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PROLOGUE
Yeah, I haven't wrote a story in a while, so I thought I'd try. Please please please criticize, it'll determine whether I'll continue the story. The idea for this story came to mind not to long ago, and this prologue should get you thinking Again, PLEASE CRITICIZE.
They walked through the empty streets together, hand in hand. Living on the road was tough, and each other were all they had.
“Another city, another story right?”asked Rika
“Yeah, but just how many storys do we have left?” asked Kado
Rika sighed. She always hated the first days in new cities because Kado used the time to recall his past and the incident. Another downside for her was that he would hardly speak to her during these days, feeling guilty about dragging her into what felt like a nightmare.
“I’m sorry,” Kado said.
“For what?”Rika asked
“For not getting you safe yet…how long have has it been, and we still haven’t found it.”
Rika stopped walking, causing Kado to stop. He watched her as she glanced around, getting brief looks at the homes, buildings, and stores surrounding them. She was clearly looking for something to say.
“Listen,” she started. “You don’t have to apologize to me. You have to remember, I chose to give up everything and come with you, you didn’t make me. So take as long as you need. I’ll be with you until the end, whether we find it or not.”
He took her into his arms and looked towards the night sky. Somehow, he had to find it. For Rika.
_________________________________“Another city, another story right?”asked Rika
“Yeah, but just how many storys do we have left?” asked Kado
Rika sighed. She always hated the first days in new cities because Kado used the time to recall his past and the incident. Another downside for her was that he would hardly speak to her during these days, feeling guilty about dragging her into what felt like a nightmare.
“I’m sorry,” Kado said.
“For what?”Rika asked
“For not getting you safe yet…how long have has it been, and we still haven’t found it.”
Rika stopped walking, causing Kado to stop. He watched her as she glanced around, getting brief looks at the homes, buildings, and stores surrounding them. She was clearly looking for something to say.
“Listen,” she started. “You don’t have to apologize to me. You have to remember, I chose to give up everything and come with you, you didn’t make me. So take as long as you need. I’ll be with you until the end, whether we find it or not.”
He took her into his arms and looked towards the night sky. Somehow, he had to find it. For Rika.
Yeah, I haven't wrote a story in a while, so I thought I'd try. Please please please criticize, it'll determine whether I'll continue the story. The idea for this story came to mind not to long ago, and this prologue should get you thinking Again, PLEASE CRITICIZE.
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