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Sirsly. I WANT TO FINSH A BATTLE. >:

I really need to take Femi to see how far she can go, last battle the kid went gonerz. So...>: Please?

I would like LL or Cyber.

Or Sensi.


Name: Femi

Nickname: Exiled.

Age: 17.

Gender: Female.

Personality: She uses to be a peaceful loving woman but with the curse she has turned Ice Cold. She is now a Sadistic person with no trust in humans at all. Always calling them shells, she has a system off Respect Points; the higher it is, the better the lower, well… You’re screwed.

Appearance: She has dark milk colored skin. Long legs and a trend body, her long edgy like hair was her pride. But the most different is the eye color was her deep Jade Eyes. Her Appearance is only when she takes control of her "Shell" which is a humans girls body.

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Weapons: Zodiac Spear – Which is invisible until she calls upon it. One of her most used weapon. It stands at 5 and half feet tall filled colored with pure gold. It’s a priceless spear for its deadly never dull blade on the tip. On the other side it has the Egyptian cross for good luck and Fortune. But what’s special is it can change form.

Zodiac Bow- one of its forms again, which is a nice Bow. She has different types of Arrows to use, but no one knows how much she has. It can be all sorts of Elements of types. The Bow is the same just a bow form.

Book of Dead: Which she also keeps hidden. This book has a mind of its own; it will fly around if needed and slap people if Femi is in trouble and can’t defend. But it’s mostly used for spells. It will save time by flashing through pages to find what she needs and it will not be able to be copy. For this is only one copy of the Book of Dead. If someone does copy the gods will see to it for there death. For Femi can only read upon it with Mortal eyes.

Abilities: As what stated earlier her book gives her the spell she needs, for she keeps them hidden. From everything to the most basic Fire spell to even summoning the dead, or even cooking.

Quick Step- Faster then running she will use this to either to catch something or just to get away. No one can really see her for her speed is unmatchable. You will need trained eyes to catch her.

Last Love: A burst of speed will give her if her Spirit Energy is to low.

Elements Shield: Protects her from the hottest of fires all the way to the coldest of Ice. It will protect her like a new skin all the way to the top of the head till her toes. If one was to attack her with say wind it will just give her more Energy stored.

Bio: Such a sad tale of love and lost. She was a princess to be wed to a horrid man. Her father Hateaus sent her to marry a General. But her heart didn’t belong to him, no it belonged to another. It was a servant a boy named Chenzria. The eve before her wedding she went to the shrine of Isis Begging for her help and wisdom.

The gods can hear her cries.

Isis came to Earth at the shrine looking down upon the crying women. The god smiled down upon her knowing her fate was to be her downfall.

"Young child I am giving you my book. The book of the Dead. For you will need it in time, but I must warn you. You must hide it from your husband. For if he finds it you will be doomed. Understand?"

The young women nodded and kissed the god’s feet. She would do what she asked. The day of her wedding she opened to book to find a blank book. Endless of pages of white and one black page in the front. Crying her heart out her was doomed. Rage filled her as she had no escape from Marriage.

Her small country celebrated the Princess Marriage. It was something to be proud of, but others knew the bride was doomed. Hushed voices spoke of the Generals beatings; his calm face was filled with Rage and hate. How he treated women from the past got to others ears. He would beat them, asking for them to do things a man should never ask.
But he always got what his mind set out for.

As she walked down the isle the bride cried, crying for the gods to help her from this prison, but no one would come. The marriage was made, His evil grin, how she wanted to rip it off. She was bounded to him for eternity, that night she was destroyed. She would never forgive him.

Disobeying her husbands voice, she vested Chenzira, They where coughed during the time and was reported to Femis husband and Father. Her husband filled with Rage destroyed her home upon that he found the book the gods gave her.
It was filled with words, not blank like the last time.

The book not having the proper master for Femi was to be stole it hers, The General commended the book to find a Banishment spell for the earth. The pages sped as it found the one it need. "Curse of Prison" was called bounding Femi to earth for all her years. Her own father even turned his back as she was killed by the Zodiac Spear. Her body was killed but not her Spirit.

Her Spirit was in slumber for many years, the book and Zodiac spear was passed down for years in a High Egyptian family. Guarded until Femi would come home. The story was told to children who where to be married, to teach them never to disobey your Husband.
That first black page was the story of the Fallen Princess and how her death came to her punishment.

People may wonder where she slept for such a long time. Easy, She slept with in different people, she slept with in dark walls within the persons mind until she was needed. Her curse was her power, but also a pain. She had to go through each human while Recovering her memories. Her husband wanted her to feel the pain each shell, each life. Each death.

God how she wanted to kill him.

During one shell in a year of 2006, she found a herself with in a young girl. Sleeping until she was called, she found herself yet again with this girl. Who was this girl? Ah Akain. She was also the blood line where Femi was from. Maybe she can help her find her curse broken. She also had her book, and her spear. How...convenitit. Odd...Very odd.

Femi thought this was a sign from the God’s to help her break this curse. At first Akain was against it and thought she was going insane. But her Grandmother soothed her. She gave Akain her Book and the Zodiac spear.

"Princess Femi, will help and vise versa. You must understand you where chosen little one. I give you her book and spear. Lay this spirt to rest, lay her soul to the peaceful realm."

And so, Femi will have her Revenge.
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Edited. Didn't really like the character I put up, so I'm using a different one.



Name:
“Mother Abbess” Meng Lo.

Age: Thirteen, going on fourteen in October. Reincarnated several times over.

Gender: Female.

Appearance: Standing at about 5’5”, and weighing in at a mere 97 pounds. Her hair is cut very short, sleek and raven black, slightly fringed at the ends with two long bangs hanging over her eyes. Her eyes are a piercing grayish-yellow, resembling those of an owl, with a small scar of unknown origin over her right eye lid. Her complexion is slightly tan, though it varies on what conditions she’s in. An apathetic look is almost constantly glued to her facial features, a technique of which she was taught during basic training to keep her motives and tactics unclear to her enemies. It’s a very rare occasion that a smile or frown appears on her lips. She has no real wardrobe - being a nun, she is usually wearing a baggy tan sweat-shirt like garment over a tan frock, as well as grey shorts, and deer-skin leggings bound with red leather.

Personality: Distant and cold, Meng is a very tactical, very calculated person who considers showing emotion a sign of weakness, so she has been taught since a very young age to remain apathetic to all things. At times, when in solitude or an emergency, she might show compassion or fear, or even anger, thought it’s very seldom that this is seen. Her ability to track and pursue is remarkable, as are her survival skills and extensive knowledge of hand-to-hand combat, and perhaps it’s because of these results of years of rigorous physical and mental training that at such a young age, she’s able to forge such a strong independent and philosophical demeanor.

Abilities: As she is the first Mother Abbess of the Cheng Monks in over four centuries, it is no surprise that Meng’s spiritual and physical powers surpass those of most on Earth. Properly considered an avatar of Pangu, supreme god of creation, through the use of talismans and other magical objects, she is able to control probability fields as to cause the least probable outcome; I.e., cause a massive explosion, generate a surge of electricity or a lightning bolt, kick up a whirlwind, cause an earthquake or landslide, or trap someone in a sphere of water. She is also gifted with extreme physical strength, agility, speed, and endurance, as well as wit and tactical prowess.

Items:


Elemental Talismans

Yi Moh - Upon activation, the user to become as light as air, allowing quick evasive maneuvers as well as heightened agility.

Teng - Upon activation, the user may generate a massive electrical surge at a target, or call down a lightning bolt.

Sui - Upon activation, the user may surround a target with a crashing wave, trap them in a sphere of water, or, used in combination with a Fung (wind) talisman, freeze a target alive.

Foh - Upon activation, the user may release a massive burst of flame, trap an enemy in a ring of fire, or even breathe fire if the talisman’s energy is stored inside the esophagus. Powerful yet a mite more unpredictable in very dry conditions.

Fung - Upon activation, the user may generate and manipulate a large gust of gale force wind, and even kick up a small tornadoe or whirlwind.

Su - Upon activation, the user may cause rapid plant growth, and can trap an enemy in a tangle of thorns, the branches of a tree, immobilize them, or even strangle them with vines. Highly weakened in barren conditions.

Moon Kiss - Upon activation, the opponent will come under the feeling of exhaustion, and will often see either falling feathers or purple flower petals falling to the ground from all around them. It is in this weakened and often helpless state that Meng is able to switch from her defensive maneuvers to offensive.

Illusion Talismans - Talismans that when activated will produce as many doppelgangers of Meng in accordance to the number of talismans she uses. She often uses the opportunity of confusing her enemy to slip away unnoticed. By channeling some of her ki energy into each copy, she is able to use mock talismans to attack her enemies from a distance - or even use the doppelgangers themselves as talismans.

Weapon Summoning Talismans - Talismans that when activated, allow the user to access stores of weapons they’ve sealed inside personal pocket dimension ‘trunks.’

Weaponry

Pearl Dagger - This weapon is specifically designed for a Cheng Monk. Light weight but sturdy, it is extremely useful for close quarters combat, and is designed to be highly aernodynamic as to allow it’s conversion into a throwing knife. It can take the energy exerted from a talisman and multiply it ten fold at the cost of the owner’s blood, and it drains almost all of their strength. This function is best used as a last resort.

Spear of the Four Heavenly Kings
- A weapon forged for the first Mother of the Cheng Abbey. Forged from an aloe of titanium and jade, it’s grown frayed with age but is still fully functional, and has been infused with the protective energy of a shield talisman as to guard the owner during battle. It doubles the user’s physical strength at the cost of a five minute negation of the user’s ability to activate talismans.

Jade Ink Gourd and Brush - While the gourd itself is not magical, the ink and brush can be used to make talismans out of objects other than the special paper made by the Cheng monks. These make-shift talismans are not as effective as the regular talismans them selves.

Likes:

- Sweet red bean soup.
- Fresh spring water.
- The color white.
- The smell of incense.
- Genuine people.
- Kind people
- Young children.
- Tactics.

Dislikes:
- Cigarette smoke.
- Obnoxious people.
- Foolishness.
- Mindless television shows.
- People who gamble too much.
- Blind Battling (Fighting without a strategy.)


History: [Unfinished.]

Where's this battle set, might I ask?
 

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Occ: Oh wonderful, Everything is going as planned...I will explain the place in my post. k?


IC: It was funny how things can change, over time. Both girls had something to do, what that was well..Time could only really tell. Over travels the girl was starting to get the hang of the Princess, they were becoming sisters over time. Which in a way was not supposed to happen. It could screw everything up if it did.

"Fate is never kind."

She knew that all to well. She was stripped of who she was and what she was to become. But she honestly didn't want the crown. She could give it to her younger sister Bernice in due time when she was ready. She had that much power above. But that time never came, nor will it ever.

This battle they find themselves in an a place known as St.Thomas. A place that looked like beach place, vendors, people, food, and items. All wrapped in about a ten mile Island. Femi sat on top a hill (That's all what St.Thomas was, a giant hill) Where a clearing was made. Deep palm trees and flowers her eyes have never seen was there. Orange, blue, deep purples, and pinks. The clearing was perfect for he mind to think.

She watched as people passed down below, not paying heed to what was to come. Poor little ones.

Akain was watching, her deep brown eyes scanning the horizon, watching Giant boats coming in. Cruisers that what they where called. She tensed when she heard a twig snap. Without words they changed, the small girl was now taller, her dark brown hair a sleek black, her brown eyes jaded green.

Femi stood. Her tall frame was shown. She had her body straight, her head looking straight towards the ocean. It was High-noon, the sun shinning down on her.

"You can come out if you would like." She spoke softly
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The town was quaint; something like a tourist trap. She'd seen many places like it since she'd left the Abbey and pursued the fulfillment of her purpose - to eliminate the presence of...well, that man in this world, and achieve apotheosis as to ensure the Cheng Monk's salvation. However, this one was different, that Meng felt the moment she stepped into the clearing. Someone was here, someone of power.

Reacting on instinct, she'd climbed the tallest tree and dispatched several clones to search for this person - it was pointless, because in the end, the target had come to Meng. In excitement, she shifted, and in quite a careless move, snapped off a small twig that branched from the base of the tree. She had to admit, when the girl almost immediately noticed Meng's presence by such a small slip up, that the girl had quite the perceptive skills. Meng dropped from the tree, landing with feline balance, and stared ahead, icy-cold, at her opponent.

"Your my opponent, hmm? You're existence has been nagging at my mind for days now - how is it you maintain the instability of two souls residing in one body?" Meng straightened herself, shifting herself so she was in a defensive stance. "No matter. It'll be fun sparring against the two of you." Within a split second, she reached into the confines of her sleeve, and with a flick of the wrist, the talisman was whizzing through the air. But this attack wasn't aimed directly at Femi, oh no; it was aimed at the ground below her feet.

Meng hissed the activation word into the air, and almost immediately, a burst of water with the pressure of a fire hose erupted from the ground around her. If Meng's opponent didn't move fast, she'd be crushed, and the battle would be over.
 

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Femi smiled. This would hopefully be fun.


"Your my opponent, hmm? You're existence has been nagging at my mind for days now - how is it you maintain the instability of two souls residing in one body?"


She was about to answer when he book appeared by itself without her call. She raised and eyebrow as it flipped to a defense spell. She was going to ignore it when she saw something in her opponents sleeve. She nodded and she whispered a few quick words, She was lifted up in the air by a Sphere around her body, instead of her own body benign crushed it was the Sphere that had the damage. She dropped 20 feet from the side she was at when the attack came.

"As I was about to say: Quite simple really. We both use are energy. Spiritual mind you, we use it as one using it when we are low, we work as one. Not as two. Which you seem to misunderstand. No matters: She is my mission to keep safe"

With that her voice went low. She snapped her fingers. The Spear showed itself, standing straight the tip gleaming in the sunlight. She snapped twice again and muttered something under her breath.

The spear began to glow, Her book elevating in front of her waiting for its masters call. She smiled. She again snapped her fingers the book changed and began to glow a black. Her green eyes turned a strong black, the air now growing a cold wind from the north and the skies going darker. The once normal ground begin to shift. She mumbled something and her hands shot out dark on her opponent. But this time it was behind her.

A hole opened up just big enough.

Inside was also known as the underworld. The island was just for show, nothing more then a prop.

The wind blew a strong gust of around 50 mph. She would need the girl to fall into the hole and then She can begin to move with her next set of plans. That is if everything was going to plan.

Femi waited.
 

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Meng smiled. The gales were not an obstacle; with a swift flick of her wrist she unsheathed a flurry of wind talismans, muttered the activation word, and the spiraling cyclone absorbed the gust that manifested itself from her opponent. Pushing and shoving the air with the palms of her hands, she sent the cyclone rocketing back in Femi's direction, and then slapped a trio of plant talismans onto the ground below her. Almost immediately, several dozen oak trees jutted up from the ground, and turned the clearing into a knotted forest. Meng jumped, up into the concealing foliage, and looked down at her opponent below, considering her options.

No, her attack wasn't through, she decided. Pangu considered this girl a threat, so Meng had to eliminate her. She pulled a lightning talisman from her sleeve and tossed it down onto the wet ground where the burst of water that had failed to eliminate her foe had landed. The talisman flitted to the ground, and Meng slapped her hands together - two fingers up on her left hand, the other five on the right wrapped around the two. She made a quick incantation for protection, then shouted into the air.

"Teng!" Almost immediately, the clouds overhead darkened. A single bolt of lightning shot down from the sky, parting the clouds, and striking the very conductive water around Femi. The lightning branched off in many directions, striking against the surrounding oaks, setting them alight and forming a sealing ring. No way in for Meng, no way out for Femi, who now faced a spiraling cyclone and a massive surge of electricity coming at her from all directions. In a cute gesture of the child that still remained in her, Meng crossed her fingers. She was tired, and hoped that she'd be able to take a nap.
 

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Femi snorted. This girl was fun to play with. She was just like her little Sister, at the time she was 7 but still cute and had everything, yet she was content with trying experiments, Her father wasn't happy that his daughter was doing it. But she made good points.

The girl was clueless, but she was young. 12 maybe 13 at the least. Femi tsked as she watched her own Attack backfire. She wasn't surprised she had a feeling she could do it. She watched as giant Oaks came and trapped her. Then with the ground still nice and wet she heard a 'teng' called. Lightning crashing into her. With out a move of her fingers she allowed to be hit.

Femi wondered what she should do with the lightning, and she had to act fast. Quick step came into play, she jumped on one of the branches, her bare feet didnt enjoy the feeling of the sap but she kept going, she was above a good 50 feet.

Femi smirked. She watched the wind, her eyes flashing. Again the spear came into play: She elevated in the air with the spears Hexagons shape surrounded around her. She wanted this to work. The Cyclone came and hit against the tress the impact just enough to get her free. She wasn't finished with the defense.

She didn't know what to do with the Cyclone. Let the book take care of it. The book cracked open and rushed forward to the Cyclone, opening up with blackness she watched as the book sucked it up. She didnt need the Cyclone now, but she would have to get rid of the damn thing before the battle was done. It might come in handy.

She now need to get things ready.

She let the sphere come down. Muttering a few words her Spear changed, it once long weapon was now in a shape of a bow. Arrows and a pack was on Femis back, filled with colorful arrows. She reached behind her back and took a Red one and a Black one.

Putting them together she pulled the arrows back all the way to where it was uncomftorable. She released the two arrows shooting out with a burst of speed. Once it left her she let her Sphere back up. Sure it was using her energy, but hey it was the girls fault for giving her the Lightning bolt. She had enough to spare for now. The impact of fire and dark magic might make an explosion. If so the trees would be clear and they would burn.

Oh what fun.


Occ: I tried. -.- I didnt like it. D= Im sorry I went overboard..Heat of the battle eh?
 
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OOC: If lightning struck you dead on from all directions, do you honestly think you'd be able to live through it? I don't really understand how you were able to control the 'heat' in lightning and let it 'chrage you' even though it's composed of an electric current and not fire...
 

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OOC: There's still the problem of your last two paragraphs not really making any sense at all. What is this sphere? If the lightning hit you, how did you survive? How were you able to reuse the energy from the lightning bolt once it hit you?
 
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