The television cuts to a commercial in a house “You could win a trip to an island paradise for a week’s vacation. No money need just call this number.” it blurted out in the middle of the small apartment, that as of now was being rented by Oliver. “Maybe I need to call the number” he told himself when he heard the call was free. “I just can’t keep living in this dump.” He told himself as he picked up his cell phone and dialed the number. He was about to change his life.
A week after Oliver called the number from the commercial he received a phone call for himself telling him that he won. There would be a cab out in front of his house that would take him to the cruise ship. Oliver hurried quickly out of his apartment and into the cab. The driver greeted Oliver and told him the ride had already been paid for while he started to drive towards the docks. Oliver was anxious to get there he couldn’t wait for this paradise.
Upon arriving to the docks there were a group of men waiting for him. “Welcome aboard” they all said in unison as they chuckled. All of a sudden Oliver was on the ground. He was unconscious.
When he awake from the sneak attack he was laying on a beach. “Where am I?” he asked himself as he stood up and glanced around. In front of him was a small table with an envelope on it. Oliver was cautious as he walked over to it and picked it up.
Greetings Mr. Comacodo
We are glad to tell you that you have won our island paradise trip. We apologize for the roughness, but if we told you what was really going to happen then you would’ve backed down. So, we just took matters into our own hands.
Here is what’s going to happen. Over the next few weeks another person will join you on the island. You will be the only one of the people sent to the island that will receive this note, you may tell the others what will happen or you can let them find out on their own. After we’ve got everyone there that we want there, you will have to survive for one year. What you do in this year or how you live is up to you. If you survive you will be awarded with a way off of the island and one million dollars each for all survivors.
If you try to escape the island you WILL be killed. If for some reason we miss then the sharks that surround the island are sure to get you. So, don’t try to escape your fate.
Enjoy Mr. Comacodo
After reading the note Oliver knew he had to survive, but what else was on the island and who else would be joining him.
Just post your templates here and we'll start the story once we get a few people.
Template:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Personality:
Bio or How you got chosen to be on the island:
Mine
Name: Oliver Comacodo
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: Oliver is about 5'8" and average weight. He is not built but not chubby either, he is the perfect balance between them. He is usually found wearing blue jeans and a black skate shirt. He wears a pair of circa skate shoes. His hair is medium length and randomly flips out on one or both sides of his head depending on the day. His eyes are a dark green, that when someone is looking at them they find themselves not being able to look away until Oliver turns his head or blinks.
Personality: Oliver is a nice person to be around, at times he is a little egotistic, but that just when he's bragging to his friends about anything. He doesn't fear much if anything and isn't afraid to take a beating for a friend. He is an extremely nice person, but hasn't had many relationships due to the fact he is shy around new people.
Bio or Island entry: Oliver has lived a normal life in his life. He had attended public schooling and just graduated, but his parents wouldn't pay for him to go to college. They told him he needed to learn responsibility by paying for his own college. After he found out he wasn't going to college he found him a part time job and moved away from his family. Living in his recently rented apartment Oliver waited living his life day by day, working constantly. He realized this wasn't the life he wanted when he saw the commercial appear on his television. This commercial would change his life, and you all know what happened after that.
A week after Oliver called the number from the commercial he received a phone call for himself telling him that he won. There would be a cab out in front of his house that would take him to the cruise ship. Oliver hurried quickly out of his apartment and into the cab. The driver greeted Oliver and told him the ride had already been paid for while he started to drive towards the docks. Oliver was anxious to get there he couldn’t wait for this paradise.
Upon arriving to the docks there were a group of men waiting for him. “Welcome aboard” they all said in unison as they chuckled. All of a sudden Oliver was on the ground. He was unconscious.
When he awake from the sneak attack he was laying on a beach. “Where am I?” he asked himself as he stood up and glanced around. In front of him was a small table with an envelope on it. Oliver was cautious as he walked over to it and picked it up.
Greetings Mr. Comacodo
We are glad to tell you that you have won our island paradise trip. We apologize for the roughness, but if we told you what was really going to happen then you would’ve backed down. So, we just took matters into our own hands.
Here is what’s going to happen. Over the next few weeks another person will join you on the island. You will be the only one of the people sent to the island that will receive this note, you may tell the others what will happen or you can let them find out on their own. After we’ve got everyone there that we want there, you will have to survive for one year. What you do in this year or how you live is up to you. If you survive you will be awarded with a way off of the island and one million dollars each for all survivors.
If you try to escape the island you WILL be killed. If for some reason we miss then the sharks that surround the island are sure to get you. So, don’t try to escape your fate.
Enjoy Mr. Comacodo
After reading the note Oliver knew he had to survive, but what else was on the island and who else would be joining him.
Just post your templates here and we'll start the story once we get a few people.
Template:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Personality:
Bio or How you got chosen to be on the island:
Mine
Name: Oliver Comacodo
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance: Oliver is about 5'8" and average weight. He is not built but not chubby either, he is the perfect balance between them. He is usually found wearing blue jeans and a black skate shirt. He wears a pair of circa skate shoes. His hair is medium length and randomly flips out on one or both sides of his head depending on the day. His eyes are a dark green, that when someone is looking at them they find themselves not being able to look away until Oliver turns his head or blinks.
Personality: Oliver is a nice person to be around, at times he is a little egotistic, but that just when he's bragging to his friends about anything. He doesn't fear much if anything and isn't afraid to take a beating for a friend. He is an extremely nice person, but hasn't had many relationships due to the fact he is shy around new people.
Bio or Island entry: Oliver has lived a normal life in his life. He had attended public schooling and just graduated, but his parents wouldn't pay for him to go to college. They told him he needed to learn responsibility by paying for his own college. After he found out he wasn't going to college he found him a part time job and moved away from his family. Living in his recently rented apartment Oliver waited living his life day by day, working constantly. He realized this wasn't the life he wanted when he saw the commercial appear on his television. This commercial would change his life, and you all know what happened after that.
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