that had entered Ryu’s house and killing his family. He was too weak to kill the rest but being able to hurt them was enough. In a couple of days he had found a guardian who helped him. Ryu and the man traveled to Kumo where Ryu was trained and lived for the most of his life. Ryu found out how to make himself stronger, which was by killing a person who is closest to you. Ryu knew he would not kill his master, until he finally recognized who the man had been. He had been one of the people who murdered Ryu’s family.

Getting revenge he killed the man, with no true emotions about it. He had completely developed himself the true image of the clan and was only left with his new Genin team. They had become close to Ryu and had all passed the Chuunin exams. They were all selected to become Chuunin in the end.

Once this had happened, Ryu, and whoever he worked with focused on his mission. After two years, they had chosen him to become a Jonin, which Ryu had honored. Over time Ryu developed as a shinobi, earning himself a new title, the Snake Sannin. He is known around the country and honored in most places.

Ryu seeking power went looking for it. He searched for the one man who knew that would give it to him, Orochimaru. Ryu was accepted to be trained by him, Ryu demanded one thing though. To not have a Curse Mark. He wanted it to be his own power and not help from something else. Even though with his crazy man, Ryu kept true to himself about what his plans. He did what Orochimaru told him to do, only to be safe. After living for a long time, Ryu realized that he was immortal and will only die if he is killed.

Jutsus:

[Lightning Jutsu]

Name:Rairyuu no Tatsumaki ( Lightning Dragon Tornado)
Rank: S
Type:Lightning
Details:Gaining the power of Raijuu element Kai simply makes a hand seal the uses the lightning current that will be contained within. He will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon and strike out against his opponent. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Name: Chidori Nagashi, 千鳥流し, One Thousand Birds Current"
Rank: S
Description:This jutsu allows Kai to cover himself in electricity, instead of just concentrating it in his hand. The electricity can be channeled anywhere, allowing Kai to enhance his attacks with it.

Rank: B - Ninjutsu
Name: Raikou Tate no Jutsu (Lightning Shield Technique)
Description: Creating the handseals will cause molecules before the user to become energized and cause electrons to create a very dense barrier that's related to something like solid lightning... lasting only about five seconds before dissipating.

Name:Chidori (Thousand Birds)
Rank:A-rank- Ninjutsu
Descriptions: Activating the body to focus chakra to the hand, the user's hand becomes enveloped by an electrical looking force. After concentrating all the chakra into the arm, the user then uses their quickness and the power of the thrust from the chakra to pierce any object with the extended forearm. Due to the high speed, the force emits a sound like a thousand birds chirping which gave the technique its name.


[Earth Jutsu]

Rank: B - Ninjutsu
Name: Daichi Kabe Saihen no Jutsu (Earth Wall Shrapnel Technique)
Description: Using the handseals and unlocking the jutsu will allow the user to create a tall, thick wall which they will slam their fist into, breaking the wall appart with such force that shrapnel like debris spreads everywhere in a disastrous attack.
Effect: Shrapnel death!

Rank: A - Ninjutsu
Name: Shoi no Sankyou (Act of Gorge)
Description: User uses half of his chakra to make the very ground split apart so wide that it creates a permanent gorge.
Effect: Very deep hole with no possible escape since you have things falling on top of the enemy. Could be bad if you get caught in it.

Rank: D - Ninjutsu
Name: Boruda-kikku no Jutsu (Boulder Kick Technique)
Description: User preforms the handseals that allow the user to smash their foot in the ground quickly and launch a large amount of earth and rocks in a kick motion at the enemy.
Effect: A quick and fast attack.

Rank: E - Ninjutsu
Name: Ishi Shuriken no Jutsu (Stone Shuriken Technique)
Description: User forms handseals that allow stones to be used like shuriken.
Effect: Shuriken are not as strong as steal but stronger than iron.

[The Big Summons of Snakes]

Name:Manda
Rank: X
Type: Summoning
Description: Manda is the largest and most powerful summoned snake. He demands one hundred human sacrifices ready for him for after his help in combat. Should he not receive his sacrifices he would not hesitate to kill his summoner. Some of his greatest abilities include his unbelievable speed, and the fact that he is able to shed his skin as a use of a Body Replacement Technique.

Name:Kyodaija
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Descirption:The Kyodaija are giant snakes, often summoned during battle. There are many different kinds of Kyodaija. For instance, the three Kyodaija that were summoned during the invasion of Konoha had marks on their skin similar to the Cursed Seal of Heaven, while the ones summoned by Orochimaru in the Forest of Death had no such marks. Anko Mitarashi also summoned a blue-colored snake of similar size during the Sea Country filler arc to protect Naruto, Shino, and Ino from a cave-in. The four took shelter within its mouth as it broke free of the cave.

Name:Twin Snakes Mutual Death Technique
Rank: B - Rank , Short range (0-5m)
Type: Summoning
Descriptions: This forbidden jutsu is a murder/suicide attack – killing both the user and the target. The user makes a one-handed seal with both their hand and the intended victim's. Two snakes are then summoned from the user's sleeve, biting both their wrists and killing them by deadly venom.

Name: Hidden Shadow Many Snakes Hand
Rank: B
Type Summon
Description: This jutsu is similar to the Hidden Shadow Snake Hand, but with far more snakes. In addition, these snakes can stretch too much greater lengths.

Name: Hidden Shadow Snake Hand
Rank: C
Type Summon
Description: This jutsu allows the user to project a number of snakes from their wrist or sleeve as they make a punching motion towards their intended target. The snakes can be used to inflict multiple wounds at a distance or hold a target in place. The snakes are even capable of poisoning the victim.


Name: Leech All Creation: Attack Prevention Technique
Rank: B
Description: Using this jutsu, the user can merge with another object and take on its properties to avoid any damage. Then can appear from different within range from the original tree you merged with.

Forbidden Jutsu:

Rank: SX - Ninjutsu
Name: Seki no Jigoku (Gate of Hell)
Description: Expending all their chakra... a person can open up a crack in the earth's techtonic plates so deep and so wide that the molten center of the earth is exposed.
Effect: A very gallant way to go, obviously no escape. Creates a very dramatic good-bye. Doesn't help if the person can fly.
 
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Name: Kazune Uchiha

Age: 21

Personality: cold merciless serious stoic enigma. being in the akatsuki he isn't very friendly. he is mostly cold to everyone except most Akatsuki members. he usually does missions without question and followes orders.

Village: leaf village missing ninja

Ninja Rank: S

Appearance: he looks like Madara Uchiha.
Weapons:(Demon: none

Side: against the Dawn Village

Clan/Bloodline (optional if you make your own please explain or describe it): Uchiha Clan

Element: Fire,Lightning,Water


Bio: Kazune was a high ranked Ninja of the hidden leaf village. being among the Uchiha he was held among high reguard. but when the Hokage fell and the village was betrayed he knew it would be tossed into a state of chaos with no leadership. he packed his belongings. his brother came to him to try and stop him but Kazune wouldn't listen. Kazune wanted to join the organization Akatsuki and knew he needed amazing skills. with this thought in mind he told his brother to meet him in the forest. here he overpowered and killed his brother taking his eyes. that night he gained the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. he went to Akatsuki and they gladly let him in after he showed his powers. after awhile he became cold and stoic. he left behind his friends. his family and everything he called home. he knew the villages were corrupted and would soon most likely fall to the dawn village. he wouldn't be among this villages. he and the akatsuki would rule the world. he would complete his missions without question. kill without regret. this was why the Akatsuki favored him. this is what earned him the title Crimson Eyed Demon. fear would come to those who heard his name. for years and years to come....




Jutsus:

-Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
-Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.


-Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves-

Chidori Nagashi-

Chidori Sword- a long sword of Lightning extends from the users hand cutting through almost anything-

-Kokuun no Jutsu - Black Clouds Technique-

After forming the necessary hand seals, a black mist will emit from his body and rise into the sky. Black clouds will form, releasing a flammable rain of oil onto his targets.

Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique-

Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.

Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique

Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.

Housenka no Jutsu - Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique

Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.


I will reveal more jutsus when the RP starts lol.
I'm going to comment on alot of stuff in your temp.

Your appearance is horrible. I know you can do better then "Looks like Madara Uchiha.

You never explained why your a Uhicha since they were wiped out so long ago. Nor did you explain how you found out about Mangekyou, acheieved Mangekyou, and learned about Eternal Mangekyou which were very hidden secrets so I doubt you found out. Please explain.

First you need to learn chidori to know any Chidori techniques. First you have to learn from Kakashi or Sasuke the Chidori which I doubt they would teach you then you have to learn the other moves from Sasuke which I doubt he would teach you because he doesn't teach moves. Again please explain.

Felix, i'm going to be using a Uchiha with explainations that's part of the Akatsuki and another character that I must pm you for something about this character.

Also Felix, you can't have the Flying Thunder God Jutsu. It's impossible because no one knows the formula he uses.
 

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I'm going to comment on alot of stuff in your temp.

Your appearance is horrible. I know you can do better then "Looks like Madara Uchiha.

You never explained why your a Uhicha since they were wiped out so long ago. Nor did you explain how you found out about Mangekyou, acheieved Mangekyou, and learned about Eternal Mangekyou which were very hidden secrets so I doubt you found out. Please explain.

First you need to learn chidori to know any Chidori techniques. First you have to learn from Kakashi or Sasuke the Chidori which I doubt they would teach you then you have to learn the other moves from Sasuke which I doubt he would teach you because he doesn't teach moves. Again please explain.

Felix, i'm going to be using a Uchiha with explainations that's part of the Akatsuki and another character that I must pm you for something about this character.

Also Felix, you can't have the Flying Thunder God Jutsu. It's impossible because no one knows the formula he uses.
Sorry, I skipped TWDIS appearance reading the Bio and such. If you could please explain what RC asked you to I think your template will be alright. If you need an appearance ask me, since I have tons.

RC, I deleted the jutsu you told me to. Glad you are joining since I we need more people.
 
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Name:
Hotaru Raiken

Age:
28

Personality:
At times, Hotaru can act like the small genin he once was, years ago. But his mature and serious side has taken over the majority of Hotaru's personality. He still tends to act out in bursts of randomness, and can be a pervert still....but then again, who the hell isn't!? XD

Village:
Kumo

Ninja Rank:
Jonin

Appearance:
Mr. Raiken

Weapons:

Kunai Knives: The basic ninja tool for all shinobi, mostly introduced to young Genin. A sharp daggerlike weapon to carve up enemies and opponents.

Demon Wind Shuriken: A shuriken shaped into the form of a windmill, excellent for cutting through the air and through enemies. Its rotation is what makes it such an impressive ninja tool.

Shuriken: One of the starter ninja tools used in various combinations. Shuriken are the equivalent of darts to be thrown can more or less immobilize an opponent temporarily. .

Tools:
Breath Mask-
The breath mask allows the user to breath under water, and in most harsh air conditions.

File-
A file is normally hidden within the clothing of the ninja, if captured, the file can be withdrawn from its secret location to file and cut through metal.

Scrolls-
Scrolls remain one of the most important pieces of equipment in a ninja's arsenal. Because of their size, multiple scrolls can be carried into battle in the front pouches of a flak jacket or in a pouch. This will save space and not sacrifice a much needed piece of equipment which may be required later. The scroll allows the ninja to summon creatures, people and items to their aid.

Mirror-
When the ninja wants to avoid putting themself directly in the possible line of attack, they can use the mirror to peak around corners to ensure the path is clear. The mirror is kept in a scroll.

Wire-
Wire can be used in several situations. It can allow the ninja to create trip wire explosive traps, it can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent.

Side:
Unknown at the moment. He is currently leading a mission to find out the intentions of the new Dawn Village.

Element:
Lightning/Water/Snow

Bio:
Over the years Hotaru has accomplished a lot. He's overcome the difficulties of growing up with no parents. He battled his way through the ninja Academy of Kumo, to finally get the chance to become a shinobi. He was appointed a team of three, three people who would not only become his best friends, but his family as well. His sensei, Daaku Raito, proved to be an amazing teacher. He put him and his teammates through harsh training, and intense battling. But it all proved to be for the better in the end. Hotaru has been on many missions, learned many jutsu, and gained many friends in the process.


And while on that trip to the snow village, Hotaru trained under a master of the snow element. Already having basic control over his water element, he soon learned the wonder of snow. Hotaru was now illegible to take the Jonin exam, which would allow him to become a Jonin instructor. Seeing as Hotaru was one of the strongest Jonin in Kumo, and currently the only one not on a mission.....the Raikage instructed him to go to the Dawn Village and find information on the village, and hopefully form an alliance.

Jutsus:
1. Raiton: Lightning Clone Jutsu
Similar to the Shadow Clone Jutsu, this jutsu has a base of which to clone. The clones start out as lightning, and soon gain the charactersitics of Hotaru. When destroyed, unlike the Shadow Clone Jutsu, the clones send an electrical charge through the person who destroyed them, which may cause a few seconds of parslisation. ~Lightning~ C-rank

2. Raiton: Dosshiri Lightning Clone Jutsu (Massive lightning clone)
Like the Lightnig Clone jutsu, this jutsu creates clones with a lighting mass. But unlike the orginal, which only creates from three to five lightning bunshi, Dosshiri Lightning Clone jutsu creates a massive amount of Clones. The number ranges from 100 to 1000. The most clone Hotaru has created with this jutsu is just around 200...so far. ~Lightning~ A-rank

3. Name: Dendou Bakuhatsu no Jutsu (Electric Detonation Technique)
Flashing a number of Hand seals, Hotaru causes all lightning bunshins that are under his specific control to explode into a burst of electricity, shocking anyone that happens to be near them.
~Lightning~ C-rank

4. Raiton: Hiryuu Chidori no Jutsu(Lightning Release: Flying plover Dragon technique)- After quickly making an incomplete chidori attack in his hand Hotaru runs forward and thrusts his hand up. This results in a lightning dragon attack that sweeps around the opponent and shocks them severely causing moderate damage. This jutsu has 100% accuracy when water is nearby, or it is raining outside.....or inside for that matter.~Lightning~ B-rank

5. Raiton: Myaku Baasuto no Jutsu(Lightning Release: Pulse Burst Jutsu)- This is both a taijutsu and ninjutsu skill that involves covering the base of the feet, or hands with electricity to cause a shock that disrupts the nerves in an opponent when they are hit. This can cause paralysis, and in some cases instant death……..~Lightning~ A-rank

6. Bukujutsu(sky dance skill, fly)-This is the technique that allows the user to fly, float or walk in the air while controlling his/her chakra. Daaku explains that anyone with sufficient power and the proper training can learn the ability. Hotaru simply controls his energy and pushes out from underneath him allowing him to fly. ~Suplimentary~

7. Raiton: Lightning yadama (Lightning Arrow)- Hotaru opens his palms, and concentrates on his chakra, forming an arrow in his hand. Hotaru makes a fist, and he can make any movement with his hand and send an arrow flying. Depending on the hand movement and power depends on the speed of the Arrow. This doesn't mean that any movement sends out an arrow. This jutsu only works when Hotaru concentrates on the chakra stored in his hadns. Over the past few years, Hotaru has been able to control the jutsu more, and it's power has been multiplied. Hotaru can now only say the jutsu once, and it will be in effect for little over 5 days, but doesn't drain his chakra unless an arrow is shot out. ~Lightning~ A-rank

8. Kisaki Furea Sashijou no Jutsu(Empress Flare Bolt Technique)- Waves o energy swell out from Hotaru as he uses the appropriate signs for the jutsu. Each swell of lightning charka ripples in layers that as Hotaru moves disrupt the internal balance of not only opponent’s charka, but also their nerve reactions. Getting close to up to 3 enemies whom are no more than 5, or 6 meters apart, Hotaru releases the lightning charka, and a seal-like ring locks opponents in place. Leaping, and doing an additional set of hand signs, Hotaru watches as red lightning streaks across the sky, and hits his enemies, using into the ring of charka, causing a blast of dark lightning energy ~Lightning~ A-rank


9.Rensa Raikou no Jutsu (Chain Lightning Technique)
A useful technique generally used in an attempt to take out a group of enemies by surprise. Forming electricity into both hands the Cloud Nin launches a continuous stream of Lightning at one opponent, if the technique hits one person it immediately launches itself at the next non-friendly person in range. The lightning chain specifically targets water that is found in the body, so bunshins are generally left untouched unless it's a Water Bunshin. The original number of targets this jutsu can initially hit is three. ~Lightning~ B-rank


10.Hando no Semeku (Hands of Torture)
Considered by most to be more of a torture technique then an actual attack the user can lay his hands on his opponent and send several thousands of volts of electricity into the target. Depending how many times a Cloud-Nin has hit the opponent with this will depend on what happens. One time of being hit by this technique causes minor burns, chest constrictions, blurred vision, and overall pain. An additional time of being hit by this any other time during the battle will cause on-site second-degree burns, partial blindness, and an inability to breathe. A third case of exposure will cause a third degree burn on the spot that the hands touched and will cause major orificial hemorrhaging cause by internal bleeding, and unconsciousness. The fourth exposure causes death, and pretty much leaves the area smelling like burnt flesh. ~Lightning~ A-rank

11. Dengeki no Jutsu (Electric Shock Technique): Hotaru fuses special kunai with his raiton chakra and puts them in the ground. Anything standing between two of these kunai will have a constant current of electricity running through them that keeps them from moving for two minutes. The knives can be up to 10 feet apart. ~Lightning~ C-rank

12. Kaizen Yuki Bunshin No Jutsu (Improved Snow Clone Technique)
Description: An improvement upon the first and somewhat inferior Yuki bunshin. Using advanced knowledge and chakra control this jutsu comes into light. Compacting snow and water together to form a very dense and durable clone, this new Yuki bunshin is no longer considered "weak" among anything else. The difference between this clone and its previous is that his clone is more compact, fully capable of withstanding more than one blow. It is also able to house items and weapons within its stomach or upon itself if the user feels like placing such a thing inside or upon them. ~Snow~ B-rank

13. Yukikeiji (Snow Apocolypse)
By manipulating the moisture within the atmosphere up far into the skies, Hotaru is able to make about fifty giant comets made entirely out of snow. These comets descend upon a targeted area, filled with chakra and ready to explode as soon as they make contact. This jutsu brings new word to long range artillery and is only used in the most dire of situations. These comets each explode with the force of four exploding tags. ~Snow~ A-rank

14. Nadare No Jutsu (Avalanche Technique)
This jutsu requires a very large amount of snow. By focusing 50% of his chakra into the snow directly infront of him,Hotaru is able to make a large tsunami of snow rise up into the air. This wave is able of destroying an entire army of ninja and has been forbidden to be used inside of Yukigakure or Hidden Snow unless there is no other way to defeat an opponent. This wave continues on its path of destruction, trapping anyone and anything caught in its path beneath the pure white depths. Only the user is able to avoid this technique by being directly behind the technique itself. ~Snow~ A-rank

15. Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu (Water Explosion Technique)This technique is a technique that forms a strong column of water to attack the oppoenent. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as it pulls them away. ~Water~ A-rank

16. Yukitama Renda No Jutsu (Snowball Barrage Technique)
By compacting snow into a group of twenty small snowballs, Hotaru is able to freeze them into a very dense state. Once this is performed the user is able to send this snowballs in a barrage towards any target they desire but once they are launched their direction cannot be changed. These snowballs each exploding with the power of an exploding tag. Usually this technique is used in a mortar sort of offensive, more useful in long range combat than upclose. ~Snow~ C-rank

17. Lightning Spout Jutsu- Hotaru forms two giant bubbles of water under the opponents feet that burst out of the ground and spray then from beneath with high pressure water blasts that knock the into the air. Hotaru’s last hand sign that activated the jutsu also makes sure that the orbs of lightning he threw also are a guaranteed hit. The water only attracts the electricity because of the impurities in the dirt. ~Lighning, Water~ C-rank

Taijutsu

18. Thunder Rush
Hotaru runs full speed at the opponent, launching a barrage if punches before kicking the opponent into the air, launching kick after kick at the opponent as they move upwards, then axe kicks the opponent to the ground while punching them constantly until they are close to the ground. ~Lightning~ B-rank



Forbidden Jutsu:
1. Raiton: Senhappa(Lightning Release: Energy Destroyer)- A supercharged version of the Senhappa jutsu. In this style it is charged for longer than normal and upon being fire, is done so one handed, so that the other hand fires a concentrated stream of electric chakra than can be as high as 36,000 volts. This extra energy makes it so that anybody hit with the attack is instantly paralyzed and also fried by the intense voltage…………just think about the nasty, blistered, bubbling skin………~Lightning~ S-rank


2. Black Mist Coffin Jutsu
After performing about 100 handseals this jutsu traps the target in a black mist. The first stage of the attack slowly destroys all the senses except touch, afterwards the fog begins to suffocate the flow of chakra causing it to stop moving permanently. Th final stage results in the black mist crushing the targets body (Much like Gaara Sand Coffin and Sand Burial) ~Water~ S-rank


3. Kaginarifuyu (Eternal Winter)
This technique causes a massive change into the climate of a certain area and is mainly used to change a warm climate into a cold one, letting a Snow shinobi reign supreme. By manipulating the moisture within the ground and air Hotaru is able to make an eternal winter begin by freezing the water beneath the earth itself and turning the ground into frost. The air then becomes cold and snow begins to fall for seven days and seven nights leaving the once fertile area into the current state which the Snow country is in. This jutsu can only be used twice in a lifetime as it actually permanently damages the inner coil by draining so much chakra. ~Snow~ S-rank

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I'll join, if there are to be no kages yet, then I will be rogue associated with the dawn...........

Alright TWIDS, don't get me started. because your template srsli is a piece of shit!!!

I mean wtf, you don't just drop stuff into your template and say(will be explained in the rp) No, just no.

I will personally annihilate your S-rank character just because I get sick and tired of everyone always saying that they are an S-rank, and then having a mainstream template that is not up to par with that level of "power" So o what you will, kept things that don't make sense, and I will get you.......
 

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Please don't start a fight here or anything. It would be best to be friendly. TWDIS, somce of the things they say are right. Jutsu wise, I can understand other than that please describe the Sharingan if you completely didn't already. If you need help you can easily just ask.

Just wait till the RP starts to fight each other.
 

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talk about shit you cant do crap your not the owner of the RP.
You realize that I can be a kage in this right?? I know Felix personally, and he offered me the spot, I can help build, or take apart the plot of this rp, by merely PMing the owner as you say. Also this means nothing to me, because you have not at all displaced anything I said, and you still are a worthless asset, and I am going to kick your ass for sure......

That is all, I won't embarrass you more than that, and I don't want to spam this thread, per respect to Felix.

Don't even respond to this unless you can capitalize your sentences, and have more than a bleak, and pathetic sentence to say. With a valid point.....
 
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Hmm okay.Isn't it against the rules to insult people which you clearly did to me? hmm.Calling my template shit is clearly an insult and I think someone should know about it.Although you seem to have this thought that because you are higher rank or w/e you can just insult me freely.Kick my ass for sure? man someone sure is mature....ill be the mature one here and move on and try to forget it.If you can do the same I am sure everyone will be happy.But ive got a feeling you wont be content till you kick my kiss or something so suit yourself.
 

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This is sad, because I have posted no template, and because of this my character status is not known yet, and you are the one who posted as an S-RANK!!!!!!! i did nothing of the sort. On top of that, I insult you because you deserve it.

We were trying to help you, yet in response you were an ass about it, saying it isn't our rp and whatnot. It should be obvious that if Felix actually said in a post that he edited something because Cort asked him too, that we know wtf we are talking about.

The rp doesn't need characters with powers that make no sense, or are manipulated in such a mannerism that make them impossible, detail, explanation, and description are they keys.....
 
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