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I don't think you should have blurred the closer wing due to the fact that the text and foreground spheres aren't blurry. Therefore it creates an awkward and skewed DoF. Otherwise, I like it.
 

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I didn't blur the wing It was like it on the stock I used. The only really editing to the stock I made was sharpening the face a bit more. Otherwise, it's basically the same. Blurred text and foreground looked even more awkward, and taking out the text would've left the right empty feeling. Also, the face wouldn't be blurred if the depth was consistent. The foreground would've been since the wing is farther foreward than the face, and the face is the focal point.

Thanks though, Darky.
 
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the main problem is the fontface and font color of choice.

Pale butter yellow? Come on.
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