Fanfiction ► untitled[hopeful comedy]

[Atnihs]

Cloud: milkshakes r good
Atnihs: behold the power of cows! Cloud: *drinks apple juice*mmmmmmmm its healthier and it isnt from a cow
Atnihs: behold the power of apples!
Cloud: *hits Atnihs with a pan*
Cloud: be quiet Anihs
sora: Silh0ette, Son of Sam, and Johnny Stooge are my idols XD
Cloud: I idolize nobody
Atnihs: behold the power of metal!
sora: Behold the power of.... *punches atnihs in the face*
Atnihs:*has a black eye*owwwwwwww sora all I did was talk about the power of many things like cows,apples, and metal.
sora:I pwn you so I can do what I want to you.
Atnihs:did you have to pwn so hard*has a steak on his eye*
sora:yeah!So live with it!


i want to say that if i dont get banned for this i wanna thank everyone who contributed to this piece and say they were the greatest help evernow if you will excuse me*runs away from sora*YAAAAAAAAAAAH!

 

[Cloudisawesum1]

THAT SUCK!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. 2 every1 who reads this:im Cloud in this fan fic

 

[Atnihs]

well i am not very elaborate and dont hurt me for using you in this fic

 

[TheMuffinMan]

Yes, and I am sora.... I PWN Jo0o0o0o!!!

 

[Atnihs]

Ayame: i don't think atnihs will make good stew
Atnihs: -tries to eat donald's head and uses fire stuff learned from axel too increase heat to metal melting-
*donald jumps out of the pot and curses everyone with a spell*
Cloud: *adds chocolate syrup*
Atnihs: -starts being as clumsy as colette of tales of symphonia-
Cloud: *catches donald3 and puts him back in the pot*and stay in there!
Atnihs: another pot?
Cloud: adds milk and coco puffs
Cloud: no the same pot
Ayame: *sneaks up to pot and releases donald3*
Atnihs: -looks in pot-so what you cooking?
Cloud: *adds cockroaches*
Atnihs: thats not gonna be tasty
Cloud:HEY!!!!!!!!!!*stuffs Ayame in the pot*
Cloud:HEY!!!!!!!!!!*stuffs Ayame in the pot*
Cloud: who cares
Ayame: if everyones so hungry the order a pizza or something
Cloud: puts lid back on and smashes the pot with a hammer
Ayame:*shatters pot and escapes*
Atnihs: -melts pot-
Cloud: *stuffs Atnihs in the smashed pot and puts pot in the oven*
Atnihs: hey!!!-hits against pot-
Ayame: Thunder!*fries cloudisawesum1 with spell*
Cloud: Turns heat up 2 750 degrees
Cloud:AUGH!
Atnihs: -melts his way out makes oven explode and looks at the flames in awe-
Atnihs: freedom!
Cloud: NOW LOOK WUT UVE DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ayame: ok then *throws pot at cloud*
Ayame: *hits him*
Cloud: *falls 2 the ground*

the others like this and cloud is the same one as earlier
new is ayame who showed up in chat later on and donald guy also
-Cloud chases him with a pot-bye!YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

 

[siverstorm]

COOL a senseless script

 

[Atnihs]

thank you?

 

[Cloudisawesum1]

hey silverstorm,this fan fic is based on wut happend at the vbchat

 

[Valentine]

'...................

 

[Atnihs]

and now my(technique?)on making a fan fic will stop and i will think of some other way to make it.wish me luck!
*in a dark alley 3 shadowy figures are talking*
tallest one:then its settled you 2?
in between height one:yeah
shortest one:*in hard to understand voice*we are gonna get back at Atnihs for tricking people and making us look dumber than other fan fics
*tall and medium ones step into moonlight revealed as the real sora and cloud*
sora and cloud:what did you say donald?
donald:walks into moonlight also*i said making us look dumber than other fan fics do!
sora:get those marbles out of your mouth already!
donald:*spits out marbles and talks like a british man*I do say you are quite short of hearing arent you?
cloud:...put those marbles back in your mouth.
*donald puts marbles back in mouth*
sora: o.o okaaaaaaay.time to plan for our humiliation of atnihs more so than he already is and then beat him up*
all 3:yeah!*all put hands out in agreement*

 

[Atnihs]

sorry for double posting but i needed to finish that last post up with....
meanwhile at the organization...
Diz: ok now we were hired by*reads paper*atnihs to protect him from someone and do evil things so they will forget about him....anyquestions?
Axel:yeah!why not just blow up cloud,donald<and sora with a burst of flames that should easily handle them.*is fiddling around with tiny fire models of the 3 and smashing them*hahahahaha!
Diz: its because Atnihs' plan intertwine with mine and it does'nt involve singing sora and his freinds to a crisp.
Marluxia:and i want to steal his power while diz isnt lookin.
everyone but mar: o.o
mar: uh...i mean be the 2nd strongest person here even though i have flower power.
Diz: whatever
mar: phew

how is that people who gave me advice and my rp my mentor monster maniac?
also other people who i want to try and entertain.

 

[monstermaniac]

if it wasnt a comedy it'd be pretty good, nice job

 

[Atnihs]

well it was meant to have tiny comedy points