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[The_Superior2345]

i did! on the last page then you said no sora connections so i posted it again, here it is.
1. Good, as always.
2. His parents were mages and taught him magic, but when the shadow attacked his world, his parents died. Although he killed one shadow, the shadow still took over his world. He used the gummy blocks he found after killing a shadow to make an escape pod, and he got off the planet just in time. He crashed landed on whatever planet this is, but unfortunately, the gummy blocks broke and are not reusable. Now he is fighting the shadow.
3. He is fighting a shadow and the rest of the people come in and help him.
4. Electric staff, it shockes people when he hit them with it.
5. You can decide that.
6. Defense mage.
7. Mega reflect: Casts a sheild around the party that can withstand 20 attacks.
Heal: Heals one player.
Mega Heal: Heals all players. This can only be used once per battle.
Invunerable: Makes one player temporarily invincible. This can only be used once per battle.

 

[Setharoth]

NO GOD STUFF LIKE Invunerable: Makes one player temporarily invincible. This can only be used once per battle. and choose another class we already have a white mage sorry (ayame)

 

[JenovaDOWNFALL]

1. neutral

2. Ill be jenova, kay.Well, i used to be a ruler of a kingdom,Ashaeme,
but a sorcerres took over and banished me.Ever since i sing in some bars in town, having many admireres.I like Sethy.Spicy, feisty, cheerfull.

3. Im signing in a field.Maybe someone can rite something for the singing.

4. Microphone/Ribbon

5.Likes Seph, hates Rg

6.Songstress/Green Mage
7. Royal Armor=casts a powerfull armor on party member
Cepter dance=Hits enemies with holy magic, while adding stats to party members
Regal Crown=Turns invincible
Forte Bastion=Casts protective spells at party

 

[redharry123]

ok 2 things

1) me and sgp wanna be lovers in ur fic.
2) post a chapter...pleez...

 

[Niwa]

me and maggie are gonna be lovers cause we are going out

 

[Setharoth]

Chapter 6

In mid air flying over a river in a car. The car is ether going to hit the wall ahead or land.

Sth: OH SHIT
Rg: are we going to make it
Sgp: DIE YOU BITCH DIE AAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHH
Cld: I GONNA DIE IN THIS CRASH OR GET SHOT

The car hit the edge of the wall and blows up. CLd falls out into the river. Sth jumps out and saves Rg. Ayame cast a shield to save herself and Sgp somehow is save beacuse he blew up part of the wall and landed safely inside

Grl=girl Rh=Redharry123

Cld: Nice i am wet
Sth: are you ok
Rg: yay thanks *blushes*
Ayame: need some help Cld
Cld: Nope

Cld gets ot of the river soaking wet

Cld: i hate water

Inside the building. A girl is being attacked by some shadow. BANG Sgp kills the shadow with a head shot.

Grl: thanks
Sgp: no prob
Grl: Watch out

A shadow apears from behind them and the girl throws one of her two knives at it and slashes it head off.

Sgp blushing because of the strength of the girl

Sgp: thanks..... so whats you name
Grl: Redharrry but you can call me Rh

Rd smiles and blushes at Sgp

Sth: SGP WE HAVE TO GO THE SHADOW ARE COMING BACK
Sgp: so you want to come......
Rd: sure but where are you going
Sgp: to where the shadow are centered
Rd: WHY THE ARE YOU DOING THAT!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!?
Sgp: To save this world

Rd think about it

Rd: I dont know.....
Sgp: We get to kill alot of stuff
Rd: then HELL YAY

Outside with the entire gang

Sgp: this is Rd everybody she gonns come with us ok
Everyone: Ok
Cld: Wait one second why are you ok with her coming with us and when i wanted to ride in the car you all said no
Sth: She looks cool and can actually help us
Cld: AND I CAN'T
Sth: YEP
Cld: arrggggggggggg
Sth: Rd do you know where the end of this city is
Rd: Yep it is just up ahead
Sth: Thanks

Everyone runs out of the city and into a field

Sth: whats that noise
Rg: its sounds horible

A girl is in the center of the field is singing but behind her a shadow is near.

Sth: LOOK OVER THERE THAT GIRL IS GONNA BE KILLED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rg: so

Rg tosses her hair around with no problem that she is in trouble

ps. Jenovadownfall you are in the next chapter

 

[Niwa]

yea chapter happy keep it up

 

[redharry123]

YAY! CHAPTER! WOOT WOOT! keeeeeep postin! and writing!...and stuff....

 

[Niwa]

yea wat maggie said

 

[The_Superior2345]

oh yeah, i forgot about Amy, i guess i'll start over from scratch. hope this one is better.

1. Good, as always.
2. When he was 14 he sheltered a wounded samurai/mage, and after he healed, the samurai/mage trained him to be a really good fighter with a metal rod. When the samurai/mage left, he gave the boy two gifts to repay his kindness. One, he enchanted his metal rod to make it unbreakable. Two, he gave the boy the power too see random glimpes into the future, although he cannot control when he will get them, or what he will see.
3. Unbreakable metal rod.
4. He saves jenovadownfall from the shadow.
5. You can decide that.
6. Samurai/Ninja
7.
Fury: Goes into a series of combo attacks that end with a very powerful slash.
Glimpse: Sees a short vision of the future. Note: This cannot be used at will, what he sees and when he sees it are completely random.

 

[Niwa]

oh yeah, i forgot about Amy, i guess i'll start over from scratch. hope this one is better.

1. Good, as always.
2. When he was 14 he sheltered a wounded samurai/mage, and after he healed, the samurai/mage trained him to be a really good fighter with a metal rod. When the samurai/mage left, he gave the boy two gifts to repay his kindness. One, he enchanted his metal rod to make it unbreakable. Two, he gave the boy the power too see random glimpes into the future, although he cannot control when he will get them, or what he will see.
3. Unbreakable metal rod.
4. He saves jenovadownfall from the shadow.
5. You can decide that.
6. Samurai/Ninja
7.
Fury: Goes into a series of combo attacks that end with a very powerful slash.
Glimpse: Sees a short vision of the future. Note: This cannot be used at will, what he sees and when he sees it are completely random.

wow great life but i think mine and maggies is better

 

[JenovaDOWNFALL]

Thanks 4 da rescue!

 

[Setharoth]

chapter 7

grl=girl jenovaDownfall=Jd

Seth jumps towards the grl but it didn't look le would reach her. Then the girl turned around.

grl: AHHHHHHH
Sth: WATCH OUT

Then all of a sudden sth moved a incredible speed that almost look like it skipped a second of time.

Sth: MOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sth tackels the girl down and the hearless missed the grl

grl: huh
Sth: Stay right there
Grl: ok

Sth jumps towards the shadow and slashes it. Then the shadow disappears.

Sth: are you ok
Grl: yep

Helps the grl up.

Grl: thanks alot
Sth: No prob
Sth: GANG LETS GO
Grl: WHATS YOUR NAME
Sth: SETHAROTH AND YOURS????
Grl: JENOVADOWNFALL BUT SINCE YOU HELPD ME YOU CAN CALL ME JD
Sth: JD NEXT TIME I SEE YOU CAN YOU SING FOR ME
Jd: OK BYE

Jd blushes and is temped to follow them from a distance

Rg: I don't like that girl......
Sth: she sounds ok but dont worry she no compitition for you
Rg: that still doesn't mean i like her
Sgp: Sth how did you do that back there
Sth: do what??????
Sgp: when you tackeled that girl you moved like a 100 ft in like .1 seconds
Sth: dont know maybe i am just fast
Sgp: Sure..........
Ayame: so since the car is gone where aere we going to sleep
Cld: dont know

Cld steps on a something.

Cld: AHHHHHHHH GET IT OFF ME

Sgp picks up a twig

Sgp: Its a twig
Cld: I knew that........
Sth: anyway we can stay at that bar up ahead
Rg: COOL A BAR

They walk into the bar and drink some beer. Stay tunned to see how many drinks it takes CLd to get drunk.

ps. The_Superior2345 we already have a Ninja and white mage so pick you can pick one of the other classes you said a Samurai or a mage like you said but you can only choose one class of mage NOT BOTH sorry for screamming

 

[Niwa]

good job man keep it up

 

[Setharoth]

thinking of posting another chapter today

 

[JenovaDOWNFALL]

HA HA HA!!!Its funny, but its good!hou cum u dont like my signing rg?
I also have knights of the round as a special attack!
Whooo-hoo!

 

[Setharoth]

nm i thought you meant my signiture with DONT BOTHER RIKUSGAL

 

[The_Superior2345]

oh, i didnt know about the ninja, who is he? oh well, hope this one is better.

1. Good, as always.
2. He sheltered a wounded man, and after he healed, the man gave the boy two gifts to repay his kindness. One, he gave the boy the ability to control gravity. Two, he gave the boy the power too see random glimpes into the future, although he cannot control when he will get them, or what he will see.
3. Purple rod.
4. He meets the gang while fighting a heartless and helps them. If that doesn't work, whatever else you can think of is fine.
5. You can decide that.
6. Gravity mage? i don't know what else to call him
7.
Sink: Increases gravity on all enemies in a radius around him.
Float: Decreases gravity on all enemies in a radius around him.
Glimpse: Sees a short vision of the future. Note: This cannot be used at will, what he sees and when he sees it are completely random.

 

[redharry123]

yay! chapter ! soo tired...too early...not hyper...*collapses on the floor*

 

[Setharoth]

superier thats called a black mage thats secilizes in gravity arts. And thats good summization of you i have the perfect plavce to put you but it might take a few chapters. Also the ninja is redharry123.