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This is my second Silen Hill fic. The first was Silent Hill:Dear Sister. Here's something you should know for the story.

As defined: ECT: N: Abbreviation for Electro-Convulsive Therapy. The sending of an electrical current through the brain in order to induse seizer activities of the brain. This is used on patients with severe mental disorders, including severe depression, schizophrenia (multiple personality syndrome), and for those who suffer with severe hallucinations. More commonly known as Electric Shock Treatment.

Now, enjoy the first chapter.


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Prologue

A body was forced upwards as electricity surged through it. The man was kept to the table only by the leather restraints on his wrists and ankles. He didn’t scream. He couldn’t. After what seemed like an eternity, the charge stopped, and the man fell back to the table.

His breathing was short and quick. He felt himself blinking several times as his head rolled to the right. On the ground in front of him was something difficult to explain. It looked like an outline. The distorted image that was as large as it was misshapen.

“Again,” muttered a deep and rigid voice. The man made a fist with his left hand as he braced for what was about to happen. Once again his body was forced upward against his will. The shock hurt like hell. He couldn’t scream as long as the voltage flowed through him. He squeezed his eyes shut.

The electric flow stopped and the man opened his eyes. The thing was more visible now. More details were visible in the structure of the mass. Strange thick tentacles seemed to be forming.

“Heart rate rising!” said a female voice.

“Above normal for this treatment?” asked the deep voice from earlier.

“Greatly,” responded the feminine voice.

“Let me see,” After a few seconds of scuffling, the doctor cleared his throat. “Continue the treatment as planned,”

“No,” whispered the man as the creature moved in front of him.

“Doctor!” pleaded the female.

“Do it!” said the deep voice with a one of finality. Sighing, the assistant pulled a switch. Again the voltage surged through him with no way of him to communicate his pain. When this one stopped, he saw it in its entirety.

The creature was bulbous and a sickly tan. Strange thick tentacles stuck out in random places. It seemed to move on its stomach. Then the thing turned towards him. It quickly made its way so that it was only a few inches away from the table.

A round opening became bigger and a high pitched cry echoed through the monster’s mouth. Rows of razor sharp teeth formed in circles around the mouth and rotated at changing speeds.

The man screamed as loud as he could in the clean white room.


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SILENT HILL: E.C.T.


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Chapter One: To Silent Hill

A silver SUV drove at a steady pace down a suburban road. The driver was a man in his mid-forties with short black and gray hair. He had a silver watch on his left wrist and his business shirt was folded up at the cuffs so it reached his elbows. He drove with full attention on the road.

In the passenger seat was a woman with long blond hair was asleep. Her blouse was wrinkled and her eyes would’ve shone with the fatigue of several night of little to no sleep had they been open. Her hoop earrings shook with the rocking of the car.

In the back seat, staring out a rain spattered window was a girl in her late teens. Her neatly brushed chestnut hair stopped just below her shoulders. The hazel colored eyes she had were focused on her reflection. She wore a gray short sleeve and faded blue jeans that were cuffed at the bottom above her white and black sneakers. She absentmindedly ran her fingers along the silver chain as she remembered the events that led her family to driving where they were going.


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“Later!” said a teenage girl.

“See you tomorrow!” said another.

Ericka Haldin smiled as she bid farewell to her friends. She turned and walked down the cobblestone walkway of the outdoor plaza. Stores of all types surrounded her as she walked. Up ahead, a restaurant had several tables placed inside a decorative fence that was as high as them.

Ericka had just gotten back from college for her summer break. This was the nineteen year old’s second year at the college, and when she got back for the summer, she met up with some old friends. Her grades were pretty good too. That was to be expected. She really tried in school. Especially because she has just barely gotten in.

Her parents couldn’t afford college. The only way she could pay for it was a scholarship she won because of her score on her final exams in high school. The downside was that mail messed up when she sent in the application. The letter just barely arrived in time.

Ericka brushed her hair behind her left ear as she walked forward. She was suddenly overcome with a sense of foreboding. She looked to her right at the restaurant tables to see a man in a black short-sleeve with a white long-sleeve. His hair had gray strands scattered throughout it and his eyes were hidden behind sunglasses. He gave the feel of an older man who she didn’t want to talk to. Unfortunately for her, he did say something.

“Hello there, Ericka,” said the man. Ericka turned to stare at the man. She repositioned her hair again and stared at the man.

“What did you say?” she asked, squinting a little in confusion.

“Just saying hello, Ericka,” responded the man. There. He said it again.

“How do you know my name?” Ericka watched the man suspiciously as he drank from a tall cup of soda. He put the cup down on the glass table and smiled.

“I’ve known it for quite a while,” Ericka was starting to feel anxious.

“What?” she asked.

“Wow, I really didn’t know you were this stupid,” he smiled. “Just kidding,” Erika turned to walk away. She wanted nothing more then to leave the area at that point. “Oh, before we go,” His facial expressions converted to total seriousness. “Ask your dad about Silent Hill,”

Ericka broke into a run. This was way too weird. She wanted nothing but to be home at that point.


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The car screeched to a halt as the brakes kicked in to pull it into a parking spot. Ericka looked up to see a small diner with the letters ‘n’ and ‘r’ blacked out. At night, this was creepy as hell to see.

“Hun,” moaned the blond in the passenger seat as she rolled off her side and onto her back. “You really need to get those brakes fixed.”

The driver grinned a little before opening his door. “Come on,” he said getting out. Ericka pushed open her door almost at the same time her mother did. She stepped out into the chilly air and started walking towards the “Die”.


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Ericka gently spooned chunks of chicken and broth into her mouth. Her mother’s cooking was without comparison in her book. Sometimes her friends came over just for the food. As she stared at her self in the liquid broth, she recalled what had happened earlier.

“Dad?” she asked hesitantly.

“What is it, Ericka?” he asked warmly.

“Do you know of…” Ericka fumbled with her words; she tried to make a sentence that wouldn’t arouse suspicion. “Um…Silent Hill?” Her dad stared for a few seconds.

“I don’t think so,” He looked over at her mom. “Do you know anything?” Her mom shrugged.

“I never even heard of it,” she answered. Her dad looked back at her.

“Why do you ask?” he said.

“No reason,” rushed Ericka. Now her parents knew for a fact there was a reason, but communicated further with only a glanced at each other.

After dinner, Ericka did her nightly routine in the bathroom to keep her teeth white and face clean before changing. Her night clothes consisted of flannel pants and an old t-shirt. She pushed open the door to her room and dropped the towel she was drying her face with. The man from the restaurant was in her room.

She felt a scream rising in her throat and then die as a cold hand clasped itself over her mouth. The other hand of the man they belonged to formed a sign telling her to be quiet. After a few seconds, Ericka resorted to breathing heavily.

“Did you ask your father about Silent Hill?” Ericka slowly nodded. “And did you learn anything?” She slowly shook her head. “Then you didn’t ask him, now did you?” The sound of hurried footsteps climbing stairs echoed in her room. The man looked at the door.

“Just go to Silent Hill,” He removed his hand from Ericka’s mouth. She fell to the floor of her room and closed her eyes as tears formed within them.


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Several police reports after her parents found her alone in her room with the window of it open; everyone decided it was best to go to the town he kept saying. Since no evidence of him had ever been found, some police assumed Ericka was crazy. A Psychiatrist recommended going to Silent Hill, and her parents were the open minded type. With only her objecting, Ericka’s parents started down the trip to Silent Hill.

Now they were almost there. The rocking of the car slowly made Ericka drift to sleep. It was also another noise from the car that made her jolt awake. The car was swerving left and right on the road as her father snored in the front seat. He’d fallen asleep from the length of the ride. Her mother was also asleep, and neither seemed to be waking up in the chaos of the car.

“Dad!” shouted Ericka. “Dad, get up!” She shook him as hard as she could. The man drowsily opened his eyes before becoming entirely alert to his surroundings. He grabbed the wheel and steadied the car. He slammed on the brakes. When the car came to a stop, he turned to smile at Ericka.

“That was close, huh?” Both Ericka and her recently awakened mother sighed with relief. “Maybe next time I should…”

He was cut off as a large white truck larger then any Ericka had ever seen slammed into the front of the vehicle. The car tumbled over several times. It finally came to a stop on all four wheels slightly away from the main road. Ericka hit her head on the window next to her and passed out.


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Ericka slowly forced her eyes open and was immediately overcome with drowsiness. Her entire body urged her to slip back into the foreboding darkness beckoning to her. She forced it away and brushed a hand through the dark hair atop her aching head. The car came into focus, and Ericka remembered the events leading to her situation.

“Mom!” she cried and leaned up in between the two front seats. Her mother was out cold. Her breathing was rough and her leg was twisted in an unnatural position. The entire side of her face that was up against the door was bruised and swollen. The good thing out of this was that she was, at least, breathing.

Ericka turned to her dad. He looked to be in worse condition. Blood trickled down his forehead to the bridge of his nose. His breathing came in short gasps and seemed forced. “Dad,” Ericka said softly.

She had to find help for them. They were definitely in bad shape. Ericka struggled to open her door for a little while before giving up on it. She crawled over the other one to get out of the car. She stepped out into a small ditch that they had landed in.

Fog encircled her on all sides. It was constricting. Ericka made her way through the foreboding fog. After a few minutes of walking, she came to a sign that was chipping away with age.

Welcome to Silent Hill

The street she walked onto was cracked and old. She turned her head in several directions in attempts to find another person. When Ericka couldn’t find anyone, she yelled for help.

“Hello?” she cried. “Is anyone here? I need help!” A soft sound came from an alleyway to her right. She walked towards it. “Hello?” she called when she reached the entrance. “There was a car accident. My parents, I think they really need help!”

Ericka took a few more steps down the dark path. To her right, several pipes were scattered on the ground. On her left was a large dumpster with both lids closed. “Hello?” she tried again, and saw an outline approach her. Ericka’s mouth went dry when it came into full view.

It was a monster. There was no way around it. It was about five feet tall. A sickly gray colored its flaking skin. The bulge atop its shoulders could only be a head. One eye hung on to the socket by black and green strands. The other was none existent with a black hole where it should’ve been. The creature had no jaw; only rows of short yet sharp, yellowing teeth. The arms hung loosely, like it was relaxed. The knees bent forward and long blood-stained claws dug into the dirt from its feet. The creature lifted its head to show Ericka rotting gums and a tongue that flopped down. It emitted a low gurgle as a yellowish liquid came up from its throat. The thing looked like it was using mouthwash.

The monster had an odor that reminded Ericka of her elementary school days. Her mother had packed her a lunch of egg-salad and an apple for that day. Ericka wasn’t too hungry, and decided not to eat it. By the time she remembered it was in her backpack it had rotted quite a bit. The smell was enough to make her want to throw up.

“Get away,” Ericka warned, walking back a few steps. The monster continued to walk towards her. “I said go!” Ericka hoped she sounded more threatening then she felt. She tripped over her own feet and fell on the ground. She grabbed one of the pipes as the thing jumped towards her.

“I said get away!” She swung the weapon with as much force as she could and watched the monster slam its head onto the corner of the dumpster. Ericka got up and ran, not even bothering to see if it had gotten up. She held on to the pipe just in case there were more monsters.

She ran back to the SUV. Maybe she could get it to start or something. Anything was better then looking in that town. But then again, her parents were really hurt. They weren’t too far away from another town. Maybe she could call for an ambulance or something with her cell phone and they could meet half way?

As Ericka neared the edge of the town, she started seeing a red trail leading back in. It swerved off down another street. Ericka didn’t like it. The trail was getting more vivid as she ran towards the SUV. Oh God, what if something happened?

Ericka’s suspicions were confirmed when she saw both front doors of the car open. Neither one of her parents were anywhere in sight. What if they’d gotten up and started walking towards the town to search for her?

That didn’t make sense. The trail of blood definitely suggested they’d been dragged. Wait, someone dragged them from the car into the town? Or something, Ericka grimly reminded herself. There could definitely be more then just that one thing in the town. Ericka shuddered in fear with what she knew she had to do.

Ericka turned towards the town. Her parents had been dragged in there. Her grip tightened on the pipe she held as she started following the blood into the town. Her eyes stayed fixed on the environment in front of her so she could see anything coming towards her. Ericka had been there for about ten minutes, and she already hated Silent Hill. She walked into the town once again to try and find her parents.
 

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Well, no one reviewed, but that doesn't mean people don't like the story, right? So here's chapter 2. Enjoy.

Oh yeah, i forgot. DIsclaimer: I don't own Silent Hill. This story and all of its characters are mine, though.


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Chapter Two: A Wish for Your Stylish Death
The broken pieces of pavement crunched under Ericka’s weight as she ran down the street. The trail of blood led her back into town. Every time she had to turn a corner her grip on the pipe subconsciously tightened. The thought of running into another monster like the one in that ally made her shiver.

The blood in front of her faded as the spatter marks spread out and then deepened as the trail grew narrower. Who the hell would drag two injured (she intentionally left out the ‘severely’ part) people into a town filled with these screwed up monsters? Sorry, with what she’d seen so far, what had dragged them?

When Ericka rounded another corner she saw the back of an old woman. At least she assumed it was an old woman. The figure was short and hunched over with an orange cloth covering the back of her head.

“Excuse me?” said Ericka. She slowed down a little when she neared the elderly woman. “Can you help…” Ericka stopped when she noticed the woman hadn’t moved once. Slowly, Ericka reached out a hand and tapped her on the shoulder. Immediately, the old woman shot backwards and revealed her face to Ericka for the first time.

“Oh my…” Ericka managed to choke out before she had to keep her mouth shut for fear of vomiting. The orange cloth flew away to reveal a face with half of its flesh missing to reveal torn muscle. The other half of the face had gray, peeling skin and a pale eye that rolled backwards in the head. Her hair seemed to be embedded in her skin. A few strands managed to escape and dangled wildly in the air exposing lines of blood where they most likely had been.

The neck and shoulders were in the same condition. Random chunks of flesh were missing to expose muscle tissue and bone. Just below the collar bone, there was no skin. There was no muscle either. Only tattered scraps of both remained on some sections of the exposed spinal column that held the top to the bottom. Skin reformed just below the hips. Long blue gray feet of this creature had blood stains on the long yellow toe-nails. The thing had un-hunched its spine and was now about seven feet tall. It lunged for her.

Ericka felt relief at the one thing she had that this thing couldn’t compete with. Despite its enormously long legs, the thing couldn’t run very fast at all. Ericka had left it behind her in no time and was back to following the blood trail. As soon as she found her parents, she was getting the hell out of this town.

The trail led up to a large store with tattered old manikins posing in dust-covered cloths. The sign advertising the store name was charred black on the first half, and all Ericka could make out was ‘INE’S BOUTIQUE’. Slowly, Ericka pushed open the door.

Darkness was the first thing she saw. As her eyes adjusted to the sudden transition of pale white light to a dim store, she began to make out her surroundings. To her left were about twelve racks of fashionable cloths surrounding two manikins displaying example outfits. A sign above the section told her that she was at the juniors department. There was some clinking further ahead in that section.

Ericka tightened her grip on the pipe and cautiously made her way down a few rows. She brushed her hair behind her ear and walked as quietly as she could towards the source of the noise.

“Shoot!”

Ericka stopped when she heard that. It sounded like a teenage girl, maybe her age or a little younger. “They don’t have anything here!” Ericka approached the rack that she was hearing the voice from and saw a blond focused on rummaging through old cloths.

“Hello?” started Ericka, relaxing her hold on the pipe. The girl jumped before turning to stare at Ericka. She smiled.

“Hi!” she exclaimed. “How’s it going? My name is Stacy, who’re you?” Ericka smiled a little at the thought of having another human to talk to. She felt more relaxed now that someone else was in this town.

“I’m Ericka,” she said. “What’re you…” She couldn’t finish her sentence. Stacy cut her off.

“That’s great!” Stacy started before beginning to ramble. “I love your outfit. Where did you buy it? Do you know if they have anything in more of a green? Green is really popular at my school. Oh, did I mention? I’m like, really popular at my school, and was wondering if maybe we could be friends? Oh God. I asked that same question to one of my other friends, and she was like, so happy. I hope you die. I got to go. Talk to you some other time?” She turned to leave. Ericka stared.

“What did you say?” she began.

“What, I have to go?” asked Stacy.

“No,” Ericka shook her head. “Just before that,”

“About my other friend?” Stacy turned her back to Ericka. “Sorry, I gotta go. See you some other time?” Stacy ran until Ericka couldn’t hear her footsteps anymore. Ericka looked down at her hand.

“I hope you…die?” Ericka shook her head. She couldn’t have heard that right. Assuming her ears made a mistake; Ericka looked around for where to go next. It wasn’t long before the blinking fluorescent lights over head went out.

Ericka stood completely still in the blackness. Okay, she thought. So the power just randomly went out. But shouldn’t there be light from the entrance door? A sound like something wet slapping against another wet surface echoed throughout the darkness. She felt her heart beat quicken. This was scary as hell.

Just as suddenly as they went out, the lights went back on. They were different though. Instead of the white light from before, a faint orange glow from the ceiling gave the area an ominous glow. The area itself had changed. Ericka heard the words she uttered in shock, but didn’t remember saying them.

All of the walls and the ceiling were covered in blood and rust. A few handprints covered one part of the wall as if someone banged on it. The floor was a dark greenish color and Ericka’s feet stuck a little when she lifted them. The cloth racks were now rusted scraps of metal bent out of shape with large rusty hooks protruding where cloths might be hung.

“This isn’t real…” Ericka muttered, and then turned around. She screamed so loud she could swear that her friends back home could have heard. The rotting body of someone who appeared to have once worked in this store was hanging off the floor by a few inches. A rather large hook covered in rust and blood impaled the woman and seemed to be holding her in place. The face was perfectly preserved with trails of blood coming from a smiling mouth. The rest of the body wasn’t. Rotting chunks of flesh dripped onto the floor and mixed with a blood puddle. A broken tag reading ‘How may I help you?’ was attached to a ripped vest.

Ericka backed away quickly. She turned around to see where she was going and stopped when she saw the hook that was only about two centimeters away from her pupil. Ericka pushed back, shaking. What the hell was happening? Two minutes ago, this had been your average run-down clothing store. Now it was this.

Ericka turned in another direction to see that the manikins hadn’t changed at all. The looked like they did before any of this changed. They stood on the raised platform just for them. The two looked like they expected all of this to happen.

Expected? Ericka thought. Now you’re going insane. Manikins don’t expect anything…

Ericka turned her back on the two manikins to look for a way for her to navigate out of this hell hole. There seemed to be a straight path back to the front entrance that she could get to after crawling around a few hooked racks and, regretfully, the impaled sales clerk. A loud scream came from behind her.

Both of the manikins were gone. Blood covered the top of the platform they were on. A detached forearm of one of the manikins looked like it was trying to cling on to the middle of the platform, as if the rest of the body had been dragged away by force. Behind the platform was a third manikin.

There were only two there before, thought Ericka. The third one was one of the manikins that had faces painted on. A large purple hat covered her head. The manikin wore a bright red dress, and stood with one hand on her hips. It was the last detail Ericka picked up that scared her. The other hand held a fine cloth up to the manikin’s right cheek. The cloth was covered in blood and the left cheek still had a smear of blood.

“Oh, shit,” Ericka said quietly. “Shit!” she said more loudly. Ericka turned and ran through the racks to reach the straight path. When she arrived at where she was going, Ericka heard a feminine laugh echo behind her. She turned.

The manikin was standing perfectly still on top of the blood covered platform. The hand with the cloth seemed to be posed in a waving gesture towards Ericka. The other hand was pressed against the face. The mouth changed too. It had gone from an emotionless line to a smile.

Ericka turned and ran down the path that led to the entrance. She ran as fast as she could and didn’t stop until she realized it was useless. Up ahead, the front door was gone. The smooth wall suddenly transitioned to brick where the doors should have been and then became the wall again. “Damn it!” Ericka yelled. She turned around.

The manikin was right behind her. Its mouth was now open to reveal rows of razor sharp teeth. Some strands of the fake hair from the other two manikins were stuck between them. The hands were both raised to a striking position and the nails had grown long and sharp. Yet the thing still refused to move when Ericka stared at it.

“Damn you!” She yelled. She slung the pipe over her left shoulder like she was getting ready to swing at a baseball. She swung with all of her strength and watched the head of the manikin turn sideways. Ericka’s eyes widened as she watched the next event unfold. The head slowly went back to its original position with a sick cracking noise.

Ericka screamed and swung at the head again. This time there was a loud snap and the head fell onto the ground. It rolled away a little before Ericka broke into another run. She had to get away from this thing.

Behind her, Ericka heard a snapping sound. The thing was probably putting its head back on. Ericka saw a checkout desk in the center of a large clearing directly in front of her. It was a closed square, and Ericka didn’t really think it was smart to stop and look for the right way in. She jumped over the counter and ducked down.

Ericka felt cold metal press against the back of her neck. Confused she turned around. On a shelf next to what looked like a large safe was a gun. It was a simple handgun. Ericka grabbed it. She knew nothing of guns, but anything to stop that manikin once and for all was good enough for her.

She picked up the weapon and turned to face the path she ran down to get here. “Shit!” she breathed as her nose touched the nose of the manikin. The thing had been about half a second away form doing the same thing to her that it did to the manikins.

Ericka backed up a few feet and raised the gun. She pulled the trigger. A hole appeared in the head of the manikin and plastic burst onto the desk. A loud screech escaped the monster. Ericka fired again and again. Ericka pulled the trigger of the gun until it stopped firing rounds. The creature fell onto the ground.

Ericka fell down to the ground with her back to the desk. She inhaled deeply before forcing all air out of her lungs in a quick exhale. Something cold and rounded was poking her in the back. She turned to stare at the safe behind her. A note was taped to the handle.

Ms. Jane and Jack were teacher and student

Both of whom had minds that were bent

“Math could be fun” said the smiling teacher

And began to speak as if a preacher

“Two and Eight are know ten

Name what was used to make it then”

Jack scratched his hair

He was almost there

The answer was wrong

As the teacher knew all along

This student was hopeless

He couldn’t even correctly guess

She tried again to find a solution

For 6 and 12 to be right

Jack was wrong once more

And so the teacher threw him to the floor

“32 minus 0” she demanded to the left,

“Its 17, right?” And Jack’s answer was anything but deft

So the teacher smacked the child upside the head

And beat him justly until he bled.

Ericka stared at the hand-written poem in her hands. Was this the combination? It didn’t make any sense. Then she started to think. The combination had to be numbers, so what were the numbers in the poem? But there were too many. The teacher was trying to use them in math, so if she combined them as the poem said…

Then I have eighteen, thirty-two, and seventeen, she thought. After every number there was a direction. So it went right, left, right.

Ericka entered the numbers. The safe opened when she turned the handle and two boxes of twenty bullets and a key met her eyes. She took the bullets. The gun would definitely be needed at some later point. She stared at the key for a short while. It had to go to somewhere in this store.

Ericka got out from behind the desk and started walking to the wall opposite where she entered the store from. When she got there, she found a door with a glowing red sign above it. It read ‘exit’. Ericka smiled and she reached for the handle.

It wouldn’t open. It had to be locked. Ericka took the key out from her pocket and stuck it into the keyhole below the handle. With the satisfying click, the door opened. Ericka stepped out into the pale light of the city. She was in an ally. Ericka turned around to close the door and saw that the store had returned to normal. Clothes hung from normal racks now and white light filled the store.

Ericka let the door slam as someone grabbed her by the shoulders. It was a woman whose hair was tied up in an elaborate style. Her button-up shirt was stained black and her long skirt was ripped in several places. The woman looked old. She was at least in her late forties and she had deep wrinkles under her eyes.

“Amy?” she asked, shaking Ericka. “Is that really you Amy? I’ve been looking for you for so long!” Ericka managed to free herself.

“What are you talking about?” she asked. “Who are you?” The woman looked confused, but she still smiled.

“Why, it’s me!” began the woman. “I’m your mother, don’t you remember?”


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Okay, the end might seem kind of dumb, but that's why there's chapter 3, to redeem myself. I think. Anyway, please review if you don't mind, and chapter 3 will be up within a week regardless.
 

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Holy friggin' crap dude. Do you REALIZE how freakin' scary this is?! Maybe I'm overreacting, but holy crap dude, you're scaring the crap out of me. I love it. This is REALLY awesome. Update soon!
 

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Thank you! This is all a fanfiction from a couple of years ago, so I have it all ready, but I need to touch it up a bit. You know, 'cus an 11 year olds writing isn't all that great.
 

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Oh no, it was alot less descriptive and stuff. And every other word was a spelling error. Also, each chapter was only three paragraphs long. Sooo...I did some editing.
 

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Okay, I was up all last night typing and editing this, so you better enjoy it. Or...or....or else.

Disclaimer: I don’t own Silent Hill, but this story and all of its characters are mine.


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Chapter Three: A Mother’s Love/Hate

Ericka stared at the woman in front of her. This woman just called her Amy, and then said that she was her mother. “I think you have me confused for someone else,” Ericka said.

“No, no, dear!” said the woman. “A mother knows her child when she sees them,” Ericka shook her head.

“No, you’re not my mother,” she said. “I came here looking for my mother and father,” Ericka tried to explain to the woman. All she got in response was a disgusted look from the woman.

“Why would you want to find him?” The woman stared at Ericka. “That man is hopeless, give up dear,” Ericka looked at the woman.

“You don’t know my father,” Ericka said defensively. “And please stop calling me ‘dear’,”

“But Amy,” the woman grabbed Ericka in a hug. “I haven’t seen you in so long!” Ericka tried to push her off.

“Get off of me,” said Ericka. The woman just sighed and kept holding Ericka. “Get off of me!” Ericka yelled. She pushed the woman with all of her strength and watched her land on the ground in front of the brick wall. Ericka just watched as the woman didn’t move for a while. Then the woman raised her head in spoke in a deeper voice.

“You stupid bitch,” growled the woman. Ericka was taken back. She didn’t expect that kind of retaliation. “Veronica, you were nothing but a mistake,” Now Ericka’s name was Veronica? “I’m going to tell my husband about this,”

The woman stood up and left the ally. Ericka couldn’t do much more then stare. What was up with that woman? She was starting to think that everything and everyone in this town was insane. She tightened her grip on the pipe and walked out of the ally. The woman was nowhere to be scene. Ericka shook her head and started to walk down the street. She had to find that blood trail again.

Ericka hadn’t gone very far when she saw a large canyon separating the street from the other side. Where the hell did that come from? Ericka walked closer to the chasm and looked down. There was no way she was getting across this. The thing stretched down as far as the mist of the city would let her see. Aggravated, she stood up and turned around. What she saw made her pale.

Two of the monsters from the ally were closing in on her. They looked as disgusting as they had then. The smell that Ericka had identified as something rotting was overpowering. She felt her mouth water in the urge to throw up.

Ericka started to breath through her mouth to avoid most of the stench. She ran to her left. There was another ally like the one she came out in between two buildings. She ran down it, knowing that those things were still shuffling along behind her. She rounded a corner and stopped.

One of the tall monsters with half its flesh missing turned to stare at her. Next to it was a new creature. This one looked sort of like half a human stuck to half a wolf. Ericka had trouble deciding which side made her sicker.

The human side was vile. The head was attached to the wolf’s half by the forehead. The entire right side of what would’ve been its face was gone. A twisted, rotting arm was grabbing onto the dirt patch it was standing on. The spine was exposed and graphed into the wolf’s anatomy. The leg looked like it had been ripped off and sewn back on. The wolf next to it had ripped strands of muscle waving in the air in place of fur. The creature stood on all fours, and suddenly started to run towards Ericka.

The thing moved unnaturally fast when compared to the lumbering giant behind it. It was closing the gap between them in no time. Ericka didn’t take long to figure out how to run again. She went towards the gray door closest to her. She pulled on handle. It wouldn’t open.

“No!” she screamed. She banged on the door. She tried the handle again with all of her strength. She didn’t stop pulling, but looked over her shoulder. The wolf-human had jumped. It was about to sink its cracked teeth into her. Ericka screamed and felt herself lose her footing as the door sprang open. It hit the wolf in the face. Ericka smiled for a second, and then ran inside.

She slammed the door behind her and breathed for a while. When her heart rate returned to something along the lines of normal again, she looked at where she was. She seemed to be in a kitchen. Directly ahead of her, a large butcher’s knife was stuck in a chunk of green meat.

Ericka thought about taking it, but decided against it. That meat was unrecognizable. The thought of touching the blade made her shudder. Ericka looked around for a short while. She finally decided to head through the swinging door that she guessed lead to the main restaurant.

Her guess was right, and her eyes met a luxurious restaurant. The area was huge, and filled with round tables with white cloths over them. Candles in gold holders were burnt down to small stumps. A massive crystal chandelier was hung by a silver chain above the center of the area. Two potted plants that had died over time sat on either side of the main entrance. Silverware was scattered over the floor along with cracked glasses.

Ericka walked slowly towards the main entrance, observing a large abstract painting on the right wall. A voice came from her left that made her jump. “About time! Do you know how long I’ve waited for a waitress?” Ericka turned and felt her blood run cold.

The man from her home that told her about Silent Hill was sitting at one of the tables. His hands were folded and resting on his stomach as he tilted back in his chair. He smiled and waved. ‘Long time no see!” Ericka stood still for a few seconds, and then turned and ran back into the kitchen. “Now come on! Don’t make me chase you!” He sounded annoyed as he called after her.

Ericka looked around the kitchen for a place to hide. She didn’t even know if this guy was following her, but she’d rather not find out. She saw some small handles under one of the counters. Ericka pulled on it, and saw a large empty space that was probably used to store pots and pans or something. Ericka crawled inside and slid the door shut.

After a few seconds of tense silence, Ericka heard the sound of the door to the kitchen swinging open. Footsteps were heard through the metal. She could tell when they were getting closer. Ericka held her breath when they stopped in front of her hiding spot. She didn’t breathe again until she heard them walking away.

There was the sound of something rattling in a can, and then she heard a spray. It stopped after a minute or so, and then the footsteps were leaving the room. The kitchen door swinging sounded again, and then everything was silent. Finally, Ericka slid the entrance open.

“No…” she whimpered when she saw the kitchen. It was just like the boutique when the power went out. Rust and blood seemed to be the main decoration in the poorly lit kitchen. She could barely see anything, but what she did made her wish she hadn’t hidden under the counter, as if that was responsible for her being here.

The lack of light was really bothering her. It was bad enough being here, but not being able to see where she was going was like icing the cake. Ericka turned around to the counter and felt blindly for something to use for light. Her hand traveled across something plastic and small. Ericka pulled it down from the space above the counter she’d found during her search and brought it close to her eyes so she could see it.

It looked like a small flashlight. There was a hook on the back and a switch on its side. It was red and rectangular. A small company logo was on the opposite side of the switch. Like I care who made it, Ericka thought. She clipped the light to her shirt collar and turned it on.

For a small light, it sure lit up a good part of the room. Ericka turned slowly to observe her surroundings. There wasn’t anything too screwed up, like the manikins or employee from the store, but still, this wasn’t normal. Nothing was too disgusting. There were a few discarded knives covered with dried blood in the sink, and something seemed to clogging it. The crimson water was probably the worst thing she’d seen so far. On the counter next to the sink were a few unidentifiable chunks of meat, but that was it.

Ericka turned and immediately took back everything she thought about this place not being too bad. Where she had seen a chunk of green meat before there was now a human arm. The butcher’s knife was wedged in the wrist. Random chunks were missing and some bone was exposed with what looked like teeth marks on it. The unidentifiable meat on the counter just got an identity.

Ericka felt the feeling of wanting to throw up return. Ericka closed her eyes in attempts to regain her composer. When she opened them, she was staring into the black abyss of the jawless-monster from the ally’s throat. The yellow bubbling fluid started to rise in its throat.

Ericka screamed again and swung the pipe she was holding. The thing lurched sideways and some of the fluid dripped onto the floor. In a few seconds it was standing as if nothing had happened. Ericka swung the pipe a few more times. The monster fell onto the ground. Ericka raised the pipe and swung down. The creature cried out in what appeared to be agony before it stopped moving.

Ericka backed away from the body. She turned to go back to the ally. The brunette pushed on the bar that opened the door. The bar pushed in, but the door remained closed. Ericka rammed against it with her shoulder but succeeded only in hurting herself.

Sighing, she turned to look for another way out. As she walked she felt her foot make contact with something. Ericka bent down and came back up with a can of spray paint. There was a black sticker on the side that she assumed signified the color of the paint. She shook the can and recognized it as the sound she’d heard earlier. That guy had marked something with this.

Ericka slid the can into a back pocket. Maybe it could be used as a weapon or something. She walked forward a few more steps and saw a large steel door. The handle to it was a wide steel bar that latched on the right side. Above that was a small sign that read ‘FREEZER’. This was what that guy had painted.

A large black ‘X’ covered the entire door. Just below it were words. “I wouldn’t if I were you…” Ericka whispered reading the words aloud. What did that mean? Ericka pulled up on the handle. It didn’t move. She looked over to where the bar latched and saw a small padlock.

She gave up on the door and turned towards the one that led to the main restaurant. This one pushed open easily. Ericka walked forward a few paces and then stood completely still.

The restaurant was full of people. They were all just sitting at the tables staring at nothing. Some tables had two or more people sitting at it while others had only one. They were of all ages, and seemed to have nothing better to do then sit the motionlessly. They didn’t even blink.

Aside from these people, this part of the restaurant seemed relatively unchanged. Ericka walked cautiously forward. Not a single person moved as she walked. This was creepy as hell. Were they dead? No, that wouldn’t make sense. Dead people can’t sit up straight in chairs.

Ericka approached the main entrance to the restaurant. The glass doors looked like they were spray painted black. Ericka reflexively felt the can in her back pocket. A small key shined in the light cast by her flashlight. It seemed like the key was positioned there for her to find it. A note attached to the back confirmed this suspicion.

Look’s like its back to square one,

Ericka studied the key for a while. Then she moved to the main doors. She pushed on them both only to feel the resistance of a lock. Ericka slide the key into the lock on the doors, but it wouldn’t turn. It looked like the key wasn’t meant for here. Ericka turned the note in her hand over.

And by the way, Ericka, Good Luck.

Ericka stared at the note for a while. This key was definitely meant for her. She pocketed the note. What did it mean, ‘good luck’? When Ericka turned to face the crowd of people again, she understood what was being told to her.

The entire room erupted into laughter. All of the unmoving people had turned there heads so they could see her and then began to laugh. They all just kept laughing at her. What was so funny? That was when she noticed an old couple. The woman was laughing hysterically. So much so, that her head fell off.

It didn’t fall off exactly. It was still attached to the neck by a sliver of flesh and a few strands of muscle. That happened at the same time that all of the others revealed what was wrong with them. Some were missing chunks of flesh, while others had limbs in the same condition as the old woman’s head. All of them stood up from there seats.

Then Ericka saw what was on all of their plates. Chunks of human remains were on every single plate in the entire area. They had been eating people. Now the grotesque scene in the kitchen made a little more sense.

They started to move towards her. Ericka looked at them and then at the pipe in her hands. She would’ve laughed if it weren’t for the fact she thought she was going to die. Ericka slid the pipe into a safe position on her belt. She moved for the gun she had since the boutique and pulled it out. She flicked off the safety and began to fire at the crowd closing in on her. A few went down, but the gun had to run out of ammunition some time, and when it did, there was no time for to reload.

Ericka thought she was going to die. She had nothing left except the pipe. She backed up to the doors behind her. Then she realized something. They were made of glass! She pulled out the pipe and slammed it into one of the doors. Glass fell to the ground, and Ericka smiled for a fleeting second before she saw what was behind the glass.

There was a brick wall. A God damn brick wall! “No!” she screamed. “That’s not right!” she yelled soon after. Ericka turned to the crowd closing in on her. There were about three that were still on the ground from her shooting, but the others didn’t care. Ericka backed up until her back was against the wall. Then she remembered the can in her back pocket.

Why not? She thought. There wasn’t anything left for her to try. Why not try spray paint? Ericka pulled out the can and popped off the cap. She shook it a little before aiming at the closest thing to her. She was surprised at the reaction.

The things immediately recoiled, holding their eyes where she had sprayed them. Ericka smiled as she got an idea to get out of there. She aimed the can directly in front of her and started to spray while she ran. She moved her arm from left to right to try and hit as many as she could. Once the things were hit with the paint, they fell easily when she pushed by them.

She was about ten feet away from the door back to the kitchen when the can ran out of paint. Ericka stopped running and looked down in horror at the empty can in her hands. She threw it at the crowd in aggravation. Erick looked over her shoulder at the trail she’d knocked down. The crowd was closing over their fallen comrades and some of the ones shed managed to get down were standing again.

Ericka swallowed the fluid in her mouth, and lowered her head. She charged as fast as she could through the remaining crowd. As she ran, she felt pain suddenly form in her left arm. She didn’t stop to inspect where the pain was, and just ran until she felt herself hit the door.

It swung open, and Ericka stood up. What could she use to stop them from getting into the kitchen? Ericka looked frantically around for something. It was after a few seconds that she realized they weren’t following her. Ericka turned to the door. She cautiously pushed the door open to the restaurant again.

The entire crowd was sitting back in their seats. They weren’t moving at all, just like before. They just sat there staring at each other in the darkness. Ericka slowly closed the door in the kitchen and turned back to the door to the ally. Ericka walked up to the door with the key in her hands.

She noticed there was no keyhole on the door, and sighed. The only place left to try was the freezer. Ericka stuck the key she was holding into the padlock and turned it with ease. The lock fell to the ground. Ericka pushed up on the bar and freed it from the latch.

She opened the freezer and walked into the darkness. If it weren’t for the light she had, she wouldn’t have been able to see. She walked forward a few steps and looked at one of the pieces of meat on a hook. It wasn’t meat.

“Oh God,” Ericka choked. It was a human. The large hook that normally held meat above the ground was stabbed through a body’s back. It had no clothes, but chunks missing from the body still made it difficult to determine what sex the hanging body was. Dried blood was right below the mouth. The thing had frostbite and looked like someone had taken to it with the butcher’s knife out on the counter.

Ericka took a step closer to the hanging body, when it moved. It threw an arm out at her. Ericka screamed and turned to leave the freezer. The door was closed. Ericka pushed on it with all of her strength, but it had latched again on the other side. There was no handle on this side.

The sound of a motor starting made Ericka turn to the body that was hanging. Ericka looked at the body as it started to move around to large freezer on the hook that was on a track. Behind it, several other bodies in the same condition were also hooked. All of them tried to reach her with flailing arms and legs.

Ericka screamed again. The vent that would normally blow cold air into the room started gushing out blood. The other vents in the room started the same process. In only a few seconds the blood was up to her knees. “Help me!” Ericka screamed. She struggled through the blood to walk towards the door again. “Someone please!” she called.

The blood was now up to her waist. One of the arms from one of the bodies grabbed her by the hair. Ericka fell in the pool of blood. After a second she stood back up, covered in blood. She ran towards the door again and started banging on it. “Please!” she cried. The blood reached her neck in no time.

Ericka struggled now to find a place for oxygen. She managed to cry for help one more time before the blood had filled the room entirely. Her lungs felt like they were being crushed. Ericka kicked the door in a last-ditch effort, but failed. This was it. She escaped the hands of hundreds of human hungry things with only a few scratches on her arms to die here. She slowly blacked out in the pool of blood.


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I know I know, not the happiest of chapter endings, but everything will be resolved next chapter! Please review, and thanks for reading.
 

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Are all the Silent Hill games this freaky, or am I just wimpy? This is really freakin' me out. >.< But it's addictive... I don't want to look, but I just gotta. >.<

Update when you can, soon, if possible. ^-^
 
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