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it will be an original manga with some dark tone to it.Um, would it be an original manga, or would it be your interpretation of the series?
thanks that means alot.In that case, sure, why not? Just make sure to put it in a creative media page
ok thanks for your opinion.anime is diddlying pointless so no
ok ill see if i can change the post to make it more informative.There's really not enough info here for me to make a well-informed decision, so go for it, I guess?
is that more informative for you?There's really not enough info here for me to make a well-informed decision, so go for it, I guess?
So i want to get your guys' opinions on this idea. What if i were to make a manga kinda like kingdom hearts but at the same time not ripping it directly from kingdom hearts. This story is set in a modern fantasy setting(kind of like final fantasy 15). It story is about a these two siblings, Ozaki and Rin(boy and a girl) who are living a steady life with their dad. They live in a very populated town around the kingdom. Their dad would tell them old legends that he heard when he was little. But the one that intrigued them the most was "The Valiant Heroes". The valiant heroes was about people who were chosen by the light to stop the darkness. These heroes were called resugans, resugans had symbol on the right hand to identify them. But anyways, Ozaki and Rin would always stare at the kingdom in a special spot, wishing that they could be in there. One day the sky went black, and rain started to burst, and there was something odd falling out of the skies. Ozaki and Rin thought that they were meteors. But when they crashed a dark scary figure came out. It had a haunting grin, sharp fingers, and eyes that stare into your soul. The kingdom in the distance was under attack, people were getting killed, people were running, blood emerging everywhere. So Ozaki and Rin ran to get there dad but they were to late. All they could see was his body but with no head. Rin and Ozaki burst into tears and start screaming. Ozaki stood up and saw the closet dark entity near him then with one loud scream. An aura aroused from his body. Then Rin saw ozaki with a sword in his hand, a strange symbol on his hand, and him wearing an outfit close to looking like a kimono. He killed the darkness entity and saw the prince coming toward them. The prince to had a strange symbol on his hand. He walked up to Ozaki and said,"come with me if you want to live". Ozaki and Rin took his advice. That is how the story begins.
I think it will be an illustration first then when it ends could possibly turn it into a novel, if thats possible.This sounds cool! I like the idea of Rin apparently not showing this power, and seeing that being looked into would be cool Is this going to be in novel form or will it contain illustrations?
ok thank you for you feedback.o_o Yep, that's a bit more informative.
If you do turn it into novel form, I wouldn't mind going through it. I'm pretty good at nitpicking written works.
ok, cant wait to hear your feedback on the idea so far.I'm responding to this to subscribe to the thread and come back later to dissect it because you deserve to hear it I think. I'm just a little too delirious at the current moment.
I was the dick who said yes and no. To be short I am going to personally plead you to not just "make a manga" and focus on the core writing, that I will get to once I sleep and you respond and whatnot.
I wanted to write up a line by line break down, because what I read was about 7 different things you pulled ideas/things from. You obviously crave creativity and want to make something of your own with your own hands, but this needs a lot of work, much more thought, and more originality.Aright guys i have to get off in 5-15 minutes or so, so if you want me to see your feedback and questions you should hurry. But ill be on tomorrow at 2:20 pm or so mountain time zone.