Art Showcase, any critiques would be appreciated.

[NemesisSP]

Decided to try an attempt to draw Sora for the 20th Anniversary. Well, Sora and three other characters, but it ultimately went sideways because I kept feeling that Sora wasn't turning out well. You all might disagree, but I'm not too happy. I guess I at least made the attempt.

These are so good! Seriously, these art pieces look like they came out of a real KH game. You have one heck of a talent for drawing.

And I literally keep coming on and forgetting to respond. I appreciate the very kind words there. I don't know if I am that talented personally, but I do wish to make people happy with my art. So, thanks very much and again, I am sorry to respond so obscenely late.

 

[Deleted member 271965]

WOW! All of your art is so great! I really like your OCs and how you KH characters!

 

[NemesisSP]

WOW! All of your art is so great! I really like your OCs and how you KH characters!

Thank you, I appreciate you saying so! I hope to draw them more soon.

I got a bit of a headache, but I wanted to draw Sora's KH4 design... It's got a long way to go.

 

[Deleted member 271965]

It looks good so far

 

[NemesisSP]

It looks good so far

Thank you.




Not sure, but I do need to finally get back to my own story. So here's both the next chapter and an inconvenient form for a Keyblade wielder.

 

[Soldier]

Glad to see you're back NemesisSP, or should I say, Nomura/disgraced Disney artist in disguise!

 

[NemesisSP]

I'm back, again, I'm not gonna say for how much longer or if it'll stick, but I did do something interesting.


I decided, for funsies, to try seeing if I could restore this storyboard.



Ended up before more me than I'd have liked as I wanted it to be more faithful, but considering the quality, I doubt that would have happened, so I just did my best to recreate it while still also giving it details of my own. Included some Nomura like flourishes as well, but over all, it was just something that... was a massive pain in the ass to do, but I feel decent about it.
Except for Stella's hair color, but I think this color works fine. I'd prefer an official piece by Nomura to help with the colors, but that is very unlikely to ever happen.

Still, there's something I did. Hopefully my next thing will come quicker, but I make no promises.


EDIT: A link to my twitter for the sake of having a higher resolution for the picture.

https://twitter.com/x/status/1559594863430995974

 

[NemesisSP]

Just a bit of an updated version of the pic above. It's simply some color corrections and additional shading I also decided to work on another of these storyboards. Here's a bit of sneak peak. The hair is what's making it difficult to get this done with you see.

 

[NemesisSP]

Just more attempts to keep this all alive. Not as fond of it as I'd like to be, but I am glad to be done with it.

 

[Deleted member 246005]

It's nice.

 

[NemesisSP]

It's nice.

Thank you.

 

[TrinityXaos]

Am I allowed to post any of my artwork here?

If so, I just make a drawing of Kairi dressed like Jasmine in Agrabah.

 

[NemesisSP]

Am I allowed to post any of my artwork here?

If so, I just make a drawing of Kairi dressed like Jasmine in Agrabah.
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Technically speaking, this was just my thread for my art, but I'm not against people posting stuff in it.

I think you did a good job, sorry I didn't see it sooner.

 

[NemesisSP]

Not necessarily the place to do it, but here goes. It's not really been a great year, especially because I've been dealing with a lot of grief that affected my ability to draw significantly, as my older brother passed away late 2021. Although I'm not 100%, I managed to recover a bit to do some of the pics I did and posted previously.

I don't know if I'll ever truly get to where I want to be as an artist, but I want to try harder. Hopefully I can and I do apologize to anyone who came here to see this sad post rather than a new pic.

 

[Deleted member 246005]

Not necessarily the place to do it, but here goes. It's not really been a great year, especially because I've been dealing with a lot of grief that affected my ability to draw significantly, as my older brother passed away late 2021. Although I'm not 100%, I managed to recover a bit to do some of the pics I did and posted previously.

I don't know if I'll ever truly get to where I want to be as an artist, but I want to try harder. Hopefully I can and I do apologize to anyone who came here to see this sad post rather than a new pic.

No problem. It's something we all go through as artists. I'm a writer and it's the same for me.

I find that showing our art helps us because we get to see how people respond to it.

Plus good or bad, we made art and it's an accomplishment on its own.

There are more than one way we can support you.

 

[NemesisSP]

Thanks for that.

Also, nothing new nor anything finished, but worked a bit on this trying to get it finished and just experimenting a bit.

I figured I'd share it.

 

[Deleted member 246005]

I played Ff15 recently and Noctis became one of my favorite FF characters.

So I thought you did a good job with him.

 

[NemesisSP]

I played Ff15 recently and Noctis became one of my favorite FF characters.

So I thought you did a good job with him.

Thanks. I like Noctis too, though I have complicated feelings about FFXV as it came out. I won't get into it and I would never tell people not to enjoy something. But I definitely wish we had gotten Noctis under Nomura instead.

Oh well. Here's an additional update. Taking it slow with this one to try and get the best possible illustration.

 

[Deleted member 246005]

Thanks. I like Noctis too, though I have complicated feelings about FFXV as it came out. I won't get into it and I would never tell people not to enjoy something. But I definitely wish we had gotten Noctis under Nomura instead.

Oh well. Here's an additional update. Taking it slow with this one to try and get the best possible illustration.

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In hindsight I would've preferred the Versus Saga over the Xehanort saga. The latter was really dissapointing as a story to me. I wouldnt mind a Versus remake but skeptical of it and the same with Verum Rex.

I'd be more optimistic if Nojima was attached. I prefer his take more than Nomura's. They'd probably bring out the best of each other.

You could always try writing a Versus remake yourself. Writing is cathartic plus we all built Versus 13 up in our heads. You might as well share your version of it.

 

[NemesisSP]

A repost, but just wanted to say that I feel this is probably the picture I'm most proud of at the moment.

For those who don't know (and I don't blame you at all) these are my characters Omega and Iris. They currently are starring in my KH fic that I'm horribly off schedule for, but I have plans for their future beyond it.

https://twitter.com/x/status/1135656154871152640

The only reason I'm tweeting it is because of size issues.