This was written awhile back, maybe a few weeks ago. It was written double spaced, so I'm sorry that its so hard to read and such. And I had it so that it would space out so there wouldn't be any indention unless I wanted them. Sorry for the inconvenience, I'm not sure how to fix that here on KHI. Edit: OK, when I posted it it didn't come out like that, so please, ignore what I just said about the visual problem. ><
Anyway: This is what would be found on the back or the inner left flap of a book if you picked it up. What do yall think? I was thinking about adding a 3rd portion that has to do with Aubrey's Best friend, Kira, because she is a key part in the story. Please, feel free to comment and Critique. I need it. ><
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Aubrey Liandrigs is a prince of two races, the pointy eared elves and the sirens with their angel like wings. While he lives in the Elfish Capital his twin, Kirin, lives in the Siren City far to the east. But on their 15th birthday they are both visited by a strange group of nomadic Vampires. The vampires tell them that they are needed in a struggle that is soon to be known to the world, one that needs both their powers. But this forces Aubrey to leave his best friend, Kira, and Kirin to leave his bed ridden mother. They are recruited and are led to the home of the founder, Merlos Ryner, (Working name there) where they discover each others cooperation in the battles to come.
But that's the least of their worries. Not long after they arrive at the Castle and take their oath Information on a member of the opposing organization is found out and Aubrey finds that he must leave his twin behind to find members of his own: as he is quickly made the Captain of his own Brigade. But there is a catch. The members for his brigade have yet to be found. He must search the surrounding countries for members, people with unique talents and abilities whose uniqueness will awaken the dormant Dragon Eggs.
While Aubrey is off on his mission an accident occurs at the Castle that forces Kirin's captain, Aaron, away from the forge and forces him to name a successor until he recovers. Kirin is chosen and soon finds that Forging weapons and other needed materials is not his only task. He must train the Griffin Riders and the proud mounts they ride, a task that is easier said then done.
Anyway: This is what would be found on the back or the inner left flap of a book if you picked it up. What do yall think? I was thinking about adding a 3rd portion that has to do with Aubrey's Best friend, Kira, because she is a key part in the story. Please, feel free to comment and Critique. I need it. ><
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Aubrey Liandrigs is a prince of two races, the pointy eared elves and the sirens with their angel like wings. While he lives in the Elfish Capital his twin, Kirin, lives in the Siren City far to the east. But on their 15th birthday they are both visited by a strange group of nomadic Vampires. The vampires tell them that they are needed in a struggle that is soon to be known to the world, one that needs both their powers. But this forces Aubrey to leave his best friend, Kira, and Kirin to leave his bed ridden mother. They are recruited and are led to the home of the founder, Merlos Ryner, (Working name there) where they discover each others cooperation in the battles to come.
But that's the least of their worries. Not long after they arrive at the Castle and take their oath Information on a member of the opposing organization is found out and Aubrey finds that he must leave his twin behind to find members of his own: as he is quickly made the Captain of his own Brigade. But there is a catch. The members for his brigade have yet to be found. He must search the surrounding countries for members, people with unique talents and abilities whose uniqueness will awaken the dormant Dragon Eggs.
While Aubrey is off on his mission an accident occurs at the Castle that forces Kirin's captain, Aaron, away from the forge and forces him to name a successor until he recovers. Kirin is chosen and soon finds that Forging weapons and other needed materials is not his only task. He must train the Griffin Riders and the proud mounts they ride, a task that is easier said then done.