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I'm about to post the RP, just telling you guys. For the people who haven't finished your templates you don't have to rush. Once you finish your template you can post, since I trust everyone that they will do a good job on it, and because I might not be on.
 
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Sorry for makign a double post, didn't know if you guys know this or not but the RP has started. So all of you can post and do what you like now.

Sorry for the double post again just trying to get everybodies attention.
 

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Name: Hoshi Mikazuki

Age: 25

Personality: Serious, always taking the logical route.

Village: Formally Iwa

Ninja Rank: S-rank Missing-nin.

Appearance: Long black hair that reaches to her lower back, with a piece of it going sideways across her face. Scar straight across her nose. Yellow eyes. Pointed Canines in her mouth. Fair white skin. Akatsuki cloak open a bit in the front, gray pants with her silver flask on her hip, open toed long boots with armored shin guards, black shirt and netting with armor over the shirt but behind the cloak, bands around her elbows, armor on her forearm, Iwa head band with slash on it resting on her neck, open fingered gloves, standard purple polish on nails, scarred hands from years of smithing and a scar reaching from her left shoulder to her right hip on her back.

Weapons:
Kunai Knives: The basic ninja tool for all shinobi, mostly introduced to young Genin. A sharp dagger like weapon to carve up enemies and opponents.

Shuriken : One of the starter ninja tools used. Shuriken are the equivalent of darts to be thrown can more or less immobilize an opponent temporarily.

Kakugane, also known as: Busou Renkin (Arms alchemy) Silver Death: While in her early years, she studied the lost art of alchemy. After a few years of research she took on a project that she still carries with her today. Its a octagon shaped piece of silver, But when chakra is added to it, it takes form of the persons fighting spirit/will and transforms (for her) to a silver gun. She was perplexed, for she had never seen any likes of this type of weapon before, after studying it, she figured it out, and proceeded to make bullets for it.

Chakra bullets (in concordance with Busou Renkin): She labored many a year trying to find the perfect combination of metal and chakra to form the ammo for her weapon. Once she got the process down, using her bloodline, she found new ways to change the properties of the bullets, making some that are poisonous, Very hot bullets and very cold ones, she still experiments on finding new properties for her bullets.

Black Kakugane: This is the final form of Buso Renkin. This form is only attainable with Onisan's gift of black chakra and haku. Hoshi guides the Chakra and haku into her Buso Renkin, and it transforms. The alchemy used to create the Buso Rekin absorbs it so its inner workings change indefinably for the better. The Black Kakugane uses the newly formed alchemy within it to transform the user into an advanced being. It amplify's her body and fighting spirit and healing ability, making it able for her to use her chakra drain in an area, not needing to make contact with the opponent. This life drain is very fast so it is wise to fight her from a distance.
The Transformation of the Buso Rekin into black also changes the user, so their body can handle the power it amplify's. When she transforms, Her hair turns blueish white, Her skin attains a dark tan, and her eyes turn from yellow to a glowing purple.
The Buso form also changes into a Black shotgun.

Kantana: Right now she is experimenting on a way to extend this simple weapons ability into far greater capacities, being able to surpass any weapon known. It would be able to transform into two greater steps. For right now though, it's only in the experimental stages.

Armor:
She has one collection of armor that she adds certain chakra elements to. For example if she adds fire element to it, the armor is more flame retardant.

Chakra flask: This flask she carries on her side at all times, it has a little bit of every liquid chakra element in its own compartment. Though each compartment only has enough for one drink of each element that will last only for a little while.

Demon: None.

Side: Akatuski

Clan/Bloodline: From Mikazuki Clan. Bloodline: Reikon Settouhan Akuma Souhou (Soul stealing demon touch)

The Mikazuki was not very known through out Iwa, they were most famous for the forges that they taught their generations on. They made an excellent reputation for themselves as one of the greatest smiths in Iwa, Iwa being an excellent place for smiths with its vast variety's of ore. It was said that they provided the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist with their legendary blades. It was very hard to become a renown blacksmith because of all the competition in that country, but the Mikazuki clan had such a skill and grace with their weapons, some people said they were children of the Greek god of the forge, Hephaestus. This clan did not meet good fortune recently, because this clan had a dark side. Their ancestors long ago in the past centuries, were ninja, and not any regular kind either, they had their own bloodline, that Kekki Genkai gave them a very bad and evil reputation. The Mikazuki from this generation wished to keep this KG a secret until the earth crumbles and the sky falls, because their ancestors were executed for their KG, people called them Vampires as an insulting and retched insult. Recently, the Tsuchikage got wind of their bloodline. Fearing the power of that clan, and the threat of war coming because they withheld a secret bloodline clan, the Iwa kage ordered to have the clan exterminated, leaving behind one member, the one that ratted the clan out, Hoshi.

The Reikon Settouhan Akuma Souhou is a bloodline which takes the enemy's chakra by touching the enemy with any part of their body. A chakra leech if you will. This is not an ordinary leech though. They can turn chakra into any form they want, they don't have to bring it directly into their bodies. They can bring out a string of chakra and liquidate it putting it into a container for later use, they can store chakra into any weapon or piece of clothing they desire. If they do take in the chakra they are able to use that chakra's element for jutsu for a limited time before turning back to their regular chakra element.

Bloodline Justu:

Chakra Leech: As it tells you from the name, she sucks the chakra out of her opponents.

Life Force Drain: This is a more extreme version of chakra leech and has the potential to be lethal.

Element: Fire, Earth, Any element depending on what chakra she has in her flask.

Extra:

Affiliates: Mostly Akatsuki
Deidama - Ally
Seki Shikkan – Ally
Onisan - Partner

Bio: Hoshi was not upset at the slaughter of her Clan, because she's the one that notified the Kage. She resented her family, she resented how they could simply live with their pathetic existence while other family's were starting to earn a higher reputation than them. She worked so hard to learn smithing, and they would just idly let another family take their place, like what they did isn't important. This resentment turned into hatred as the years passed, she went to the ninja academy to blow off some of the anger that surfaced, and she heard her ancestors were feared ninja so she wondered how she would fair in that area. She found out she enjoyed the shinobi life a lot more than just being a blacksmith. She excelled at Ninjitsu too, she graduated at the top of her class, but she could not pursue her dream of being a ninja because her family needed her back at the forges because they were low on money. She became even more aggravated at her family. They were nothing but stupid humans, knowing the only thing that was taught to them and never seeking more knowledge. It disgusted her.
It was when she was with her first boyfriend that she found out her Kekkei Genkai. One day after a date, they went to a park and laid down to look at the stars, the only thing that gave her peace of mind, but he was getting restless. He started to force himself on her, ordering her to kiss him. She felt a deep hatred for him right then and there and when she leaned in and kissed him on the cheek, she noticed a great energy filling her while he flailed in pain. Soon he was so depleted of chakra that he couldn't move, and Hoshi, with her new found, er new stolen energy ran faster than she ever did before back to her old clan house. After months of research, she found out the hidden secrets of her clan, and imprinted every scroll that she could find to memory. Then she reported to the Tsuchikage, not wanting anybody else in her family to have this power and to get rid of the evidence of it, for she was planning to escape this barren country and become a feared shinobi of other lands. So she didn't need anybody to find out her powers or weaknesses in those scrolls. Soon after the destruction of her clan, she ventured off into the world. Eventually joining the Akatsuki. She was paired up with someone who has been in that organization for a long time, but no one has ever seen his face. She is waiting for her next assignment, being ok with working for the Akatsuki.

Jutsus:

Chakra whip: By either taking chakra from someone or taking it from herself, she makes very fine strings of chakra able to cut through metal.

Volcano's Inferno: By using her Fire and Earth chakra, she can spit lava out of her mouth, it remains quite hot for some time.

Meteor Rain: By bringing boulders up in the air and igniting them, they turn into meteors and rain down on the enemy.

Earth Clone: Like a mist clone but with earth.

Fire Dragon: A fire dragon comes from her mouth.

Mud Dragon: A dragon comes forth from the ground.

Jutsus with elemental chakra drunken:

Water Vortex: By gathering a huge amount of water, she forces it at the opponents at high pressure obliterating them.

Freeze Mist: By puffing out an amount of air, a mist forms (preferably at the ground) freezing the opponent to the ground or anything he stands on, if opponent is in air their body temperature will drop dramatically.

Wind Scythe: Blows out razor like air that cuts anything in its path.

Lightings Wrath: By touching the opponent, they will become severely shocked.

Genjutsu:

Abyss Entrapment: By catching her opponent in this, they will be transported to any place she desires, able to do anything she wishes with them.

Bloody Rainfall: It’s a genjutsu that made it’s victims think that they are suffocating…blood in the lungs and all that. Eventually, they do in reality.

Taijutsu: She is not very skilled in this category but that doesn't mean she can be taken over easily, its just not her area of forte.
 
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Clan/Bloodline:Neo-Rinnegan. This is the direct opposite of Pain's Rinnegan Bloodline. It can still copy jutsu's just like Pains only diffrence is that it cant split its properties into people. Instead all of the abilities of each puppet is packed into GI
Dude...you can't be serious. Let me tell you a few reasons WHY this is impossible.

  1. The rinnegan itself has no counter self. It belonged to the founder of the ninja world himself, and was only later discovered to exist within the akatsuki's former leader (100 years ago).
  2. Not only does it NOT copy jutsu, it can emulate already the jutsu that the body itself knows, hence how he Pain himself divided into three bodies used jutsu that were mastered by those six bodies as apart of individual skill. He can perform any jutsu, but they did NOT directly say he copies, but has to have some ability in the matter to perform them. Those summonings, it holds no binding to any contract hence being able to summon whatever he wants.
  3. Using eyes that should long dead and buried as a reverse form? Thats FAAAAR from original. If it was reverse, not only would you NOT be able to perform any jutsu in the world, thats the equivalent of a ninja fighting without chakra and not being able to use any jutsu period. Not to mention you wouldn't have his sweep light brand of vision either. Opposite means you don't have the same stuff as the original, so your voiding ALL of it's abilities from the start.

>> I would know, I made a badass Pain template and explained the rinnegan to the best of my ability, so you can be assured thats ALL accurate as possible.

btw, finished with my edits, and Ankoku's character is Deidama's partner whereas Onisan is OF's partner, so we're good to go.
 

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Yea im going to edit that now. With the rp being in the future i forgot to delete that. Im sorry do you know a bloodline i can use thats not uchiha or just dont use any???
 

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OK i would love to take that spot if you dont mind
 

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lol because I rarely see anyone using the sharingan properly and it is laughable.

As for your new character, is there a reason you never make any of your own jutsu and use characters spawned from originals with all of their jutsu??
 

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Actually since you already showed your sharigan in the rp i wont take it. Ill just be clan less not a big problem in that
 

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Actually since you already showed your sharigan in the rp i wont take it. Ill just be clan less not a big problem in that
Oh, well I really didn't show to that many people. Only you, which is ok. You can take, I really don't care about it anyway and it would be a waste if I used it. I didn't even truly used it, just activated it which isn't a big deal.
 
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