heaven or hell

[Deaddude15]

through out history, people had many visions of heaven, earth, and hell, some says there are more than one god, some say there is only one god, well one way or the other, it is a waging war somebody must win someday, but till then, help them out, create ur temp and GO GO GO!!!

 

[Dawning Twilight]

...you need to stop, think and then recreate this RP. real plot, template, rules, Etc.

 

[The King]

Yea....
Tons of work needs to be done.....maybe a few more paragraphs added....lol

Try joining an RP before making ur own

 

[<3]

Maybe introducing you to the shift key and a full stop.

Shift Key: If you hold this fancy looking button down and press a letter on your key board it creates a capital letter, eg: A, E, I, O, U.

Full Stop: It's a button on you keyboard that allows readers to understand where they can take a breath from reading to long. It is located in two spots on your keyboard and is a very simple, and easy device to use. A Full Stop looks like this: .

Using these two key things and what King and DK have previously said, could help you learn a bit or two, not only in your RPing skills but in basic typing skills in general.

 

[Deaddude15]

Name
Age
side
appearance (pic or discription works)
boi/history(deatail it) at least 2 paragraphs
personallity
moves:

 

[<3]

Thats a start. Try to expend the plot a bit more.

 

[Deaddude15]

i cant edit here, i will edit it when i get a chance

 

[Deaddude15]

Name deaddude

Age25

side: neutral

appearance a Caucasian male who’s right half of the body is decayed. He has a army suit on and is 6’5” 225 lbs.
bio, he was a world war 2 soldier who fought in Germany and was put in the gas chamber.
60 years later he came back and he went to the reception and he met a surfer who taught him how to do the current things we do today. He has retrieved powers for the gas chamber. He was cryogenicly frozen for the sixty years he wasn’t alive


Personality. he is a nice guy who has a temper when somebody annoys him and blacks out from there


moves:
fire blast: he blasts a large flame out and hurts the enemy
lightning punch: he punches the enemy while rushing the lightning through the body for 3 seconds
leaf blade: he pulls out a sharp leaf and slashes the enemy 2 times.
Water fall: he splashes rain on top of the enemy with 10% acid in it
Metal uppercut: deaddude makes his hand metal and uppercuts the enemy
Psychic throw: deaddude mentally grabs the enemy and throws the enemy hard.
Poison punch: he punches and pricks a tiny hole and poisons the enemy for 2 turns
Earthquake: he starts a earthquake near the enemy and the enemy is stuck for 2 turns
Rock punch: he punches the enemy when the right hand turns to rock

 

[Sora05]

Yeah, not many people will join this if you don't expand the plot. But I agree you may want to stop this one and join a few RPs first and get the feel of it.

 

[Endgame]

Oh lolz wow cool heven fitghs hell so original can I join???!!!

 

[Ulti]

Because I know this will just end up as a flame fest.