Cover art feedback for my fanfic "Fresh Start"

[Deleted member 246005]

Courtesy of Absolitude Corner who also did Vijay in my sig.

which one do you guys like best?

Fresh start (teaser) - lightjakrises - Jak and Daxter [Archive of Our Own]

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This is a crossover between Jak and Daxter and FF10-2. It's more of a teaser than a full work.

 

[Willow A113]

What is it a fanfic of?

 

[Deleted member 246005]

What is it a fanfic of?

Fresh start (teaser) - lightjakrises - Jak and Daxter [Archive of Our Own]

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

archiveofourown.org

I wrote this teaser chapter a year ago and I wanna get back to it this year.

 

[NemesisSP]

I would say the second one. It's the most tightly constructed of the three and the least busy. It keeps the viewers eyes in the center and allows there to be to be a sense of danger or at least something looming over the story with the one character (Jax, I believe? I'm not familiar with this series).

Or at least, that's just how I see it. There's nothing wrong with any of them, but as a cover, the middle one would probably work best.

 

[Willow A113]

I would say the second one. It's the most tightly constructed of the three and the least busy. It keeps the viewers eyes in the center and allows there to be to be a sense of danger or at least something looming over the story with the one character (Jax, I believe? I'm not familiar with this series).

Or at least, that's just how I see it. There's nothing wrong with any of them, but as a cover, the middle one would probably work best.

I agree. It's the best.

 

[Clue.Less]

Second one.

There's something I like more in the third one (the colored elements on the sides) but I would play around with those more. It's too symmetrical for my taste.

Jax and Yuna are an intriguing pair!

 

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@Clue.Less thanks pal. Feel free to read my teaser if you're interested.

Finding Yuna a second love after Tidus is a staple of Final Fantasy 10 crossovers. I just thought Jak offered something a bit different from her other suitors.