Fanfiction ► Who done it?

[lavanda94]

I would like to say this story isn't a classical who done it, it's a series which for the first series i added a kind of who done it storyline.

PROLOGUE

1920
The phone rang in Scotlandyard.
"Hello, Detective John Price here speaking may i help you?"
"My n-name is Scarlet Gordon.......m-my h-husband has been m-murdred" "Oh my, may i know your address Miss?"
"Oxford Street, Gordon Mansion"
While Detective Price was writing down the address he heard that Miss Scarlet had put down the phone.
John took his old fashioned car and went straight to Oxford Street.
He finally arrived to the Mansion, he knocked twice just incase.
A teenager opened she was about seventeen, very pale.
"Yes, are you the Detective my mother phoned?"
"Yes may i know your name Miss?"
"Stephanie Gordon, do come in"
"Thank you"
The corridor was long but finally he got to the livingroom there were other people sitting down, all with suspicious faces.

Thank you for reading.
Enjoy!

 

[lavanda94]

Chapter 1
In the room there were four people, two women and two men,
the first lady was wearing a long red dress, she wasn't that beautiful, though she was young she had wrinkles all over her.
The next lady was very beautiful and had a beautiful black dress that matched her red lipstick and her black hair.
Both the men were dressed identically they both had a black suit with a tie. Right at the very end of the room was a 40 year old women wearing a long black dress, she was looking through the window thinking.
"Mrs Gordon?" Asked John.
"Yes detective?"
"May is ask you a few questions?"
Before she could answer doctors came.
"YOU called an ambulance?"
"Of course, i don't know how my husband died, of course he wasn't stabbed"
The doctors took the body away.
"Miss we are going to take the body to the Morgue for some tests"
Said Doctor Flemming.
"So are you up to answer some questions?"
"Yes if you insist"
"Why do you think your husband was murdered and not had a heart attack?"
"My husband was 43, he wasn't ill or anything, he was a scientist and had few enemies, he created a potion which could make your skin nicer, he just wanted to make old people happy his friends were jelous"
"May i know the name of your husband m'am?"
"Michael Gordon"
"May i also know the names of your guests?"
"Yes, the women in the red dress is Milena Warpath she is the Daughter of one of my husband's friend's, the women in the black dress is Ida Manks, the two men are brothers Gus and martin Modem.

Chapter 2 will be out soon.

 

[Winged Mirage]

So the suspects are being lined up at the moment. It's the typical murder scene, or so it seems.

 

[lavanda94]

Saying the truth no. If you read you might understand, i will post the next chapter.

It is not a normal Murder story i might make them a series of detective price so it is not a classical who done it.

 

[lavanda94]

Chapter 2
"Miss Warpath may i ask you a few questions?"
"Of course detective"
"When was the last time you saw Mr Gordon?"
"I never met Mr Gordon detective, my dad said to come here, he said that he was too busy so he sent me over"
"May i have your Fathers phone number?"
"Sure here you go"
Miss Warpath handed over a small piece of paper with a phone number.
"Thank you"
John was thinking why did Miss Warpath have her Dad's phone number with her.
John dialed: 65980 18903 1920
Someone picked up,
"This is Thomas Warpath may i help you?"
"Goodafternoon Mr Warpath, my name Detective John Price, do you know about the murder of Mr Gordon?
"Of course, i sent i daughter there why?
"Well it doesn't help sending your daughter here since she doesn't know nothing about the victim so if you don't mind coming here and answering a few questions!!"
"I am sorry Detective but i'm a bit busy at the moment"
"Fine then i'll have to question you at the Police Station"
"Fine see you tomorrow...Detective!"
When John put the phone down he saw Miss Warpath beside him.
"Is there anything i can do Miss?
"No, not really, i heard the argument"
"And?"
"Well, i remember my Dad moaning about this potion that Mr gordon did,
and if you were thinking why i had my Fathers phone number well he gave it to me with no reason like if he knew you might of asked for it"
"Thank you Miss"
John had to go to the Police station, he wanted to see Mr Warpath's curriculum.
When John arrived to the living room, the maid had laid the tea out.
"Mr Price do you want to join us?"
Said Ida Manks.
"No thanks i must go back to the station, I should see you all in the morning which means that all of you must be here tomorrow for some further questions"
Everyone nodded.
When John opened the door he saw a man ready to knock on it but stopped soon as the door opened.


Things to think about:
Who is this man?
Why did Mr Warpath give his phone number to Milena?

Chapter 3 will be out soon.