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I'm glad you got so excited while reading, because that was exactly what I was trying to accomplish!Oh my...
I was already feeling the rush, the tense feeling like I was Michelle. That gave me chills!
Wonderful prologue Muke, the story has got me interested so far. So many questions.
Like, who is that guy? Why did he kidnap her? Is he a murderer or something worse? How long has she been kidnapped?
Oooh, so many questions! I can't wait to find out!
It's the beginning. I will explain everything though, I have some things planned. :3 Yeah, Michelle being weak is also a factor, but it is true that he has high pain tolerance.This was exciting! Talk about a thrill when it comes to trying to escape your captive! I do wonder if this is the beginning or the end of the story? Since sometimes movies do that with the ending in the beginning with a series of flashbacks leading up to it. BUT damn, this guy cannot stay down after being hit with a rifle and fists. (Probably cause Michelle is weak due to starvation and deyhdration.) Anyways, I can't see what comes next!
Also if you don't mind, could you please put at the top 'M for Mature' because, it's a bit violent? :3 It'd be much appreciated if so!
yeeh, this was a looot of dialogue. Don't you worry, everything (like why they havent told the police about her mother) will be explained in future chapters, since those reasons do have plot relevance. you'll learn more and more with each new one. :3Aw, it's sad Michelle had such really close friends.
So, his name is Cameron. Yep, already fits the enemy type. I just hope Michelle's friends don't get in too much trouble, or have any of them kidnapped.
Man, you would think they would tell the police about Michelle's mother, but I guess it was their decision not to.
Such a sad chapter, yet it's really good. You get a view of each character's personality which I do enjoy a lot.
Can't wait for what's next!