Something I drew with a pen...

[AzzurroRainrebor]

Well, what I have established about this is:

1. I could have made use of shadows...
2. And...some things (i.e. that bush in front of the cabin) could have been shaded better...

Okay, what do you think?

 

[Lancelot]

I thought that was a tumbleweed in front of the cabin, actually.

I really thing the cabin could have used (as you said) shading, so it doesn't look like it's just floating on space. Some detail aroung the outer of it would have helped, too, like slight build-ups of dirt. Aside from the lack of shading, it's pretty nice. I especially love the fading of the trees as they go further back.

 

[BloodRose]

WHOLY BEEP THAT IS SO KEWL!!!
Your so good at drawing =)
yes shadows would've looked better but you can't blame you, lots of good detail and good line strokes xD

 

[*~BlackCat~*]

O.O

That's really good, especially that it's in pen.
But the cabin's position is a little bit weird.
Overall it's awesome. :3

 

[AzzurroRainrebor]

I thought that was a tumbleweed in front of the cabin, actually.

I really thing the cabin could have used (as you said) shading, so it doesn't look like it's just floating on space. Some detail aroung the outer of it would have helped, too, like slight build-ups of dirt. Aside from the lack of shading, it's pretty nice. I especially love the fading of the trees as they go further back.

Thank you...and yeah, after thinking about it and looking at it, I realized that the cabin was sorta "cut and pasted looking". As though I took the cabin from something else and placed it in a new location...

WHOLY BEEP THAT IS SO KEWL!!!
Your so good at drawing =)
yes shadows would've looked better but you can't blame you, lots of good detail and good line strokes xD

Thanks...

O.O

That's really good, especially that it's in pen.
But the cabin's position is a little bit weird.
Overall it's awesome. :3

Thank you... I started to notice the cabin thing; I think it sorta has something to do with the shading and how I drew the pathway thingy...