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first off, i just want to make a few things clear...
1. i haven't played kh2 yet, so some stuff in this fanfic may be completely irrelevant and untrue to the game. however, once i've played it, i'll clear as much stuff up as possible.
2. i need to practise descriptive writing, so be prepared for lots of metaphors, and paragraphs setting up locations and characters. (especially in the first chappy, it's quite long and most of it is description, but once it's out of the way, things should pick up)
3. i'll be writing new chappies as i go along, so there'll be a lot of unexpected stuff ^_^
4. there'll be romance involved, i've never really had a chance to write anything like this! expect mushy stuff.
EDIT: 5. Some violence towards the later chapters, I guess I should put a warning in here.
6. The beginning is terrible. I know. It's unoriginal, but I couldn't think of another starting point. Plus, some of it ties in with later events ^-^
i've been thinking of writing a fanfic for a while, but i haven't had time recently. i've worked on this for the past week or so, and already two chapters are finished ^_^ it picks up where KH1 left off.
EDIT: When I first wrote this, there was no title, but a friend named it for me. Kingdom Hearts: The Final Frontier.
Chapter One
Crystal waves gently washed up the golden sands of the shoreline, then erupted in a shining silver explosion as they broke. Tall, hanging palm trees offered some much-needed shelter from the blazing hot summer sun. The endless blue sky was unspoilt, without a single fluffy cloud to obscure the view. It was so clear that you could see the horizon, off in the distance, over the inviting warm seas. True, it seemed like a lost island paradise, like the most beautiful place in all of the worlds, like an idyllic perception of a perfect place. Well, almost perfect. To her, it always seemed as though something important was missing.
Kairi stood at the water's edge, sand between her toes, the waves gently reaching for her feet, almost inviting her to swim in its depths. The gentle summer breeze lifted her long crimson hair from her shoulders. It swirled in the currents for a moment, then fell back down to her skin. Her peircing blue eyes gazed off towards the horizon, always watching, waiting. The once happy, carefree girl was gone, replaced by a distant figure, a different person. Every day for the past two years, she'd gone out to the beach, looking toward the horizon, forever awaiting his return.
She sighed heavily. "Come back to me, Sora," she thought. "I miss you."
Everything she saw on the island reminded her of Sora. The blue skies reminded her of his beautiful, perfect blue eyes, that loving gaze that she missed so much. The bright summer sunshine reminded her of his smile, a smile that could always cheer her up. Even the soft golden sands reminded her of his touch. She was surrounded by memories of him. She remembered how he and Riku had raced to share a paopu with her, how they'd spend hours talking, and how they'd always had their own "Secret Place".
Kairi hadn't been to the Secret Place for the long two years, the memories were just too painful. She had decided a while ago that she'd only go once Sora had returned. The last time she visited, she carved herself giving him half a paopu fruit. Once he was back, she planned to give him half, so that he'd never be away from her again. In her heart, she wanted to believe he'd return, but after two long years of waiting, she was beginning to lose hope. She often wondered if they'd ever meet again. Just the thought of never seeing his beautiful eyes was enough to bring her to tears, so she tried not to think of it. But, at times, it was hard for her not to break down. A single, silver tear rolled down her cheek.
"He'll come back," she whispered, reassuring herself. "He promised he would."
She sat down on the sand, and drew her legs up. She then wrapped her arms around her legs, and rested her chin on her knees. A shower of silver tears fell as she continued to think of him. She knew she needed to stop this, and try to get on with her life, but she couldn't stop thinking of him. Kairi longed for him more than anything else. She sighed again and wiped the tears from her eyes, wondering if she'd be alone with her thoughts forever.
The sun had begun to set, hovering above the horizon, flooding the sky with a pink and orange haze. Even the crystal blue sea had been tinted with an orange glow. The air was slightly cooler, and the once warm, gentle breeze had begun to pick up. The long summer day was beginning to come to an end, but still, Kairi sat on the beach, forever waiting. She was getting drowsy, and needed to squint her eyes to see properly. Disappointed with another day of just sitting around, waitng, she realised that it was time to leave. Kairi reluctantly picked up her shoes, took one last, long look at the ocean, and turned to leave the beach.
That was when she heard it.
long, eh? ^_^ sorry about that, i wanted to set up the atmosphere, emotions, and mood. if anyone posts, ill update tomorrow.
criticism is appreciated, but dont be too mean, its my first fanfic
1. i haven't played kh2 yet, so some stuff in this fanfic may be completely irrelevant and untrue to the game. however, once i've played it, i'll clear as much stuff up as possible.
2. i need to practise descriptive writing, so be prepared for lots of metaphors, and paragraphs setting up locations and characters. (especially in the first chappy, it's quite long and most of it is description, but once it's out of the way, things should pick up)
3. i'll be writing new chappies as i go along, so there'll be a lot of unexpected stuff ^_^
4. there'll be romance involved, i've never really had a chance to write anything like this! expect mushy stuff.
EDIT: 5. Some violence towards the later chapters, I guess I should put a warning in here.
6. The beginning is terrible. I know. It's unoriginal, but I couldn't think of another starting point. Plus, some of it ties in with later events ^-^
i've been thinking of writing a fanfic for a while, but i haven't had time recently. i've worked on this for the past week or so, and already two chapters are finished ^_^ it picks up where KH1 left off.
EDIT: When I first wrote this, there was no title, but a friend named it for me. Kingdom Hearts: The Final Frontier.
Chapter One
Crystal waves gently washed up the golden sands of the shoreline, then erupted in a shining silver explosion as they broke. Tall, hanging palm trees offered some much-needed shelter from the blazing hot summer sun. The endless blue sky was unspoilt, without a single fluffy cloud to obscure the view. It was so clear that you could see the horizon, off in the distance, over the inviting warm seas. True, it seemed like a lost island paradise, like the most beautiful place in all of the worlds, like an idyllic perception of a perfect place. Well, almost perfect. To her, it always seemed as though something important was missing.
Kairi stood at the water's edge, sand between her toes, the waves gently reaching for her feet, almost inviting her to swim in its depths. The gentle summer breeze lifted her long crimson hair from her shoulders. It swirled in the currents for a moment, then fell back down to her skin. Her peircing blue eyes gazed off towards the horizon, always watching, waiting. The once happy, carefree girl was gone, replaced by a distant figure, a different person. Every day for the past two years, she'd gone out to the beach, looking toward the horizon, forever awaiting his return.
She sighed heavily. "Come back to me, Sora," she thought. "I miss you."
Everything she saw on the island reminded her of Sora. The blue skies reminded her of his beautiful, perfect blue eyes, that loving gaze that she missed so much. The bright summer sunshine reminded her of his smile, a smile that could always cheer her up. Even the soft golden sands reminded her of his touch. She was surrounded by memories of him. She remembered how he and Riku had raced to share a paopu with her, how they'd spend hours talking, and how they'd always had their own "Secret Place".
Kairi hadn't been to the Secret Place for the long two years, the memories were just too painful. She had decided a while ago that she'd only go once Sora had returned. The last time she visited, she carved herself giving him half a paopu fruit. Once he was back, she planned to give him half, so that he'd never be away from her again. In her heart, she wanted to believe he'd return, but after two long years of waiting, she was beginning to lose hope. She often wondered if they'd ever meet again. Just the thought of never seeing his beautiful eyes was enough to bring her to tears, so she tried not to think of it. But, at times, it was hard for her not to break down. A single, silver tear rolled down her cheek.
"He'll come back," she whispered, reassuring herself. "He promised he would."
She sat down on the sand, and drew her legs up. She then wrapped her arms around her legs, and rested her chin on her knees. A shower of silver tears fell as she continued to think of him. She knew she needed to stop this, and try to get on with her life, but she couldn't stop thinking of him. Kairi longed for him more than anything else. She sighed again and wiped the tears from her eyes, wondering if she'd be alone with her thoughts forever.
The sun had begun to set, hovering above the horizon, flooding the sky with a pink and orange haze. Even the crystal blue sea had been tinted with an orange glow. The air was slightly cooler, and the once warm, gentle breeze had begun to pick up. The long summer day was beginning to come to an end, but still, Kairi sat on the beach, forever waiting. She was getting drowsy, and needed to squint her eyes to see properly. Disappointed with another day of just sitting around, waitng, she realised that it was time to leave. Kairi reluctantly picked up her shoes, took one last, long look at the ocean, and turned to leave the beach.
That was when she heard it.
long, eh? ^_^ sorry about that, i wanted to set up the atmosphere, emotions, and mood. if anyone posts, ill update tomorrow.
criticism is appreciated, but dont be too mean, its my first fanfic
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