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Fanfiction ► Kingdom Hearts: A Nobodies Path



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Kingdom Hearts: A Nobodies Path




Chapter 1 : A Mystic Beginning

Out of a dark Alley in Transverse Town a Young man dressed in bright clothes comes walking out.
With two Keyblades a Fighting Chance and High Ridge rwo strong weapons. As he's walking then Dusk (Nobodies) appear infront of him about Twenty a split second later Neo-shadows (Heartless) appear as well right behind him.
The Neo-shadow leap for him The Boy jumped down and ended in the push up position and the Neo-Shadow went right over him colliding right with the Dusk when that happened the boy jumped to his feet. The Neo-shadows and Dusks were fighting the Boy then jumped into the air landing right in the middle of the fight.
He then slung each Keyblade in different Directions slicing a bunch of Neo-shadow and Dusk. He then Leaped back out of the circle and said "Why are they fighting over me?" when he landed. He then felt a cold pain in his heart and then passed out and fel into a dark portal. As the boy is falling into the Darkness a man is approaching in the distance.

Chapter 2 : Nobodies, Exiles
10 Years Later in Twilight Town .......

Two men Exiled from the Organization they Exited out the Trains ticket center in Twilight Town it's night time and it's raining. They Continue to walk until they reach a Hotel. The Manager says "your names?" One man then replies "Your rooms cost 50 dollars anight I'll pay 100 if you don't take our names?" "Welcome to Twilight Town!" He said so happily. They reached their room opened the door and laid down and fell asleep.
They woke the next morning and left. One of their names are Kronus he Reseambles Roxas and Zexion. Not only that but he weilds two keyblades.
One is A Warriors Fate and the other is Plasma.
The other mans name is Zenon he reseambles Axel but with shorter and blue hair. His weapons are Two Crow Bar Shaped Swords.
As they continue to walk Zenon asked "were are we going Kronus?".
"To the Old Mansion." Kronus said calmly "To find my heart."
"Ok" Zenon replied. As they were walking they stopped in the local shops to find their friend that will take them to the Mansion. After searching they found him his Name is Kixur. "Ha Kixur long time no see!" Kronus said to Kixur. "Same to you Kronus we got to get moving we're being chased !" Kixur whispered. So they walked out the door watching their backs for the approaching enemy. "Do you remeber why we were Exiled Kronus?"asked Kixur.
"Yes, because we believed they were evil even though we had the same wish. To have a Heart I know have found my Heart so I can become whole.All we need to do is find your guys Hearts now." said Kronus.
It was silent all the way to the Mansion until they came out of the Forest. And discovered the mansion destroyed.

Chapter 3 : A Journies Beginning

"What it was right here I promise you !" Kixur said. "I believe you lets explore the rubble and see what we can find."Kronus said calmly fighting back his rage. So they walked amongst the pieces of the mansion searching for clues to what happened. Until they came across a hole.
They went in the hole as they looked around they came across a computer then a device went of and a person appeared to the right of them."Oh hello I can explain"said the man as Kronus ran up and slammed him aganst the wall."Exlain then and make it good !" Shouted Kronus. So the man said "I'm Hiridge i'm the scientist in the area I just wanted to see what it does." "So what does it do Hiridge?"asked Kronus "It takes you to an alternate Twilight Town." replied Hiridge.
At that same moment the computer freezes and then shuts off "Oh boy."said the scientist scared of what just happened. "Oh boy Oh boy!" said the scientist trying to start it back up. "What happened ?" said Zenon looking confused "The gate way to darkness is closed Master going to kill me !" Hiridge said and began to cry in his hands.
"So you were lying tell us everything !" Kixur said curiously. "One day a man approached me and told me to investigate and get a heart for him. I wondered how would I get a heart for him. The next day he came to me with new information he told me I didn't have much time because people are coming for the same heart. So he told me what heart I need and how to get to it. I journeyed out here to the Mansion it was fine when I went in. I used the computer went into fake Twilight Town and found a dark portal. I went into it and I was in a white big Nothingness. But I saw a dark portal I went into it I was then in the World that Never Was. I came across The Heart but was still in it body so I left it and I came back thats it." Explained the scientist.
"Ok I believe you but how was this place destroyed ?" asked Kronus the scientist replied with "I don't know he said if I didn't get back in time he have to interven that's probaly it." They all walked out side and their he was Kronus, Zenon, Kixur stopped in their tracks.
But the scientist started to cry the mysterious man the drew the Keyblade a fighting chance and small dagger in the other hand he then slung the dagger out of his hand hitting the scientist right in the chest. The man starts to laugh but then walks back into the woods. "Please I only have one wish and that for you to destroy him." the scientist said softly "What's his name ?" asked Zenon "His name his name is Leograte." The scientist said. "He's gone we lost him." said Kixur Kronus then said "Leograte". They walked threw the woods back to the Hotel went to sleep to collect their thoughts. In the Morning they followed Kixur "Here it is my Gummi ship" said Kixur
"What are we going to do Kronus ?" said Zenon "We're going to revenge the scientist he didn't deserve that." Kronus said will entering the ship "All aboard." Kixur said they all loaded up and strapped in and set off on their adventure.


This is my second try the other thread is going to be closed. It's still short though.
Give me your opinion please !
 
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darkisaac

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I'll tell you you improved your grammar from the last time, it's still rough around the edges, but certainly an improvement

good job
 
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