Fanfiction ► my great lyrics

[axel_lover16]

plz dont mind me puttin my lyrics on here
i just love to write lyrics
heres one of mine

angel eyes

in summer breeze theres
only one place to go to
lets go to heaven and fly away

i nvr see no angel eyes
no maigc dies
seeing is beleiving
in angel eyes

its a beautiful day to go flying
in the sky
catching the air on ur face

i nvr see no angel eyes
no magic dies
seeing is beleiving
in angel eyes

angel eyes are putting us to sleep
and angels are flying with us
(angels are flying with us)

i nvr see no angel eyes
no magic dies
seeing is beleiving
in angel eyes

Angel eyes

Angel eyes

 

[axel_lover16]

i did just put "my great lyrics"? i didnt mean tht rly i didnt

 

[Nojerom]

I think they're great.
Simple, and good, touching, really.
^^ Me-likey.

 

[axel_lover16]

u rly think so?
i love tht song
its for my band

 

[Nojerom]

You make me feel like insuating that you didn't write it, LoL.
For your band, huh?
Awesome.
What do you play?

 

[Danica Syer]

You kidding? It's great, I couldn't write a lyric even if I tried. I, myself as well like it! Has a calm feeling about it and the angel eye part rocks, would this be like an accoustic song by any chance?

 

[axel_lover16]

me and my friend diidnt think bout wht genre we r
once we dicide we'll tell u
i hve many more songs u guys willl luv

 

[Nojerom]

Lovely!
Posties please?
=D

 

[axel_lover16]

k heres another
i made this song for kh i hope u like it

light refine

thinkin of u
whever ever u r
starting somethin new
thinkin of u
whever ever u may b

light refine
light redone
u may b the on one
light refine thy heart

many worlds
many ppl
startin somethin new
many worlds
many doors to open

light refine
light redone
u may b the only one
light refine thy heart

friends u love
friends who will be there
starting somethin new
friends u love
friends who love u more

light refine
light redone
u may b the only one
light refine thy heart

*thinking of u
wherever u r
we pray 4 our sorrows to end
and hope tht our hearts will blend
now i will step forward to realize this wish
starting a new journey may not be so hard
or maybe its already begun
there r many worlds tht share the same sky
one sky
one destiny*

light refine
light redone
u may b the only one
light refine thy heart

light refine
light redone
u may b the only one
light refine thy heart

 

[axel_lover16]

well wht do u think...good?

 

[Fatal_Blade]

These are good, just work on the grammar.

 

[axel_lover16]

i use to text type sorry
i love my songs...but some ppl dont like them...like phantasy star universe(psu)
psu rly dont care bout lyrics inculding good ones

 

[Haku]

Yeah I agree with FB, try not to use too many slang terms.

 

[axel_lover16]

k i will i wish psu can see my work but no no one likes it

 

[Haku]

I really enjoyed your lyrics its just all of the slang that I could do without, don't stop practicing though.

 

[axel_lover16]

I really enjoyed your lyrics its just all of the slang that I could do without, don't stop practicing though.

alrite but i need to stop text typing its startin to be a habit for me now.
if you guys want to hear some of my poems just tell me^_^

 

[Nojerom]

Yes, poems would be nice.

*begs*

 

[Haku]

Yeah poems sound good, I look forward into seeing how those turn out xD.

 

[axel_lover16]

Yes, poems would be nice.

*begs*

whoa so many ppl likin my lyrics and peoms who knew O_O
k peom writin now yay^_^

 

[Nojerom]

*begins freakin' awesome victory dance*

Randomness? No, it's dancing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*dances to the flame*

Of course we like your lyrics, they're best I've seen so far.