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[Setharoth]

The Hearts Within

PROLOG

this story starts not with a swift stroke of a sword nor a dealth but it starts with a date with two people. It is in city (slum) and the boy age (14) Sethatoth and a girl rikusgal (14). Setharoth is leading rikusgal through a path towards the highest point of a building. WHen at the top the story begins..........


CHAPTER 1

ps Setharoth=Sth Rikusgal=Rg Cloudisawesum1=cld Ayame=Amy
Sora Game Pro=Sgp

Sth: Rikusgal
Rg: yay
Sth:do you like this ummm..... date
Rg: yes its nice
Sth well how about the view
Rg: its good
Sth: Mine is good to
Rg: but you haven't even look at the city yet
Sth: i can't my eyes are already pleased
Rg: *kisses* Seth on the check
Then a shadow appears from the sky and lands behind Rikusgal
Sth: LOOK OUT *picks up two metal bars and breaks the shadow
Rg: WHAT WAS THAT
Sth: i dont know
Rg: look down there its Cloudisawesum1 and Ayame
Down below in the ally Cld finds a branch and charges at a shadow
Cld: YOU"LL NEVER HURT AYAME
trips over a stick
Amy: NO Cloud
Cld: Oh shit i hurt my head
Amy somehow heal him when she goes up and touches his shoulder
Then the shadow got closer
Then out of no where Sgp comes
Sgp: DIE YOU SUCKER
Pulls out a shotguns and kills the shadow
Cld: thanks
Seth and RIkusgal runs down the stairs
Sth: DOes anyone know what that was
Everyone: no
Sth: Whatever it was it not good
Cld: OH **** look over there
A fleet of shadow hit the ground but pass right through it
Sgp: We need weapons come with me
Ayame helps Cld up
Then we all go with Sgp

 

[rikusgal]

thats soo good. lol. thats spg for ya. lol anyway that was really good. is there gonna be another?

 

[Setharoth]

Yep there will be more and Cld will screw up some more

 

[Kanjiru]

Its so good. Can u integrate me to it?Is there a little chance?

 

[Setharoth]

Umm who are you
theni i might give you a role if i know you

CHAPTER 2

We are all running down the alley when all a sudden the shadows cut us of the path.
cld: oh ****
sgp: this way
he hopes onto a ladder and we all climb it
Sth: do you know where we are going
Sgp: somewhat
amy:AHHHHH
A shadow grabs her leg
Then all of a sudden she make a shield and reflect the shadow
Rg: how did you do that?????
Amy: Dont know
Sth: Let go we have no time to lose
Now we are at the top
Cld: where are we going
Sgp: over the roofs
Cld: WHAT THE
If I am right amy should be able to make us fly
Rg: huh
Sgp: the thing when the shadow was reflected and when she healed cld.....
Sgp: she a rare white mage and it only appears when completely needed
cld: in simple speak
Spg: she a magical healer
cld: OHHHHH
Well lets go
Ayame: i'll try
A magical buble apears and carries us savely to sgp uncles shop
Spg: we are in trouble
Uncle: huh
Seth: we are under attack from shadows
Uncle: ok..... if you need anything go in the back room
Sth: alright i will take these two huge swords
Cld: same
Swords fall on cld
Cld: owwwwww
sgp: take this regular long sword
Cld: fine......
Spg: i will take all the guns
Spg: *Happy*
Rg: i like this
Picks up a katana
Sth: it maches you thin and deadly
RG: *blushes*
Amy: i like this staff
Then all of a sudden a huge shadow breaks down the wall infront of them
Spg: oh shit
Spg shots the shadow right shoulder
Sgp: die you *******
Rg run up to the shadow right leg and slashes it
amy trys to inflick holy damge to the holly creature
Amy: please go away
jumps up and slashes the shadow in the chest
Sth: DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Then all of a sudden a cry is heard of a unholy beast (not the one we are fighting)
Uncle: NOT AGAIN
Everyone: WHAT IS THAT NOISE
The shadow disapears in the ground
Cld: its gone
Sth: but this is just the begining
Sgp: i know
Amy: is everyone alright
Rg: thanks *kisses Sth on the check*
Sth: thanks but we have to find out what that was

CHAPTER 3

Still in the shop but with the back room wall broken.
Sgp: uncle you said not again
Uncle still tramitized
Uncle: *panting* I tho....ugt Thi thi thissss was a mithhhhh
Sgp: snap out of it
amy:maybe i can calm him down
Amy produces a white light and it calms unclkes soul
Uncle: thanks but......
Cld: But what
Uncle: my parent told me of a story and it starts like this......

Once there were evil shadow like creatures who no one new what they want or what they were for but when the shadow found what it wanted it smiled. That smile was not a regular smile nor fake. It had no teeth but just a evil smile and when you look itno it mouth from a distance you could see a soul of a person trapped within it. but when that smiled finally faded it wsa more bad then good. You would think that the shadow would leave and never come back but that is true in one sense it does leave. It takes your world with them and anybody on it.

Rg: is there anyway to stop it?!?!?!?!?!?
uncle: yes there is

Once this happen to another world

Cld: There are other worlds???

Uncle: YES THERE IS AND STOP INTERUPTING ME

Once this happen to another world and a hero with a blade saved it. The sword was no a katana nor ong sword it was a key. He went into a ancient ruin and used this sword to seal the world and stop the search of the heartless.

Cld: Did he come to this world and how does he travel????????
Uncle: No unforunately he didn't come to this world
Cld: and how does he travel?????
Uncle: i was getting to that
Uncle: i heard that the only way to travel arcoss world are of sticky blocks which are connected to each other
Sth: where so you find them
Uncle: I heard the blocks come with that which is deadly
Rg: in other terms
sgp: I think he said that they come with the shadow
Uncle: yep
Sth: so we have to kill the shadow to find this
Sgp: i think that would make sense
Uncle:but thats not all we have to do
everyone: huh
uncle: there are are thousand of other people here we can let them die
Uncle: we have to find the thing which is to be sealed and protect it till the hero comes and if that fails we all leave in a ship
Sth: does everyone agree
Everyone: yes
Sgp: HELL YAY
lets start by looking for the ship blocks

 

[Cloudisawesum1]

Sorry my computer wouldn't let me post on this thread 4 sum reason

It's good so far...........but i despise my role-_-

 

[Ayame]

it's excellent.good job.I can't wait to see what happens next!

 

[kh_forever]

wow, this thread is cool!like kh story!but twisted by a little comedy,put me in the role if you want,i'm free,no payment,no request and sadness(?)i mean no disappointed(like i'm being a bad guy and other that bad)

 

[Setharoth]

ALRIGHT EVERYONE ONE WHO WANTS TO BE IN MY FAN FIC YOU HAVE TO DO A CUOPLE THINGS

1. you have to declare if you are good or bad

2. you have to write a back ground check on you (in other words you have to write a paragraph about yourself

3. write how you want to be introduced

4. write your weapon (NO KEYBLADES) /atribute (like if you are a mage you can have atributes but you can't be both also if you are a mage you are forced a staff)

5.write any relationship that you want with a character

6.write your job like if you are a thief (ex. Sth=paldin Rg=swordsman Cld=warrior amy=white mage Sgp=gunsman

7. write any special abilties you want (i might add them to you depending on how powerfull they are

8. post this info on the thread and pm it to me

 

[Kanjiru]

1. Good.It always wins.

2. Im a lone boy who was abandoned by his parents thanks to a certain curse.Then i was taken to a temple called Kai, where i remained locked up with no contact with friends or family.The temple trained ninjas, so i picked up some moves 4rm them.One night, a shadowed being helped me escape from the temple, 4rm which i stole shuriken and a claw.Then i left to the city and began living like a thief.That was me, 2 years ago, age 13.

3. "by the moonlight reflected a figure of a teenage boy.He held a giant shuriken in one hand,and a giant claw on the other.then he leaped down 4rm (a building,church,pilar) and began to fight."

4. Giant shuriken, giant claw.

5.Setharoth has been dreamed of, but is not known why...(we need 2 develop this.)

6.Thief/ninja/summoner.
7. 1.Pain rain(rain of shuriken).
2.Sorrowed(thats my claw.Several blows, then giant shuriken topping it.)
3.Curse(Gives life 4 power in his weapons.)
4.Meditation(calls summoned beasts)
5.Gravitation(Pulss enemies toward the earth, then throws shuriken at them around 20 X each.)

 

[Setharoth]

SUB-CHAPTER PROLOG

In an alley on the other side of the city a person these 3 words "He is coming". While everyone on that side of city was in choas since the shadow were in the city. Another person (boy) at the age 13 pick pocket that same man but the person he rob notice and let it happened. He followed the boy to his hideout where he confronted him.

SUB-CHAPTER 1

Up=Unknown person Thief=Th kh_forever=Kh Kanjiru=Kj

Up: Hello
Th:WHAT WHERE DID YOU COME FROM
Up: from nowhere
Th: your not getting you money back
Takes out his shuriken in his left hand and his claw in his right
Up: put those away i dont care about money
Th: Huh
Up: This world is going to be destroyed
Th: Your bluffing
Up: if i was i wouldn't have talked to you in this reasonable manner but that doesn't matter now
Th: Huh
Up: I know your type you know alot about what happen in this town and are very resorcefull
Th: so
Up: i want an aliance
Th: how will this help me
Up: if i suceed we will have destroy the reason for these shadows
Th: so
Up: If w do this in every world we will be respected and rich
Th: RICH I AM IN
Up: good my name is kh_forever but call me kh
Th: ok my name is Kanjiru and if you like you can call me Kj
Kh: huh so we are going to be kh and kj
Kj: yep
Kh: so lets get started
Leads Kj inside a safe house
Kh: Now i think i should tell you who we are killing
Kj: That would be nice
Kh: i don't know his name but he carries a sword shaped in a key
Kj: that sounds stupid
Kh: i know but it power in infinited
Kj: i like that
Kh: If all my studies are right he is related in the shadow and if we destroy him the shadow will stop coming
Kj: alright where is he
Kh: I dont know but with your street smarts you will know
Kj: how
Kh: When you hear of a guy with a sword killing or fighting the shadow and most likely he is taveling in a group and is very powerfull
Kj: i heard of someone like that but i didn't bother to look
kh: Where
Kj: The weapoons shop down on the other side of town
Kh: ok lets go
Kj: wait you dont even have a weapon to fight with
Kh: oh yes i do
pulls out zantetuken (looks like -|---------------------\) and show the knife in his boots
Kj: wow i misjudge you
Kh: Just remember one thing assasins and thieves aren't that different
Kj: are you an assasin
Kh: what do you think
Runs toward the shop on the other side of the city
Kj: WAIT FOR ME
Runs after kh

 

[kh_forever]

way to go!this story more exciting!

 

[The_Superior2345]

This is the best fan fic i've ever read, can i be added on?

1. Good, as always.
2. When the shadow attacked his world, his parents died. Luckily the keyblade master came in time to stop it from destroying the world completely. He asked if he could go with the keyblade master for revenge for killing his parents, and the keyblade master said he could go with him until he reached whatever planet everyone else is on, you don't say. The keyblade master taught him how to fight and use magic. When they got to whatever planet this is, the keyblade master dropped him off and went away in his gummy ship.
3. He is fighting a shadow and the rest of the people come in and help him.
4. Electric staff, it shockes people when he hit them with it.
5. You can decide that.
6. Defense mage.
7. Mega reflect: Casts a sheild around the party that can withstand 20 attacks.
Heal: Heals one player.
Mega Heal: Heals all players. This can only be used once per battle.
Invunerable: Makes one player temporarily invincible. This can only be used once per battle.

 

[Setharoth]

NO RELATIONSHIPS WITH SORA PERIOD but if you improve you info on you maybe i can include you

 

[Setharoth]

SUB CHAPTER 2

Kh and KJ are both runing arcoss the city.

Kj: hey wait up
K: you aren't that far behind
Kj: why are we running cant this wait
Kh: the world is in stake
Kj: fine if you say so but you better pay me
Kh: dont worry when we are done you will get what you wanted
Kj: fine

Kh Stops

Kj: why did you stop now
Kh: I dont know where i am going
Kj:how
Kh: i am not native here
Kj: huh
KH: you lead
Kj: if you insist

They follow kj untill they get to uncles weapon shop

Kj: i feel like something is here
Kh: it must be the wind
Kj: yay you are probally right

When they get there the go to the back of the shop

Kj: YOU
Sth: What about me
Kh: did you see anybody with a key shaped blabe
Sth: no
Kh: then wasn't there a shadow here
Sth: yes but it screamed and left
Kh: thanks
Kh It was a false lead
Sth: lets go gang
gang: right

Sth and his friends leave

Kj: it was him.....
Kh: Him who
kj: if you help me figure out why i have had visions about him and help me complete them you wont need to pay me
Kh: ok
Kj: but who is he and why do i know him
Kh: i dont know
Kh: shouldn't we go look for him
Kj: OH SHIT HE LEFT

They start looking for Sth

 

[The_Superior2345]

1. Good, as always.
2. His parents were mages and taught him magic, but when the shadow attacked his world, his parents died. Although he killed one shadow, the shadow still took over his world. He used the gummy blocks he found after killing a shadow to make an escape pod, and he got off the planet just in time. He crashed landed on whatever planet this is, but unfortunately, the gummy blocks broke and are not reusable. Now he is fighting the shadow.
3. He is fighting a shadow and the rest of the people come in and help him.
4. Electric staff, it shockes people when he hit them with it.
5. You can decide that.
6. Defense mage.
7. Mega reflect: Casts a sheild around the party that can withstand 20 attacks.
Heal: Heals one player.
Mega Heal: Heals all players. This can only be used once per battle.
Invunerable: Makes one player temporarily invincible. This can only be used once per battle.

 

[Setharoth]

maybe i might think about it

 

[Setharoth]

Chapter 4

Seth and his gang are walking deeper into the slums. THey are looking for the lock to the world or gummi ship parts.

Sth: Hmmmmm
Cld:Hmmm what
Sth: nothin
Cld:tell me
Sth: nah
Cld: TELL ME NOW
Sth: I don't think so

Walks over to everyone but Cld

Sth: have you notice we found nothin
Sgp: UMMM YES
Rg: Yep
Amy: thats true
Sth: Well the places we are looking dont have hearless have you noticed that
Everyone (but Cld) : thats a good thought

Cld walks up to the group and trps over a stick

everyone: huh

The group backs up away from Cld

Cld: argggg........

Sth: well i think we should luc where the shadow are consintrated
Sgp: and that is
Sth: Where the main piece of the meteor hit
Rg: Thats that the old mine right out side of the city
Sth: yep
Amy: but isn't that across the entire city since we are on the south side and the mine is north of the north side
Sgp: oh shit you didn't think of that
Sth looks down
Amy: cant we borrow you uncle car Sgp
Sgp: that sound resonable

Cld gets up and tries to listen to the conversation

Sth: but we will have to leave someone behind since its a 5 person car

Everyone stares at luc

Cld: uummmmm........ hi
Sth: you are going to have to stay behind
Cld: WHATTHE FCK I AM THE STRENGHT OF THIS FCKING TEAM
Sgp: But there isn't any room in the car for you

Cld thinks.......

Cld: Cant i fit in the trunk
Sgp: thats how bad you want to go
Cld: YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sgp: then no
Cld: WTF Why cant I
Amy: come on let him go in the trunk it only him who suffers
Sgp: fine.......
Sth: I'll drive
Cld: what why cant i drive
Sth: remeber what happened to your tricycle
Cld: But that was a long time ago
Sth: No it happen last week
Cld shuts up in embarrisment

They go back to the shop and start driving to the mines

 

[Niwa]

great man great sorry it took so long to reply i have been busy but can u like give me swords to gund get stupid sooner or later

 

[JenovaDOWNFALL]

How cum nobody can be w sora?