Hello! :D Riku and Sora fan art

[Witchcrest]

Hai! I'm new so I wanted to introduce myself with the only fan art I've ever done...which happens to be Kingdom Hearts! xD I also plan to make a photoshopped version of this whenever I get a tablet and a computer that doesn't suck. And no it isn't Shounen-ai >>; Well, at least it isn't meant to be Dx

Guardian Angel
Feel free to look at my other stuff too <3



~Witchy

 

[Jinjo]

nice i like the detail of the falling feathers

 

[Kazuma]

Fix the architecture of Sora's face,and shorten Rikus neck. It also looks like he's missing a hand. Fingers,and shoes need some work too.

 

[~*Luna*~]

Hey, I like the idea but it has some major anatomy issues. First of all, Sora's hand is too small. It's a rule that hand span should be about the size of a face. Riku's arm is looking a lil bendy, and the top half of it is especially long. I think it would benefit if you made it shorter and gave him an elbow, lol. His hands also need some knuckles! If he was floating like that, the cloak wouldn't be as straight. Think about it, the fabric would be resting against the back of his legs and draping forwards. He also apears to be missing a foot. His shoe could use some more detail too.

I like the pose and idea though, it just needs a few touch-ups.

 

[Annoyance]

No good comes out of blending the pencil with your finger. It makes things look really sloppy and gets messy fast.

You have a good concept and the image is there. I suggest you get some tracing paper and trace what you like and fix what you don't and see what happens. Fix up some of the minor issues like the hands and stuff.