Poem COntest

[King Sora X]

Okay this is my second contest i will be holding

Theme: melancholy

Length: 3 or more Stanzas

Type: Free verse

Way of entry: Pm me

Start of Contest: When thread is posted

Due Date of Entry: 2/23/09

With that said...the contest officially starts..

 

[FireDragon]

Let Me Show You

let me show you the person that I am without the lies and misleadings.

Let me tell you of my imagination of my dreams and goals.

Let my heart be an open book let me explain my sadness, guilt, and anger, the twisted strands of my life.

I try to fight the darkness that hides the light from my eyes to see the light within the darkness. let my dreams be realized and see the true me deep inside
let me show you....
my conflict.​

 

[King Sora X]

Uh FireDragon it says in the first post that the poem has to be pm'd to me :lol:

 

[FireDragon]

okays!

 

[Thor.]

Freeverse takes as much talent as....

Well as I'm tapped for insulting metaphors...not much.


Anyway

The boiling blood
And swaying hips
Me eyes meet yours in the sky
On a plane you look down
I'm convinced that you can see

A stewardess
Attending flights
Is in the
Airport
Waiting for her knight in a shining Prius


She comes to him
She comes to me
She comes to her
I never thought I was the first
But maybe I could be the last

She leaves us alone
We cry for her love
She like a Dove
And a Vulture

 

[I_Am_Genesis]

I guess I'll enter

 

[Nyangoro]

Oh come now, Thor. Quality Free Verse takes quite a bit of talent. Creating flow and rhythm where none would seems apparent is an art form.

idk, I might enter, but I really just wanted to say the above, lol.

 

[Thor.]

Oh come now, Thor. Quality Free Verse takes quite a bit of talent. Creating flow and rhythm where none would seems apparent is an art form.

idk, I might enter, but I really just wanted to say the above, lol.

I guess I just don't understand it. But I still think that writing something beautiful within the restrictions of beat and rhyme is more respectable.

 

[King Sora X]

Well even though this is not normal, i have been thinking, and i am going to make the stanza's be 3 or higher..it just seems a bit more reasonable..hope its not a problem for you people.:/