It's that time again!

[Lustwaffle]

CnC please.

I'm thinking I should darken the stock at the bottom for more depth And that it has a little too much going on. But I'm just a beginner so you tell me.

 

[Unabomber]

what you did with the stock is good.

only complaint i have is the squiggly under her head, it's a little distracting.

EDIT: is that inner glow i see on the stock? get rid of that. it's too obvious.

 

[Kasrinok]

You did a very good job on this sigeh..
Uhh just seems that (I know this is how they all are) but the stock seems pasted on there.. I will elaborate.. The whole right side seems fine, for some reason the right hand(left side of the pic) just seems to stick out more than anything.. it bugs me a little bit sorry ^^
Overall 7.5/10, great job with the colors =D keep it up

 

[Lustwaffle]

I don't know how to work on the gun problem but here is the tag with input from noich.

 

[Kazuma]

You did a very good job on this sigeh..
Uhh just seems that (I know this is how they all are) but the stock seems pasted on there.. I will elaborate.. The whole right side seems fine, for some reason the right hand(left side of the pic) just seems to stick out more than anything.. it bugs me a little bit sorry ^^
Overall 7.5/10, great job with the colors =D keep it up

please don't bring that rating shit back here, it was hard getting rid of it. It's just as bad a ranking

Lighting is too overpowering,the stock looks like it was slapped on, it could some sharpening. Not feeling to too much. It's okay, but it has a looooooonnnnnnnggggggg way go.

To deal with the gun just simply smudge or draw dark colors matching the BG under it. I use that all the time

 

[Lustwaffle]

Last try
V.3

CnC and i'll keep it in mind the next time I decide to make a sig.

This is the 5th sig I've made by the way.

 

[Kasrinok]

please don't bring that rating shit back here, it was hard getting rid of it. It's just as bad a ranking

Lighting is too overpowering,the stock looks like it was slapped on, it could some sharpening. Not feeling to too much. It's okay, but it has a looooooonnnnnnnggggggg way go.

To deal with the gun just simply smudge or draw dark colors matching the BG under it. I use that all the time

Sorry about that, didnt know that wasnt alowed XD

Last try
V.3

CnC and i'll keep it in mind the next time I decide to make a sig.

This is the 5th sig I've made by the way.

I make a ton fo versions too when I make mine.. I like it better than the first 1 that you posted, looks like you blended it alot better, bright colors ^^ mind if I borrow a new pair of retinas?? =P

 

[Bukkake Sensei]

I like it a lot. My main criticism was going to be all of the white space around the stock, but you kinda addressed that in V.3 and it looks MUCH better now. And personally I also preferred the way the lines were before you took Noich's advice, but it isn't that big of a deal.

 

[Lustwaffle]

I like it a lot. My main criticism was going to be all of the white space around the stock, but you kinda addressed that in V.3 and it looks MUCH better now. And personally I also preferred the way the lines were before you took Noich's advice, but it isn't that big of a deal.

I'm kind of noich's bitch when it comes to this stuff. I'm obligated to do what he tells me. But the missing line doesn't bother me; it gives it a creeping up effect instead of surrounding.

 

[Unabomber]

v3 is ballin son.

 

[shortythugsta]

i like what you did with the left side till i saw the middle, kinda too much. The lighting on the background is to much, cool it down maybe. Also, try to give some contrast i your piece since it seems to overpowering.